I love this story...Please update soon. I am a fan of your work!!!Reviewer: Adriana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 03 2014 04:26 am
I truly hope you will conitue to update this well written love story. I fell in Love with Ahla & Conner from the very beginning.
Please update soon!!!
Thank you for sharing your gift with me.
Reviewer: Adriana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 26 2013 02:48 am
conner needs to hurry up and get to ahla there is no telling what nick will do when ahla tells him that she quits and now that her mama is still trying to find her and may not have g-man to ruin her plan she might be able to capture ahla but if she does i hope ahla would fight back. can't wait to read more.Reviewer: sandradee Signed [Report This]
Date: November 01 2013 11:09 pm
Love this story! I love the way you write your characters without wispy washy tendencies! They are straight forward,LOVE that update pleaseReviewer: Betsy Brown Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 01 2013 07:09 pm
Nick has no conscience. I don't care if he feels guilty right now. He will continue to harass Ahla and now he is in her room! Ahla get thT piece of crap away from you. He is nothing but a wolf in sheepskin clothing! Excellent!Reviewer: KnightPhall Signed [Report This]
Date: November 01 2013 01:16 pm
Nick. smh. He might eventually change (if you believe that I got a bridge....); whether he does or not, Ahla is still going to be singing "he's all the man I need" thinking of Conner.
Nick needs deep therapy. Some people are just evil and the only thing they're good for is being killed. I'm at that point with Nick. Tilly might as well get in that same line. I don't see much difference between the two, actually.
Conner baby, you need to get there and pronto. This is the evolution of Ahla. You can't be nice to some folks. Looking forward to the next installment.Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 01 2013 10:06 am
Great story. Can't wait for Nick' demise. I like your storytelling style, very striaght forward and to the point. You let your reader know your characters strength and weaknesses and how each of those characteristic are use to tell your story. So let Nick's karma is a bitch begin lol.Reviewer: skriver Signed [Report This]
Date: November 01 2013 06:25 am
Nick is crazy and now he's going to go after Connor to bad that is plotting and scheming won't work at least not for long. Or will he overcome and stay a step ahead like Will in Will and Ana? I am looking forward to Tilly going down, that bitch deserves to die!!!Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: November 01 2013 02:14 am
This is anawesome story, complicated. I hope Connor don't get hurt.Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 31 2013 07:41 pm
Loving this story! I love Nick's angel on onside the devil on the other. Keep writingReviewer: Tyler and Fran Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 18 2013 07:15 pm