Ugh, Tam is trifling. She's kind of turning into a truly nasty human being. Okay, so the guy who knocked you up made a bet to go out with you. It's hurtful, but in the long run it doesn't really justify not telling him you were pregnant. It's like, "Just grow up, Tam." Now she's trying to keep the kids from their grandparents who are trying to make up for their mistakes? It's not like she can't supervise all their visits. If she was so worried then she could just hang out when the kids are with Jason and Nancy. Tam is being dumb. I don't know how much more of her I can take.
Reviewer: tens Signed [Report This]Date: April 30 2013 04:39 am
I don't particularly like Tam. I like the story, but I really don't connect the female lead character. She really is a bit unforgiving.
Reviewer: cheer jam Signed [Report This]Date: April 27 2013 03:04 pm
Why can't another woman come into the picture for Jayden? Seems Tam is using the kids to hurt his parents. Tam's behavior toward Dana is uncaring and there is a 'so what, she will get over it attitude'. Yep, she is hitting a nerve and time for someone else to come in to the picture for Jayden. Tam's actions and stubborness is going to cause her to wind up raising three kids by herself.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: April 27 2013 06:02 am
u rock love it more soon 5*****
Reviewer: faye Anonymous
[Report This]Date: April 27 2013 04:10 am
Yeah, Tam is reall working my nerves. She's not trying to give Nancy a chance.
Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed
[Report This]Date: April 26 2013 11:18 pm
I love this story, I feel sorry for Dana at the moment. I think Tam was a little hard on her, it's her grandmother afterall. racist, verbally abusive to her son but a different new being to the children. he kids have not seen what she fears nd chances are they won't because she's preventing a relationshp between the kids and grandparents the same way she did their father.Selfishness is a very common thing especially when disguised by powerful emotionsuch as pain and betrayal.She needs to give a little too, past expirience says she shouldn't I know but I don't think you can truly grow if you are chained by the past. My two cents...Thanks for a great read.
Reviewer: Lindy Signed [Report This]Date: April 16 2013 07:02 pm
Tam really worked my nerves this chapter.. I understand she's upset with Jayden parents but she shouldn't keep the kids from them.. She shouldn't say negative things about them in front of the kids that was just wrong.. Her behavior made her no better than Nancy..
Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed [Report This]Date: April 15 2013 03:21 am
You are going to have me hooked on another story.
Reviewer: 1nadali Signed [Report This]Date: April 15 2013 03:14 am
OMG loved the update; these twins are so funny and entertaining. Love that Dana has faith that can move mountains, and Jay is not too far behind her...lol...
So our Jayden is finally awake; good, now he can help bring his family together; his children have started the good work, now I guess it's up to him to complete it.
I understand that Tam warming up to Jayden's parents will take time; I just hope they can at least be civil towards each other for Jayden's sake, so he doesn't feel the extra strain and tension.
Loving this story!
Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed
[Report This]Date: April 07 2013 08:20 am
Mmmmm, this is good! Moving on to Chapter 2.
Reviewer: LadySade Signed [Report This]Date: April 06 2013 02:51 am
Correction: Sen/Chihiro
Watch the movie! You'll be amazed at the similarities between Chihiro and Dana.
Reviewer: tens Signed [Report This]Date: April 06 2013 01:53 am
Hi!
I really like your story so far and think it is really great. I was just wondering what made you decide to factor in a character so heavily religious. I'm not implying that it is a bad thing, yet I feel as if it distracts from the storyline. Again I am a big fan of yours and enjoy your writing.
Author's Response:
I have written all kinds of stories, some with religion and some barely mentioning it. It's just where my muse took me. Dana is a bit over the top, I know. LOL Her mother tries to reel her in. There are all kinds of people in this world, good, bad, some religious and others not. Sorry if you feel it's distracting, but I appreciate you reading and reviewing my work.
Reviewer: Kiki88 Signed [Report This]Date: April 05 2013 05:09 pm
lazarus come forth!!!! love it love it! i feel like it should have been mary, martha and dana lol!!
Reviewer: sunsetdawn Signed [Report This]Date: April 05 2013 03:24 pm
Great chapter
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: March 30 2013 05:16 am
this was an awesome update.....glad ur back! Miss Dana is going 2 convert the whole Winston family! (they need it lol)
Reviewer: skip2641 Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 29 2013 09:58 pm
How can you stop there???? I love Dana. She is just want that family needed to being them together. I can't wait for the kids to visit Jayden in the hospital and Dana to pray over him an annoit him with her holy oil.
Awesome update as usually.
Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed [Report This]Date: March 29 2013 03:58 pm
Please oh please update soon. ...the suspense is craziness wrapped in paranoia lol!
Reviewer: sunsetdawn Signed [Report This]Date: March 28 2013 05:31 am
I'm missing my this story. I need my fix ASAP!!!!!
Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed
[Report This]Date: March 25 2013 12:10 am
HEY I'M MISSING THIS STORY COME BACK SOON I NEED MORE
Reviewer: FAYE Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 24 2013 02:06 am
I don't want to rush you, but...No. I'm going to stop lying. Yes, I do. I love this story. Are you updating, soon? I feel as though I am going through withdrawal symptoms, waiting for Tamaeya to kick his mother's narrow behind. Pleae, please, please, pretty please with a cherry on top, update as soon as you can.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. Yes, I'm working on the update as we speak. It should be out by Sunday, so hold on for a bit longer. LOL More is coming!
Reviewer: Noelle Vonham Signed [Report This]Date: March 09 2013 03:46 am
Great chapter! Next chapter now please!
Reviewer: Apple Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 05 2013 02:00 am
Jayden's mother is a wrong 'un. She can try to explain it away, but she's wrong, wrong wrong.
Love it. Can't wait for the next chapter in this saga!
Author's Response:
There's more going on than meets the eye. More is coming soon!
Reviewer: kemistry Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 05 2013 12:31 am
I forgot to rate :D
Reviewer: Anni Grey Signed [Report This]Date: March 03 2013 03:59 am
I absolutely love this story. I hope jayden can be strong and go against his parents. Great chapter anyway.
Reviewer: SandyBrownEyes Signed [Report This]Date: March 03 2013 02:09 am
Awww I just loved how the chapter ended. Dana looks like his grandma! I'm glad that he have something to remind him of her.
Brenda, girl... u did it again!!! Love this story!
Reviewer: hazelbazel92 Signed [Report This]Date: February 27 2013 12:20 am