please update this, it's sooooo good
Reviewer: nononsense Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 28 2014 10:29 am
I love this story and it has all the hallmarks of a 10. The story progression, character development, flow are all great. The one thing that is holding it back is the grammar mistakes. There are quite a few. Please be careful. You might want to go back with a fine tooth comb and do line editing. Ex. When she dropped the bowl, you put bowel...distracts the reader. We can always expect some errors, no WIP or finished work is perfect but you have a but more than average. I do love this story and can't wait to see what is next!
Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed [Report This]Date: November 19 2013 07:08 pm
Fantastic update
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed
[Report This]Date: November 09 2013 03:06 am
Wow so worth the wait! incredible chapter!!
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: October 21 2013 01:26 pm
sexy sexy update - everything will change after this! thanks for the update!
Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed [Report This]Date: October 20 2013 10:48 am
Could you please try to update this much sooner then later
please! Please! Please!!!!!!! :-)
Reviewer: CAColeman Signed [Report This]
Date: October 19 2013 09:54 pm
Great update, can't wait for the next chapter!!!!
Reviewer: cdy1216 Signed [Report This]Date: October 19 2013 02:20 pm
OMG please say that your going to post the next chapter soon and that this isn't one of th having a dream... I think that this is one of the best chapters so far
Reviewer: keikei2 Signed [Report This]Date: October 19 2013 11:08 am
wow, can't wait to see what happens with them next. Great update.
Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]Date: October 19 2013 05:06 am
I like the story.. good job.
Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]Date: October 19 2013 02:25 am
I was so happy when I saw this update!!
Awesome update!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Reviewer: Treale Signed [Report This]Date: October 18 2013 09:48 pm
UPDATES!!!!!
Reviewer: CAColeman Signed [Report This]
Date: August 19 2013 08:10 am
Cannot wait to see what more can happen will her cousin fall for ace...
Author's Response:
I wasn't going to make Ace have a significant other but now I think I would want him to be with her cousin
Reviewer: nightseer Signed
[Report This]Date: July 21 2013 08:39 pm
Loved the update and Monique.
Reviewer: Aiwen Signed [Report This]Date: July 21 2013 05:35 pm
Thank you for this amazing update. I still really want Katherine dead. I don't like that ho Lisa she's jealous and a jealous ho is a dangerous ho. James will rid their lives of that pestilence. Fabulous!!
Author's Response:
Lol...thanks everything is going to reveal itself in due time believe me=]
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: July 21 2013 04:11 pm
really happy to see an update from you! if i was Jack i would think TWICE before playing aka tease James because it's going to backfire - for sure, lool!
but i look forward to that! thanks for the update! :D
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: July 21 2013 12:09 pm
Fantastic update, I absolutely love Monique and Jacqueline relationship. Complex but simple...thank you for sharing
Author's Response:
Thank you =] Their relationship is base off my friend and I relationship its pretty funny...lol
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: July 21 2013 10:32 am
First ur a really good writer ur charecters r complex and ur story line is sexy and just drawn out enough to keep u in suspense without being long winded and u have a a natural talent for writing that cant be taught but u could use a good editor not just to look for typos but to help u reformat paragraphs so that it flows a little bit better again i love ur story but its kind of annoying to have stop reading and clarify in my head what u meant to say instead of whats there
Author's Response:
Thank you i'll try to make it more clear and less typos in the next chapter.
Reviewer: Bigfan Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 21 2013 09:24 am
don't know how i missed the update but great update!! james is reaching breaking point and jack is clueless, loool! things are beginning to each for them ;)
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: July 01 2013 11:09 am
You are by far one of my favorite writers. I've actually began to read this story from the beginning again waiting on another update. I really hope you get a chance to add some more soon! I love this story if that was hard to notice
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!!!
Reviewer: TallyLuna Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 19 2013 03:27 am
Good Chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you=]
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: May 31 2013 10:36 am
Mmm-mmm-mm-mm-mm.
That was something else.
I know what Mr. James is gonna do once he see's Roxanne... while his love is going bang bang bang, he will be think all about Jacqueline and that perfume she was wearing. Heat indeed.
On another note, I like Ace.
He is cute. I hope he get's himself a good girl :)
Author's Response:
Yes... Lol James is seriously going to be thinking about is Jacqueline. Yes, indeed Heat indeed. I love Ace but well not have a significant other his happily single =]
Reviewer: LadySade Signed [Report This]Date: May 31 2013 03:25 am
this is getting hot bring on the fire! great update!
Author's Response:
Thank you =]
Reviewer: Skip2641 Signed [Report This]Date: May 30 2013 09:54 pm
Great job
Author's Response:
Thank you =]
Reviewer: Emy Signed [Report This]Date: May 30 2013 12:38 pm
Amazing update.
Reviewer: zoe zoey Signed [Report This]Date: May 30 2013 09:57 am