That was sexy!
Author's Response:
Damn right it was sexy. Irish is sexy..... :-)
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
[Report This]Date: March 15 2013 06:26 am
Wow, that was one explosive (pun intended) chapter! You had me from the beginning...the moment Irish stepped into the club I KNEW it was going to be a good read. Your words are so descriptive; I'm not even into blondes but Irish is FINE AS HELL (he so naughty and nasty but I love it....and he can be a gentleman as well). This was honestly one of the best sex scenes I've read too (and I've read quite a few). You did your thing with this one--pat yourself on the back--not sure how I missed this story but I will be definitely following it now.
Author's Response:
:-) Irish is nasty...and hot as hell. Thank you for reading and commenting.
Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed [Report This]Date: March 15 2013 12:28 am
Love thi story! Keep up the good work!
Nothin' finer than a man with a southern accent or an Irish accent.
Author's Response:
You're right about that darlin' :-). I Love a lazy southern drawl....
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous
[Report This]Date: March 14 2013 11:20 pm
I'm cross-eyed just from reading this! Damn! I'm all for channeling your inner ho' in cases like this. Not every man gets to see her, you understand, but the ones who do, they must be bringing it like Irish is doing right here...lol! Good lawd!!
Irish is all like, I'm a man not a boy, don't play! Damn right!
You have to update this again...soon!
Author's Response:
Well Damn!! Crossed-Eye huh? I'm gonna need to re-read this chapter; again for the 100th time :-).
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: March 14 2013 10:43 pm
Pretty damn nice anytime I think of Irish I see Mr.Norman Reedus with his sexy ass keep up the awesome work loving it.
Author's Response:
Thank you ma'am. Your guy is a sexy bi$#!. stay tuned!!
Reviewer: toni174ever Signed [Report This]Date: March 14 2013 07:54 pm
HAHAHAHAHA!!! This was the jizzz...and I mean the shizzz! LMAO!! I loved it! Great work! I loved the build up and the tension. The inner dialogue is well done and brilliantly placed. Perfection..Now I need a cold shower and an update! LOL
Author's Response:
LOLOLOLOL......Thank you! I try...I'm working on my craft :-)
Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed [Report This]Date: March 14 2013 06:30 pm
Gj. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Reviewer: Emy Signed [Report This]Date: March 14 2013 05:58 pm
Finally
Author's Response:
:-)
Reviewer: Emy Signed [Report This]Date: March 14 2013 05:49 pm
Great chapter.. Irish put it down on her.
Author's Response:
Damn right he did! Enjoy the next chapter.
Reviewer: SandyBrownEyes Signed [Report This]Date: March 14 2013 05:49 pm
:)
Author's Response:
:-) You like that don't u....
Reviewer: Emy Signed [Report This]
Date: March 14 2013 04:54 pm
I like Ambi's "crazy thoughts". Very humourous. It keeps this story in perspective for me. Also, I'm not a big fan of urban speak (I know I complain about it often, in other stories, but it's mostly because it just doesn't fit the premises some authors present), but yours is fitting and you use it more so when the friends get together. Much more realistic and that way I enjoy the banter more. Well done. Will continue to read and leave my thoughts.
Author's Response:
thanks for reading.
Reviewer: foosrule Signed [Report This]Date: January 02 2013 04:53 pm
This short story is sure packing a punch! LOL.
Nyeesha
Author's Response:
Thank you. Enjoy the next chapter.
Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed [Report This]Date: January 02 2013 09:39 am
I LOVE them! Yes I know I've said that already but theyre hilarious! anywho cant wait for the next update. And I love the length of the updates keep that up too. I hate short updates.
Author's Response:
Thank you ma'am. I hate short updates too, so hopefully chapter will be about the same lengths.
Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]Date: December 31 2012 10:26 pm
She could just have him take her home. He'll no matter how hot he is give that man blue balls.
Author's Response:
Yes she could have but hey our Ambi is a special case :-).
Reviewer: nightseer Signed [Report This]Date: December 31 2012 07:37 pm
Shit. I love this, so fucking much.
Freaking beautiful and amazing.
ERMERGERD.
And hell yeah I peep literotica. ;)
Author's Response:
hehehe. Thank you for reading.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 31 2012 09:23 am
Great update . Totally loving Irish ! More please .
Author's Response:
Thank you. Next chapter should be up in the next few days.
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 31 2012 05:34 am
Hmm, interesting start! Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Next chapter should be up soon.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: December 31 2012 05:17 am
Gosh I love this! Irish is hottttt!
Author's Response:
Thank you. Irish is hottt! Next chapter will be up soon.
Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed [Report This]Date: December 31 2012 05:12 am
Take that, take that, take that...oh I'm weak. Ambi is hilarious. That's exactly what she needs to do though: stop thinking, shut her mouth and take that.
Author's Response:
:-) thank you for reading. I;m glad you are liking this story.
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 31 2012 05:07 am
Ok, umm...yeah. I'm afraid I'm with Irish on this one. No teasing! Everybody is grown here, so either put your money where your mouth is and back that shit up; or backYOUR shit up and be gone! What the hell was Ambi doing? She was all over the place like some lunatic. Aint that much dong in the world to act that much a fool over! Is she looking for some type of meaning here..lol! And she seems mad because he's not taking it for something more. But, why? Its a one night stand! It is what it is. No judging. In truth, they are complete strangers, and all she really knows is his name; but if that's what she (and he) wants, then what's the problem here? Actually, she seems more conflicted about her actions than anything.
LOL..Ambi needs to get it togehter here. She acting a little cray cray!!
Nice!!
Author's Response:
She is acting a little crazy. She is very concerned about what will people think about her. Especially Irish, she doesn't want him to see her as just a possible conquest, yet she was so quick to dismiss his actions. What does she want? Lol. Keep reading. Thanks!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: December 31 2012 03:46 am
Ambi is NUTS. I love it. She had me rolling.
Author's Response:
:-) I;m glad, that was my intention. Ambi is nuts and I love that too.
Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 31 2012 03:10 am
HOT DAMN.
*sigh*
Lemme just say it one more 'gain. HOT DAMN.
That is freaking all.
Author's Response:
Thank you ma'am!
Reviewer: LolaWrites Signed [Report This]Date: December 31 2012 02:54 am
OMG that was awesome. i cant wait until your next update. irish is one crazy sob.
Author's Response:
Next chapter should be up in next few days. Thank you for reading.
Reviewer: pokerdiva01 Signed [Report This]Date: December 31 2012 02:52 am
Big fan of fresh, witty, sarcastic dialogue; you have it in spades...lol! I love this!
Ambi...a mess...lol! Just do it, there is no mystery here!
Irish...cant wait to see what he's all about!
Nice!
Author's Response:
Keep reading.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: December 30 2012 10:10 am
Love it! Irish sounds delicious!
Author's Response:
Irish is delicious!
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: December 30 2012 06:10 am