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Title: Madness

But, but, I  like Thor/Storm....and I like sane!Storm/Loki. I like Loki angsty but finally finding love. Why would you hurt me like this???



Author's Response:

Cant control where the muse takes me. I'm hoping this is code that you enjoyed the fic! 

 Reviewer: Bajerie Signed [Report This]
Date: January 12 2015 09:29 pm
Title: Her Name

Read all seven and they are wonderful keep going. One word prompt: jealousy like

 



Author's Response:

Thank you kindly! And I love it! A jealous!thororo? Awesome:)

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 05 2015 09:46 pm
Title: Solace

Definitely loved this. Beautifully written. Almost wished I could experienced it for myself.

 Reviewer: KiwiBabe Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2013 05:35 am
Title: Skyfall

Not really a fan of drabbles but this.... I can't get this scene out of my head!! Wow, just...wow

 Reviewer: KiwiBabe Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2013 05:31 am
Title: Prisoner

So....could you write a story about them? I love your adds yet feel so terribly cheated by the time I reach the end of them. :-)

 Reviewer: LittleRedRidingHood Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21 2013 01:24 am
Title: Shame on me

Yes make a story out of this!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 20 2013 02:20 pm
Title: Shame on me

This was good and the title is perfect because shame on me is what I'll think if you don't develop this into a story arc. It's really that good and you have a great talent and should use it.



Author's Response:

Thanks dude:) I'll keep it on my list of things. But I hope you'll stick with me anyways:)

 Reviewer: Charly43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 20 2013 11:49 am
Title: Once

That was cute! Lo e me some Chris Hemsworth!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 19 2013 03:29 pm
Title: Once

Yay! Why has no one thought of this before! The god of thunder and the goddess of the storm! YAAAAS. Moar please. 

 Reviewer: alices Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 11 2013 04:51 pm
Title: Checkmate

Now, that's how you play chess!!  This story is sexy albeit short.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 08 2013 01:50 am
Title: Once

 

Thank you so much for continuing! I love this. concept, Storm is definitely my favorite Xmen followed by Wolverine.Thor is something sexy as well. I look forward to more one shots....or a full length story! *shrugs*

 



Author's Response:

Your quite welcome. I'm taking your hint ;) I really want to do a full length story, but I have no idea how to go about that. I'm considering it, though.

 Reviewer: Thanks! Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 07 2013 05:24 am
Title: Prisoner

it's about the on and popping!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 06 2013 03:33 pm
Title: Once

I'm a huge fan of both Storm and Thor.. I would love to see more..

 Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 06 2013 03:07 am
Title: Skyfall

Wow, that was short, it was just getting good and then it was over.



Author's Response:

It's just a drabble; they're meant to be short. I like to leave mine open to interpretation. A thought; if you were to imagine the plot around that scene, what would you say was going on? Push yourself to imagine.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 06 2013 12:19 am
Title: Once

Storm is my favorite character of the Xmen and I have felt cheated with the way they have her portrayed in the movies. She's the wind rider and I've seen her only fly twice in all the films. Hell Magneto and the Phoenix have had more hang time then she has. Well, I like your concept and what a pairing it would be. Thor is the God of Thunder and Storm is considered a demi Goddess of the Elements. I hope you continue even though there aren't many reviews you have had a lot of people reading it. Hopefully you will let your muse loose and go for it:D Thanks



Author's Response:

Agreeance, all the way through. I had this thought of these two a long time ago, and since I adore Thor and Storm, I just figured it was good to start small with these two. :)

 Reviewer: charly43 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 05 2013 11:14 pm
Title: Once

Lol, poor thing. I could see him saying this though.



Author's Response:

Lol it's the cheesiest thing out there, I'm sure it'd be his first line.

 Reviewer: Shae Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 05 2013 07:40 pm
Title: Once

Loving it all ready, please don't say that it ended there. I need more!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 04 2013 07:19 pm
Title: Once

Yes more

 Reviewer: KnightPhall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 04 2013 12:27 pm


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