I just started reading this story and it captivated me from the very beginning. This story is very intriguing. Your writing seems effortless. If there were any mistakes, I did not notice, the story is that good. I will however, try to keep an eye out in future. LOL!
Happy to see positive black heroes, you don't get much of those unless you are Brenda Jackson and Beverly Jenkins to name a few.
Keep it up. Thank you for the updates, looking forward to seeing this story through.Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 24 2017 06:26 pm
You have done a marvelous job of painting the minds eye with your words. I look forward to each new update.Reviewer: Lovely Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 31 2016 06:11 am
Oh crap! Where in the world is the uncle??? Is Kianna okay? What does this damn girl have to do to accept their bond? She's messing everything up. What if they kill him? Kill any of them? I hope she remembers her training.
Update soon!!!Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15 2016 04:42 am
Girl you are stuck with his fine ass!!! Not a bad life though. LOl. I loved that history lesson. It's sad that the African American race has fallen into that mindset and that we as a people still live in that cage.Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15 2016 04:26 am
Oh wow. So he can tell the future and past... Interesting. He was going to kill Sam!! Dang girl, 6 men in 4 days. My goodness, she is eating good. Why does he want to kill Kye now? She didn't do anything. You said yourself that she wasn't tainted! Leave her aloneReviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15 2016 02:52 am