this is such a great start! i love the plot and i can't wait to see how everything plays out and how Rory plays a role in Mallory becoming blind.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I was hesitant to post this but after a few run throughs, I think it's got awesome potential! And knowing me, the web is going to be nice and complex :D
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: hazelbazel92 Signed [Report This]Date: January 29 2013 08:37 am
Great start,can't wait to see where this goes!
Author's Response:
Thanks! It's a tricky road they're about to walk down...More to come!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: meme398 Signed [Report This]Date: January 29 2013 08:32 am