After reading this last night, I thought I would let your story is really good. I like how it flows, and how you have made Aiden a passionate person and not sticking to all his rules,all the time.
You have a treasure in this story. Hopefully you will come back and complete it soon.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 17 2016 03:16 pm
I hope you read this review.
This is indeed a great story. You really need to complete I.
Reviewer: Mercy Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 17 2016 08:29 am
Okay, I hope you are going to complete this. Meeting the parents is always interesting.
Reviewer: d3stin2l0v3 Signed [Report This]Date: March 23 2014 12:31 am
This was really good and I can't wait for the update. It was phenomenal.
Reviewer: cottoncandy_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: September 02 2013 05:44 am
I hope you're planning n finishing this story, it's so good! It's funny, at times heart wrenching and always well written.
Reviewer: Maroongal Signed [Report This]Date: August 29 2013 10:31 pm
I love that every chapter is an Adele song! & she's making new music!! Ahhhh bless the heavens!!! I LOVE this story!!
Reviewer: TooMuchEnnui Signed [Report This]Date: August 07 2013 07:39 am
Now that is an introduction. Well done and now the other drama begins. I like that they established the grounds for their relationship and that he's able to slowly bring her into his lifestyle. Also from the other chapter...when he wouldn't tell her what he and Blair did, that was perfect. Very good call, very mature, very seperate. It showed her that he didn't think of her in the same likeness as Blair and that alone should tell Lily how he really feels about her. Well I think when he finally made the confession when he came to her, that was definitely a turning point for him. Very well done. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Signed [Report This]Date: August 05 2013 11:19 pm
I love Apple Taylor-Hawkins. She's so cute. I would love to have another but my selfish, only child cat will not share any of the room, tables, pillow or outside property that we own with another cat. He is so spoilt and there is this really cute, friendly little cat that is always playing and he's mean to her. If he wasn't old, I'd kick him out but then I love him so I'd let him back in.
Anyway, enough of me sharing info about my cat, Lily's reaction was perfect. While her reaction could be seen as childish, the facts are that they are both learning for the first time to be in a relationship. There are so many mistakes to be had. He's so sure of what he wants and that is Lily and she is unsure if she will be all that he needs. I love it, I love it, I love it. Great job!
Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Signed [Report This]Date: August 05 2013 10:42 pm
Very nice. I liked that you went back to the basics of the story. Lily is very foolish and she needed to get that lesson. Aiden is being very lenient wiht her but he also have to realize that she is very, very new to this game and that she's going to want to jump in head first instead of feet first. Maybe he should watch some of the movies with her or give her articles on the lifestyle to read so that he could answer questions he may have. That would have been better than telling her she wasn't ready and then laughing at her.
I love the dressing room scene. Very hot and to the point where he taught her what he means by him being a Dom and she being a Sub. That was a very good thing he did by telling her what he meant and showing her also. Now with the phone thing, I agree with him. She shouldn't have looked at his messages on his phone. She was out of line.
Overall...great chapter. Keep itup.
Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Signed [Report This]Date: August 05 2013 08:12 am
finally they decided to become a couple, great update
Reviewer: sandradee Signed [Report This]Date: August 02 2013 12:22 am
Sweet! He said "Mom, this is my girlfriend, Lily" That is what we women live for. We live to be acknowledged by the man we love to his family & friends! BEAUTIFUL story even with the BDSM!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: August 01 2013 12:32 am
Awesome update, they have finally come to a exclusive agreement lol. This was worth the wait.
Update Soon!!
Date: July 30 2013 10:21 pm
He finally said the g word, girlfriend! Lily got introduced to Aiden"s momma, good googly goo! Ladies progress has been finally made!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: July 30 2013 07:32 pm
Glad they worked everything out! Great Chapter!
Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed [Report This]Date: July 30 2013 02:48 pm
so happy for the updates - thank you and keep it up!! :D
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: July 30 2013 10:04 am
I love that all of your chapter titles are named after Adele songs! Was it intentional or just random?? I guess you can tell I'm an Adele fan, huh? >.<
Reviewer: TayRenee99 Signed [Report This]Date: July 30 2013 07:12 am
Good update. I'm glad they have defined their relationship. The next time some random female approaches Aiden she won't have to feel so insecure.
Reviewer: VeMo Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 30 2013 03:12 am
I'm so happy you updated this! I literally squealed!
Reviewer: Bryleigh Lisette Signed [Report This]Date: July 30 2013 03:01 am
Oh my...aiden is in trouble.....can't wait to see what he does next
Reviewer: nightseer Signed [Report This]Date: July 08 2013 03:44 pm
OMG! That is the cutesy kitty I've ever seen..
Reviewer: LadyeT Signed [Report This]Date: June 28 2013 02:47 pm
“Forward your explanation to my ass" HILARIOUS
How is he going to get out of this one?
Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed [Report This]Date: June 28 2013 03:35 am
DAMN, DAMN, DAMN!!! That was my Florida Evans impression! Looks to me like Aiden has some "splainin'" to do! Ooooooohhhhh, that is what happens when lil' Jr (his penis) runs the relationship! So, now he is really going to have to do some begging, to get Miss Lilly back! I know, he can be the sub and let her spank him!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: June 28 2013 03:01 am
That S&M was disturbing. How could he do that to her and then buy a cat to make up. I bet she didn't know S&M stood for ...beat down... A cat...that's all it took to get over having her behind beat. I wonder if she's still curious about the room. I guess she should be mad after letting him beat her down and then find out he messing over her... I'm sorry, as you can see that tripped me out. I wonder how is Aiden going to explain to his mother why Lily 's not with him or will buy his way out.
Reviewer: VeMo Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 28 2013 12:23 am
well aiden has fucked up, i'm looking forward to finding out how he's going to handle this situation, great update
Reviewer: sandradee Signed [Report This]Date: June 27 2013 08:07 pm
very good update
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: June 27 2013 07:56 pm