Let declan have mallory

This story is really good.  I haven't been on The Chamber lately and this was a good read.  Looking forward to an update.

Rory is going to have to show some positive character traits and soon because at this point I hate him. However all s not lost because I am already in love with Declan. Please please please let him get the girl. Rory can go kick rocks.

That was good!!!!  Enjoying more please!!!!!!

Girl you got me hooked so far, keep going I'm loving it so far. Poor Rory although I have to know his side completely before I can feel sorry for him.

Author's Response:

More will be revealed that's for sure. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

I can see why he is still angry because he ended up taking everything away from her and would only hurt her more. They both still have aloot of issues to work out.

OMG I just realized this is your story as well. Shows you have diversity that you don't write the same themes over and over. And you write THE best characters. I respect the fact that they aren't perfect.  And I like them anyway.  I'm into this so far.

While I was writing it, I wondered "Am I getting this right?" I often wondered  how a person with OCD functions. What would be going through their minds? How would they see the world? How would they react to that world?

My Answer:  Think about it this way during any type of aniexty attack you feel like the wall are closing in on you no matter how hard you try to breath or wait for it to pass its this fear of suffocation that holds you down and no matter how you try to fight it, it makes it worse not better. Those OCD tendency that you have come out in full force because its something that you can control even though you can't control yourself. So basically when you are in that place you don't see, feel, or hair anything. You are stuck in the quick sand and you can try to fight it but nothing but your "safety" zones help. Its kind of like Rory sees Mallory on the ground in the glass but does he really see her??? Basically the way you describe Rory's action are true to the OCD illness.  

Jeez!! I'm not sure who to feel sorry for... Did he really knock her into a glass table? Can the sister catch a break?

Author's Response:

Mallory's certainly been through it...lol

OK,  so what can I say about this chapter. I think Mallory's friends and Declan need to step back and let her deal with her past and her present the way she wants too. Rory has to be able to have a conversation with her without feeling all the pressures of the world on his shoulder because it doesn't help his anxiety which doesn't help his OCD tendency. When you are having an anxiety attack its hard to get out of your own head. Rory wants to clear the air with Mallory he wants to be able to look at her without the guilt and the horror of his actions. He is trying to face that pain he caused without having a mental break from reality. Mallory knew what would happen it he got anxious and she tried to calm him down and an accident occurred. Declan is beginning to irk me because of this need to be this protector when he cant protect Rory or Mallory from the truth or their past. He seems to think he failed Mallory but she made her own choices and he and her friends are going to have to step aside and let her face this on her own. Him going to beat the hell out of Rory because he can't control a illness annoys me. Because he doesn't live in Rory's shoes nor Mallory's but he thinks he knows, he thinks he knows what is best. This chapter was very intense. And I enjoyed the moment between Mallory and Rory. Truly looking forward to the next chapter and seeing Rory and Mallory and what happens between the crew/Declan/and them.

Oh this is just so good!  Annie, girl I bow to your awesomeness!!!!

GOD! I love Ted King, he's fine as hell...YUMMY *le sigh*

Great update , Love the cast !