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Title: Blue Martini

I really like your story so far!!!

 Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 28 2014 01:29 am
Title: Blue Martini

Ok, there is a problem...chapter 2 reposted as chapter 3. It needs to be fixed...I can not wait to read it.

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 27 2014 10:21 am
Title: 1. Early Monings

This story has potential, but needs an editor to catch those small mistakes. They breakup the flow of the story. But don't stop writing!

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 27 2014 10:17 am
Title: Main Characters.

Ok, I like it so far!

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 27 2014 10:01 am
Title: Blue Martini

Problems with grammar and spelling distract me. Plus a little bit disjointed. Try to get more smooth flow in the telling.

 Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: June 26 2014 11:51 pm
Title: Main Characters.

I'm intrigued. I love stories like this. Looking forward to the next update.

 Reviewer: azzure1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 26 2014 02:07 am
Title: Main Characters.

Nice choices for you lead characters!

 Reviewer: azzure1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 26 2014 02:06 am
Title: Main Characters.

Hummmm, interesting!

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 28 2013 05:18 am
Title: 1. Early Monings

i like what you have so far 

 Reviewer: sandycheecks Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 17 2012 06:07 am
Title: 1. Early Monings

Not sure, kind of short but a good start

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 13 2012 05:58 am
Title: 1. Early Monings

Too short but nice start...

 Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 13 2012 02:44 am
Title: 1. Early Monings

Good start!

 Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 12 2012 11:51 am
Title: 1. Early Monings

cool! lets see what happens next =]

 Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 12 2012 10:15 am
Title: 1. Early Monings

The introduction, more please!!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 12 2012 02:10 am
Title: 1. Early Monings

Interesting start! More please.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 12 2012 01:24 am
Title: Main Characters.

Chris is soo hot!!lol

 Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: November 11 2012 10:27 pm
Title: 1. Early Monings

I can't wait to read more...

 Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: November 11 2012 10:26 pm
Title: 1. Early Monings

Good start. I'm loving Beast ! :)

 Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 11 2012 07:31 pm
Title: 1. Early Monings

promising...Love the charecter pics, they make a good match.

 Reviewer: Lindy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 11 2012 07:20 pm
Title: 1. Early Monings

Okay so far... What's next?

 Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 11 2012 06:01 pm
Title: Main Characters.

Sure wished there was an actual chapter to actually read!!! Lol

 Reviewer: cocoablue Signed [Report This]
Date: November 11 2012 08:06 am
Title: Main Characters.

Chris Hemsworth is a hottie!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 11 2012 07:59 am
Title: Main Characters.

Pretty pics!

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 11 2012 04:11 am
Title: Main Characters.

Like the cast update ASAP

 Reviewer: foxyprime Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 11 2012 03:43 am
Title: Main Characters.

Nice cast . Can't wait to read the story . :)

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 11 2012 12:27 am


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