Whoo I am loving this already but no surprise it is written by a genius can't wait til the meeting!!!!!
Author's Response:
LOL I don't know about that genius stuff, but I'm glad you're enjoying it. More is coming soon.
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed
[Report This]Date: February 06 2013 10:38 pm
OMG!! I love it as I have all your stories. Please update soon. :)
Author's Response:
More is coming!
Reviewer: Toniab Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 06 2013 10:30 pm
Please update more? :)
Author's Response:
More is coming! The muse won't let this one go.
Reviewer: QueenJay Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 06 2013 10:05 pm
This is starting off well. It kind of sucks that I have to wait until your finish the other ones before you update this one, but I will still support it when you do get back to this one. My only criticism of some of your other stories I read were that the side characters soon became the main characters and I felt too much emphasis was being taken away from the people in love, but nevertheless I think you are a great writer and I enjoy reading all of your works. I like this story because it's such an original concept. I've never met a guy who's a germophobe, so it adds something extra to the plot. Like will he be able to touch his children without freaking out, etc. The parent situation is similar to acceptable lies, but different at the same time because he listened to his parents and dumped her the first time, so I'm interested in seeing whether they will come around a lot.
Anyways, sorry for the rambling comment. I cannot wait until you update again!
Author's Response:
You are right about secondary characters becoming a focus in my stories sometimes. It's that damn muse. she gets a wild hair up her butt and I can't control her. LOL Right now my mind is still sort of blank on "Good things" so you may just get your wish with another update. The muse wants what the muse wants.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 06 2013 10:00 pm
"O" 4 Osum! (it's a kiwi joke)... LOVE IT! so much to take in and it's only the first chapter... sitting on edge waiting to see Jayden & Tamaeya's reunion - so hard to grow some balls and tell your parents straight what's what - good to see he's finally done it!
Author's Response:
Jayden is going to have to make a decision real soon. More is coming soon.
Reviewer: Mary P Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 06 2013 09:57 pm
I sm alreasy hooked Brenda!! Looking forwaes to reading more and I also want to see hiw Jayden makes up foe his transgressions against Tamaeya. Especialluy since he still has feelinfs for her and Tamaeya is srill feeling Jayden.
Ao awesome!!!
Author's Response:
PM, you are so sweet. Thanks for all your support. More is coming and soon!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: February 06 2013 09:54 pm
Wow this going to be good. I wonder what he going to do or say when he see her and the kids? He should stand up for himself he loved the girl but you going the let your mother and father rule your life smh.Thank for the update.
Author's Response:
Yeah, theres going to be a major conflct. More is coming!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: February 06 2013 09:54 pm
Wow! This is fantastic so far! I cant wait to see how the meeting between Jayden and Tam will go.
Author's Response:
It's going to be something, so stay tuned!
Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 06 2013 09:52 pm