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Title: Philadelphia

I need more!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 22 2016 10:50 pm
Title: Philadelphia

Interesting update! Can't wait to see what happens next.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 05 2012 07:26 am
Title: Philadelphia

ooooo this is going to be good! I can already tell I'm not going to like Catherine.

 Reviewer: Rae Signed [Report This]
Date: October 04 2012 10:24 pm
Title: 26 and on The Shelf

Rather short chapters but the story is interesting. I will wait for an update

 Reviewer: Russian Sunflower Anonymous starstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2012 04:38 pm
Title: Team Jacob

Very interesting start. Cant wait for more.

 Reviewer: roma1 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 03 2012 04:28 am
Title: 26 and on The Shelf

Interesting update. More please.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2012 03:23 am
Title: 26 and on The Shelf

I really don't like the mother, Melody or Jack.  I would love for all three of them to be run over by semi.  Ally doesn't need any enemies as her family is all the enemy that she needs.  I want Ally to tell her mom and sister to kiss her grits and soon.  More please!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2012 02:47 am
Title: 26 and on The Shelf

I like the story so far. Very interesting start.

 Reviewer: Rae Signed [Report This]
Date: October 03 2012 02:28 am
Title: 26 and on The Shelf

26 is now old. Why such pressure from mom. Her ex probably was interested in her sister longer before he broke up with her. I'm glad she''s moved on.

 Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 03 2012 02:07 am
Title: 26 and on The Shelf

its not horrible but really short...I feel this will be a really good/great story

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 02 2012 10:04 pm
Title: Team Jacob

Loved Adam's sense of humor.  Can't wair to read more!

 Reviewer: Drea Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 01 2012 12:36 am
Title: Cast

I love the sisters of the cast.  I love the werewolves and the vampires I just can't stand Bella.  More please.



Author's Response:

of twilight? the films made Edward seem like such a punk.  though i was in love with jacob in the books, so i wasn't too upset about him. the way bella read on paper made me hate her by the end of book two. the cast picks drive me bonkers, robert patt is not attractive at all to me and taylor lautner makes me want to pat him on the head and feed him cookies lol. kellan lutz is my man...

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 29 2012 11:12 pm
Title: Cast

Nice cast. Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 29 2012 05:47 pm
Title: Team Jacob

Good start to the story. I like Adam he has a sense of humor. Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 29 2012 05:47 pm
Title: Cast

i love your character pictures! Excited please continue!

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 29 2012 08:19 am
Title: Cast

Interesting start! More please.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 29 2012 05:24 am
Title: Team Jacob

Me likey, more please!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 28 2012 10:14 pm
Title: Team Jacob

Interesting...good cliff hanger

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 28 2012 07:21 pm


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