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Title: one : a little bit of trouble

Good start. Can't wait for chapter 2 . :)



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Thanks, Stacie! I appreciate your reading as well as reviewing :]

 Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 05 2013 08:57 pm
Title: one : a little bit of trouble

I like it. Vesta wasn't a fertility goddess as far as I know, but rather a virgin...



Author's Response:

Oh, good! :] Yeah no, she tended to home and hearth; not all of the goddesses are patronesses of fertility lol. Achilles' would really be in trouble then. Thanks for reading and reviewing, dear!

 Reviewer: cuppacoffee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 05 2013 05:53 pm
Title: one : a little bit of trouble

i like it



Author's Response:

Thanks dear, glad you do! :]

 Reviewer: chatty504 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 05 2013 05:03 pm
Title: one : a little bit of trouble

Interesting already. I'm looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

Thanks dear, that means I've done my job well :]

 Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 05 2013 01:45 pm
Title: one : a little bit of trouble

im intrigued



Author's Response:

Score! :] Thanks for reading and reviewing, dear.

 Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]
Date: January 05 2013 08:25 am
Title: one : a little bit of trouble

great update



Author's Response:

thanks for reading :] i appreciate!

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 05 2013 08:09 am


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