I LOVE THIS CONCEPT!!! I LOVE this story!! I cannot wait for the next update. James is too sexy. And I love Jack!!!
Reviewer: Daddyprincess Signed




Date: February 28 2014 03:06 pm
Good job. I love your new system of up dating!!
Reviewer: Emy Signed [Report This]Date: February 28 2014 08:41 am
When will u update again
Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed [Report This]Date: February 28 2014 08:10 am
Omg I need more James needs to realise her actual has feeling for the woman lol update please ASAP
Reviewer: Elizabeth millanaise Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 28 2014 12:35 am
I wonder if she has the balls to complain to James about him giving her Jackie not wanted items. even though he is being mean to her I still like him. I think he gave her the things because he wanted to. She read too much into the gifts.
Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed




Date: February 27 2014 05:36 am
Very good chapter!
I feel like there is a wall between James and Jacqueline that they are not moving pass. For being so perceptive James is an idiot for not seeing why she didn't want to accept the gifts from him.
I would love love love if we saw some maturing from Jacqueline though. While I understand her need to fight James on every turn she's coming across a little too childish at times.
I do hope Ace tells James about that suprise visit. :)
Reviewer: Rae Signed [Report This]Date: February 27 2014 12:18 am
I had seen this story on chamber and finally decided to read it. What a gem--needs some editing, but still a diamond in the rough.
I hope James did not have sex with Rox, but I was also glad Jack didn't give him any. The show down between the two women was sweet---if Rox wasn't feeling threaten, she would have never shown up unannounced and dressed to intimidate. Jack more than held her own and I hope Ace tells James about Rox's visit.
I really like this story--thank you!
Reviewer: Penelope52 Signed [Report This]Date: February 26 2014 11:21 pm
Girl please don't leave us hanging that long again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Date: February 26 2014 03:14 am
Great Story!! Please continue to update it!!! Thank you..
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous




Date: February 26 2014 01:42 am
That showdown between Jacqueline and Roxanne was spectacular. Don't start none, won't be none. Can't wait for Friday!
Reviewer: Aiwen Anonymous




Date: February 25 2014 02:47 pm
That awesome how Jackie dewlt with Roxanne! She shut a bitch down!! Awe inspiring.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed




Date: February 25 2014 02:28 pm
I can't wait til Friday. Jack let Roxanne know the real deal. James and Jack r falling for each other..... Yes Yes Yes
Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed




Date: February 25 2014 09:37 am
I can't wait til Friday. Jack let Roxanne know the real deal. James and Jack r falling for each other..... Yes Yes Yes
Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed




Date: February 25 2014 09:37 am
I have a feeling that these two girls are going to go down with fists.
Reviewer: Emy Signed [Report This]Date: February 25 2014 08:59 am
On Fiyah! 😊
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Date: February 24 2014 05:22 pm
This is an amazing story but the grammar and spelling mistakes are very distracting. Please try and find a beta to help iron out those little kinks and take this to the next level. =)
Reviewer: Rae Signed [Report This]Date: February 24 2014 02:45 pm
Loved the update.
Reviewer: Aiwen Anonymous




Date: February 23 2014 01:52 pm
Love this story
Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed




Date: February 23 2014 08:43 am
Loved the update.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed




Date: February 23 2014 07:19 am
nice...
Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed




Date: February 23 2014 03:56 am
I like James....
please pass me a cigarette :-)
I don't smoke either lol





Date: February 23 2014 03:32 am
Yes! You are back and this chapter was hotter than ever. Thank you! :D
Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed




Date: February 22 2014 09:12 pm
That was hot!! Armani doesn't know who is messing with, but he will soon find out. Yippe skippy I love me some James!! James is Yummilicious even if he is a criminal.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed




Date: February 22 2014 01:51 pm
I am totally speechless. I think I need a drink to cool off.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous




Date: February 22 2014 11:16 am