OK NOW THESE HASVE BEEN SOME CRAZY AWESOME UPDATES B/C I LOVEE THIS STORBUT I HAVE A PROBLEM WHAT ABOUT THE INVISIBLE BOYFRIEND SHE HAS WHY HASN'T SHE COME CLEAN ESPECIALLY AFTER ADMITTING WHAT HE DOES TO HER & that she was crazy horney i think it should have been discussed & put to rest then, before she gave him the best blo of his life. but i'm glad he's growing closer to his kids thus closer to her & finally finding the root of his problem which will be easier by just looking into his lil girls eyes that are a reminder of his beloved grammy can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response:
Yes, the do need to discuss the invisible boyfriend. Jayden has figured out that there isn't one, but Tam is still trying (unsuccesfully) to keep him at arms length. More is coming and thanks for the review!
Reviewer: kvgurl Signed [Report This]Date: February 26 2013 04:34 am
Ten year old twins, now is the time to be a man and take care of his responsibilities. I would have called him a long time ago.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 25 2013 10:38 pm
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Reviewer: mjfan Signed [Report This]
Date: February 25 2013 05:08 pm
this story is awesome......U rock!
Reviewer: Skip2641 Signed [Report This]Date: February 25 2013 05:13 am
I love this story. More please. Love the way Jayden is fighting for his family.
Reviewer: Karmal Signed [Report This]Date: February 23 2013 07:46 am
I've enjoyed all of your stories. This new one has not disappointed at all. I'm glad that Jayden is onto his mom's plan. I found myself LOL througout this entire chapter. The twins are hilarious! Between Jay trying to conspire to go swimming at the pool and Dana calling everyone a heathen and wanting to use holy oil on everything it is too funny. I'm happy to see Jayden atleast trying to make an effort to have a relationship with his kids and hopefully Tam. Can't wait to see how the rest of the visit goes.
Author's Response:
Nancy is very selfish and doesn't know how to be a Mom and Jayden has suffered because of it. More is coming soon!
Reviewer: Butterfly943 Signed [Report This]Date: February 14 2013 04:22 am
Nancy and Jason will be in for a rude awakening, Jayden will fight his demons for his family! He is going to find his backbone and bone Tamaeya at the same time. He understands who he's dealing with in his parents. Most interesting!! Tamaeya needs to check Dana as she is getting mighty disrespectful and judgemental in the name of religion! She needs to take control of Jay and edpecially Dana's religious educational. Her behavior ain't cute. For goodnesd sake take that damn oil! Hound doggy this story is good.
Author's Response:
Yes Nancy and Jason, especially Nancy are in for a rude awakening. Jayden is determined to do this. As for Dana, she's just a little over zealous. Once Sonya told her how to get rid of the bully she was dealing with in school, Dana just ran with it. She was already going to church (remember Jay said that Baptist's and Pentacostals shouldn't mix)so now she figures that she knows how to 'get the devil' out of people. She feels that she can help her Dad get better. LOL Don't worry, Tam has checked her and she won't use the oil without Jayden's permission. Hee hee. More is coming!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: February 14 2013 01:42 am
I'm loving the twins.. They remind me of my twins.. They say whatever they are thinking.. Dana, is a mess.. She's gonna lay hands on Jayden..
Looking forward to the next chapter..
Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed [Report This]Date: February 14 2013 01:30 am
Tam should have prepared him a bit more for the kids. Dana is a mess and so is Jay. They are cracking me up! I hope Jayden takes those pills and loosens up. He is going to have to adjust quickly to protect his family from his parents pretty soon, I'm sure.
Reviewer: Apple Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 14 2013 12:59 am
this is great.....those twins r 2 funny! i wonder if Dana will sneak her holy oil on her dad anyway! i can't wait 2 c what happens next....looking forward 2 their week long visit i know it's going 2 b funny and scary!
Author's Response:
More is coming. No oil yet...but keep reading. LOL
Reviewer: Skip2641 Signed [Report This]Date: February 13 2013 09:31 pm
Too full of stereotypes, and "chip on the shoulder" ANGST. Can't read further than the 1.5 chapter. Don't know what kind of audience you're seeking with this story, but I'm not one. Sorry.
Author's Response:
To each his own. I am sure that there are stories on this site that will meet your high standards. Thanks again for your review.
Reviewer: foosrule Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 13 2013 12:14 pm
Everything happens for a reason whether we like it or not. I would like to see where it will lead.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: February 12 2013 12:52 am
@Brenda1257, when you say that Jason's parents are going to be in for a rude awakening...I think I kind of have an inkling of where you might be taking this....I can't wait to read it and found out. Once again, I have to say that this is a really good story...and I check often for updates.
Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed [Report This]Date: February 11 2013 09:52 pm
hahaha!!! I can't stop laughing at the children calling their own daddy a heathen. Jesus save the poor man before they meet. Brenda this chapter was wonderful can't wait for another update.
Author's Response:
You know Dana is going to try to save her Daddy's soul LOL. More is coming soon!
Reviewer: AJ Taylor32 Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 11 2013 05:51 pm
Those children are a riot, great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: cheer jam Signed [Report This]Date: February 11 2013 05:48 pm
The whole germaphobia thing is interesting. I think i will enjoy this story! I am adding it to my tracked stories list!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: February 11 2013 05:10 am
The whole germaphobia thing is interesting. I think i will enjoy this story! I am adding it to my tracked stories list!
Author's Response:
Thanks Kitty. More is coming!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: February 10 2013 08:14 am
The whole germaphobia thing is interesting. I think i will enjoy this story! I am adding it to my tracked stories list!
Author's Response:
Thanks Kitty for following. More is coming!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: February 10 2013 08:14 am
dang! What a great first chapter!
Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]Date: February 09 2013 10:24 am
Do no resist to write and work this story further more!
On to the next chapter!
Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed [Report This]Date: February 09 2013 04:03 am
Thanks for starting a new story it is sounding very interesting and informative. I just wish will continue go into over drive u can complete within record time. I also wish youvcomplete your outstanding story. I am egear to see how it enes. NK
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review. As always, it's easier reading than writing even when the story's in my head. I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 08 2013 06:51 am
This story is so good! I can't wait to see Jayden man up and interact with his children. Do they have his eyes? It would so gorgeous! I hope that Winston mama's desire for grandchildren and heirs will overcome her racist issues. I can't wait to read more of J&T!
By the way, Judith Anonymous, the man portraying Jayden is an indian actor, named Hrithik Roshan, he sure has killer eyes indeed!
Reviewer: Peanut Signed [Report This]Date: February 08 2013 02:30 am
Great story line and I love your writing!
One question: Who's the man you've chosen as Jayden. Whoever he is, he's definitely Arabian that's for sure!
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
I don't know, but I loved his smoldering look...and those eyes. He seems a bit sad, perfect for Jayden. More is coming soon!
Reviewer: Judith Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 08 2013 12:57 am
Whoa hot hot hot!
Author's Response:
Hee Hee! You an't seen nothing yet...
Reviewer: Hawtgurl Signed [Report This]Date: February 07 2013 10:22 pm