This story is such an enjoyable read.
Author's Response:
Thank you. Glad you're enjoying it.
Reviewer: azzure1020 Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 07 2013 09:49 pm
Im hooked this is just so captivating Madame Brenda you have done it again. Please update soon
Author's Response:
Thanks! More is coming!
Reviewer: Hawtgurl Signed [Report This]Date: February 07 2013 06:43 pm
loving the new story......u always get me hooked! please update soon, i'm being greedy because i love ur writing!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm glad youre enjoying the story.
Reviewer: Skip2641 Signed [Report This]Date: February 07 2013 03:53 pm
Brenda, this is another great story. I can't wait to read more of these characters.
Author's Response:
It'll come slowly but surely. thanks for reading.
Reviewer: nightseer Signed [Report This]Date: February 07 2013 03:30 pm
yay! new story! Love the setup. You've packed so much in this one chapter. I am looking forward to posts. is tomorrow too soon? LOL.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: cuppacoffee Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 07 2013 12:01 pm
I see you have started another great story for us to enjoy. I am excited and can't wait where you take us.
I enjoyed chapter 1 so far and found it very interesting.
I hope to see another update soon.
Thank you for sharing.
Author's Response:
Thanks Kat: I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: February 07 2013 09:34 am
WEll he's a class A jerk.
Author's Response:
Yeah, but Jayden wants to change his evil ways. LOL
Reviewer: Nessa Bale Signed [Report This]Date: February 07 2013 06:57 am
I'm really glad you gave into your muse, can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
The muse has a way of getting what it wants Lady T. More is coming soon~!
Reviewer: LadyeT Signed [Report This]Date: February 07 2013 05:41 am
Excellent!!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 07 2013 05:24 am
And instantly, I'm hooked! Can't wait to see what kind of sparks fly between Jayden and Tam. She's already admitted to herself that she was in love with him and if that necklace is any indication, that she never fell out of love. She's angry that he didn't choose their love over the status quo.
The story promises to be a rollercoaster of emotions.
Phenomenal start!
Author's Response:
Thanks Annie: I love your stories so your review means a lot! Looking forward to your next update!
Reviewer: Anni Grey Signed [Report This]Date: February 07 2013 04:21 am
Wow!!! I'm definitely looking forward to the next chapter.. I'm sure this story will be as good as the others.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review!
Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed [Report This]Date: February 07 2013 02:47 am
love it!
Author's Response:
Thanks! More is coming soon.
Reviewer: silentwriter Signed [Report This]Date: February 07 2013 02:41 am
How could you do this to me? Don't get me hooked on this story. I already envy your ability tell a beautiful story. Now you tease me with this golden nugget. I love the characters. I love jayden.
Reviewer: Eclectic Charms Signed [Report This]Date: February 07 2013 02:12 am
Thank you for making my day. Your stories always put a smile on my face and this little gem is just pure heaven.
I am already roting for Tam and Jayden. I am eagerly anticipating the nex update.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for your review. More is coming soon!
Reviewer: juno Signed [Report This]Date: February 07 2013 02:03 am
Love it.... I cant wait until the next update.
By the way... the male lead is one of my favorite Bollywood actors... good eye, BJ... he is tooo sexy!!
Author's Response:
I just loved his picture. He seemed to be right on point. I didn't know his name, though.
Reviewer: mustang_writer Signed [Report This]Date: February 07 2013 01:38 am
Oooohh! Goody goody! More please.
This is good. Would love to see how this turns out...
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! More is coming soon.
Reviewer: amlaamar Signed [Report This]Date: February 07 2013 01:33 am
Noooo! The chapter is over. I really want to know what happens next!
I loved it, as I always love your stories. Wow...I'm so annoyed with Jayden's parents assuming the worst. But what can you expect from narrow minded racists? Jayden was clearly a whimp and decided to be miserable instead of being happy. I wonder whether he'll be able to stand up to his parents when he'll try to get things right with the love of his life.
I really hope that Tamaeya will not make it easy for him. He needs to work extra hard to get back in her good graces.
I really want to meet the two kids. :D
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Jayden thought at that time that his parents were all that he had. They knew of his condition and he felt that they accepted him and loved him anyway. He wasn't so sure about Tam. This is how they controlled him all those years. Now things are going to change because he has children to consider.
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Adi Milano Signed [Report This]Date: February 07 2013 01:16 am
Love it...great beginning, please update soon
Author's Response:
Memo from the muse: More is coming!
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: February 07 2013 12:25 am
Awesome beginning can't wait till the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks! More is coming soon.
Reviewer: SandyBrownEyes Signed [Report This]Date: February 07 2013 12:10 am
why are you such an amazing author! every single story you write is just fabulous! can not wait for the next update! great chapter, because I really want to see how Jayden gets back in to Tamaeya's good books!
Author's Response:
You guys really humble me. The muse has slamed and locked the door on "Good Things" so you may just get another update soon.
Reviewer: chatty504 Signed [Report This]Date: February 07 2013 12:02 am
How could you do this to me? Don't get me hooked on this story. I already envy your ability tell a beautiful story. Now you tease me with this golden nugget. I love the characters. I love jayden.
Author's Response:
I sorry. don't mean to tease. Muse is on fire with this story so you will more than likely get your wish. More is coming soon.
Reviewer: Eclectic Charms Signed [Report This]Date: February 06 2013 11:47 pm
Always a tale that grabs you from the start. Your stories are not typical and enjoyable for the reader. Thank you
Author's Response:
Thanks for the lovely review!
Reviewer: Luv2Read Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 06 2013 11:46 pm
This is just the first chapter but man this is so good! I can't wait to read the rest.
Author's Response:
Thanks. More is coming!
Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed [Report This]Date: February 06 2013 11:43 pm
Good start. Can't wait to read more .
Author's Response:
More is coming!
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 06 2013 11:12 pm
Amazing concept. I love how your secondary characters shape the main ones.
Patiently waiting for the reunion.
Thanks for shariing your talent.
Author's Response:
Reunion is coming and it's going to be a doozy.
Reviewer: siennagray Signed [Report This]Date: February 06 2013 10:56 pm