Nice start...looking forward to following this story.
Reviewer: nightseer Signed [Report This]Date: January 14 2013 11:36 pm
It's interesting.
Reviewer: HumorMe Signed [Report This]Date: January 08 2013 11:52 pm
Love the cast!!! Pictures always help and seem to make the story flow better. Great start ....I'm really liking it. Update again soon please!
Reviewer: vmck Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 06 2013 10:49 pm
Love the cast pics!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: January 06 2013 05:05 am
fantastic pics
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: January 06 2013 03:08 am
Umm...Terri will take some getting used to. Having no basic compassion, sympathy, and empathy for your fellow man is kinda cold. She doesn't need to gush, but some basic humanity would be nice.That's my read on her based on her reaction; which rubbed me sort of wrong. With that said, I would really love some backstory on Terri because I would love to know who rained on her parade. Is she really that cold?
I like Laila.
And poor Daniel. I guess he knows who his friends and family really are. No one. Good to know just in case they all start knocking on his door when he becomes successful. Just know what you're dealing with is all.
Nice!!
Author's Response:
I can see why'd you think that. I'm working on her backstory right now...and trust me, you'll see why she's so cold.
It probably won't justify for her ridiculous behavior, but there's a reason :)
Thank you so much for for leaving a great review!
-Ariel
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: January 06 2013 02:29 am
ian somerhalder yaaaaas lawd
Reviewer: leah Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 06 2013 01:54 am
OM....Of course the guy is going to be a model! He has been envisioned as Ian Somerhalder!
Was a bit disappointed to because I was hoping for a new chapter but after seeing the cast pics......well, I cannot tell you how happy I am.
Update soon, please. More!
Date: January 06 2013 01:47 am
I don't know why I imagined Terri as Gabrielle Union, I think it's her whole Deliver Us From Eva mentality lol
Author's Response:
i used gabrielle union in my last story, so i didnt wanna recycle actresses. but...please, by all means, use what ever visualization you come up with. i was just sharing what i invisioned :)
Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed [Report This]Date: January 06 2013 12:30 am
Love the cast!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: January 06 2013 12:28 am
Good start. More please!
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: January 05 2013 02:29 am
Teri is a bitch, you take care of business without being bitchy!! Laila keeps Teri human. Love Daniel, I can't wait to see you casted as Daniel.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: January 04 2013 09:20 pm
Thanks for the explanation, re cougars. Somehow I thought it referred more to the age of the woman, than the age difference between her and the man?. Totally not updated with this jargon.
Reviewer: foosrule Signed [Report This]
Date: January 04 2013 04:41 pm
You definitely got my attention with this. I'm very curious to see the rest of the story so I hope you don't take too long in updating!!! Hehe just saying. Interesting cougar story.
Reviewer: Mariposa-12 Signed [Report This]Date: January 04 2013 04:25 pm
I really like this story, the premise to me seems quite fresh and orginal I can't wait to see how the story develops with ll the travelling, advertising and drama the modelling world brings, and Laila seems like a sweetheart I like her and Terri I want to more about her backstory.
Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR READING :)
Reviewer: Gundam gal Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 04 2013 01:46 pm
Since when is "pushing 40yrs" considered a cougar?. I've always assumed it's from mid-forties?. Or is this only in the US?.
Author's Response:
Hey, over here in the states a woman is considered a cougar when she dates/or enjoys have sex with men in over 8 years younger than them...
according to wikipedia (i know, such an unreliable source):
the term refers to women over 30-40 years old who pursue sexual relations with people more than eight years younger
in this case, terri is around 38-39 years old. daniel is 22. so she's got him by 16-17 years. i'd say the woman's definitely a cougar lol
Reviewer: foosrule Signed [Report This]Date: January 04 2013 11:00 am
I'm loving this story so far, I can't wait to see what happens next. Update Soon!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: blu23 Signed [Report This]Date: January 04 2013 08:20 am
Me likey! More please.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: January 04 2013 07:25 am
Great start, I'm intrigued and can't wait to read more! Love the potential of Daniel and Terri to have a relationship and put their differences aside! Please update soon with more!
Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 04 2013 06:19 am
Good start. neat story idea. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 04 2013 06:05 am
Dead at that first conversation with her best friend. I'm laughing so hard right now.
I can't wait for the second chapter. I like your sense of humor.
Author's Response:
lol thank you. i try :)
Reviewer: LolaWrites Signed [Report This]Date: January 04 2013 06:04 am
I'm sold. This has definitely caught my attention. Please update!!!
Author's Response:
*breaks out in praise dance* lol i'll try to get this story rolling.
Reviewer: juno Signed [Report This]Date: January 04 2013 05:55 am
more please
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: January 04 2013 05:47 am