I love that the first person that Thalia sees upon arriving home is her father. Kenzie is trip and needs knock upside the head! Looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response:
I liked the hesitation she took up as well, it seemed more realistic than her running straight to him out the truck. And girl, yes she does! Kennie'll have more than she bargained for. Thanks again for reading as always!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
[Report This]Date: March 12 2013 02:56 am
Thanks for the update! I'm looking forward to the reunion as well.
Author's Response:
No worries, hun! Glad I could update, even after it was a few days and with such a short entry :/ Thanks for your continuous reading and reviews as well!
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 11 2013 11:25 am
I can't wait to see how the reunion goes.
Author's Response:
Me, either! Thanks for staying tuned as always, shug :]
Reviewer: dgreen1980 Signed [Report This]Date: March 11 2013 07:20 am
Really not a fan of sons of anarchy but I love the gritty undertone in your plot. Your writing is a bit detailed... too detailed on occasion... but I honestly love it. Would love reading more of this!
Author's Response:
Thanks much for reading! Yes, it's known for a bit of a "victorian" approach [as per one of my girlfriends], and I'm still working on cutting out the excess. It's a work in progress, but thanks for noticing! Sometimes I wonder if it comes to anyone else's attention? But I'm glad I could strike to your liking, and hope I have more for you to enjoy!
Reviewer: Saria Anonymous
[Report This]Date: March 07 2013 07:06 am
So happy to see an update for this story. I'm a fan of your writing and you didn't dissapoint. Methinks Kennie is gonna get her a** whipped. lol
Author's Response:
I'm so pleased I can keep you on your toes, and that my writing keeps it coming for you :] Honestly, that's one of the kindest compliments I've been given! Thanks so much for reading as always!
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 07 2013 05:30 am
Why is Kennie with the rival gang? Why Rogue believe that he could best House? What was the point of destroying the dinner? Afterall he did get the security tapes. What about the motel, I guess that that he used an alias and paid in cash? I love this story even with criminal aspect! So splendiforous!!!
Author's Response:
Hahaha thanks so much for reading as always, shug! :D All questions are sure to be answered!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: March 06 2013 02:00 pm
You are definitely giving me my SoA fix until the new season starts. Thought the confrontation went really well. I can't wait for her to get to Darming to see what kind of reception she gets.
Author's Response:
OMFG I just now finished illegally torrenting properly obtaining season 5; I'm sorry, but I couldn't wait for Netflix to get their shit together xD And good! I wanted to put light on the severity of the situation without making it too chaotic to read, so I hoped I got somewhere in that ballpark. Next chapter they finally make it to Darming, so hold on tight! Thanks for reading, hun!
Date: March 06 2013 07:47 am
I enjoyed getting the backstory on the Shannen clan. When will we find out though what caused the rift b/t her and her mother and her and the club?
Author's Response:
Thanks, I wanted to give an idea of how they started and where the children's mindsets originated from [since they all juxtapose in so many different ways]. And the origins of the rift between Thalia and Syblee and Thalia and the Saxon Horde unfolds on its own; there are different pieces that wrap into one ugly mess :[
Thanks for reading, hope I didn't cause too many questions :]
Reviewer: dgreen1980 Signed [Report This]Date: March 04 2013 12:12 am
Wow, Syblee liked to share her goodies! That is just that only two of kids have the same father and he was no good adulterer. I am glad that Syblee got herself together and found true love. I love th is story!!!
Author's Response:
-laugh!- She was a wild one, no doubt about it. And me, too; it was about time she pulled herself together and was a mother to her children! And yaaaaay I'm so glad you like it! Hope I can keep delivering :D Again, thanks for reading, doll!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: March 03 2013 03:03 pm
I am very excited about this story so far. I love the way that you write and the way Luenell recounted her family history reminds me of the mattet-of-fact way my granny used to tell hers. I'll hapily read more.
Author's Response:
Yaaaay! Thanks so much for reading, and I'm glad I can write so that it's to your enjoyment! I tried to portray Lunelle in a fashion that was akin to how my Mamama would tell stories, too, so I hope I hit the nail close to the head :] Hope I have more for you to enjoy!
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 03 2013 01:25 pm
This Is Going Really Well, any Updates soon for M0th . Also I was Wondering if you actually did finish the first version of Mother Of the Heir, I was wondering If She Was Rescued
Author's Response:
Thanks so much, hun! And it's funny you should ask about MOTH; I have so much written for it, and yet I wonder how incredibly lost I would make my FictionPress/Chamber readers if I were to just throw what I have up in an update. The first version I did finish, but with reservations. The revamp I put up this most recent time [which is actually the fourth revamp, believe it or not] fills in a lot of holes in the plot and cleans up messy, unpolished, and frayed characters and plot threads. Haha I would love to share, but it would give away the storyline :]
Again, thanks for reading. And it's always encouraging to see old MOTH readers still exist. Makes me poke at my muse lol
Reviewer: tyvm1234 Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 03 2013 10:33 am
REALLLY GOODDD! i love it so far!! keep it up, hot sex tooo :)
Author's Response:
Daaaaaw thanks, doll! And glad the love scene worked out in your interest, too ;] Thanks so much for reading!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 03 2013 02:47 am
I'm a huge Sons of Anarchy fan so I'm really enjoying this story so far. Can't wait to see where you are taking this story. Please update soon.
Author's Response:
It's always awesome to see a fellow SoA fan around! Glad I've got you hooked, and thanks for reading xD
Reviewer: dgreen1980 Signed [Report This]Date: March 02 2013 07:48 am
Ok that was hot LoL.....I love biker gang stories especially ones with a dash of SoA in it like super sexy Charile Hunnam......I cannot wait to see what happens when they return to Darming. I can only imagine how the showdown between Thalia & Maya is going to go. Is there going to be a face to face with Thalia and House's baby mama as well?
More soon please!
Author's Response:
Hahaha glad you liked it, shug! I think it may be one of my better love scenes, but I wanted to show the various dynamics of their chemistry. And I'm right there with you on biker gang stories that I can actually find, plus who doesn't love a bit of Mr. Hunnam? It'll certainly be a ride worth seeing when Maya sees Thalia, not to mention when the town finds out she's House's old lady. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Nicci Signed [Report This]Date: March 02 2013 06:23 am
love the update....please update soon
Author's Response:
Thanks for always reading ;] And of course!
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: March 02 2013 04:01 am
OH no, I hope that her sister is okay and dead like her cousin. Damn that man nick named HOuse is fine as hell!!
Author's Response:
We're sure to find out! And honey you already know lol!!! Gimme Charlie Hunnam any day -dies-
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: March 02 2013 01:53 am
House is hot, the mole is woman right?? Agent Kitani is the mole, isn't she?
Author's Response:
We haven't me the mole yet, but I'm curious to see if you'll know when you meet them xD And girl YES HE IS OMG. I just can't lol
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: March 01 2013 03:22 pm
It's about to get ugly! She's chosing the lawlessness of her family over her j ob. Her cousin is dead so I hope that she will be investigating the murder herself. Will she fall for the mole? Why would she give back the glock? Me likey!!!
Author's Response:
It definitely is! And all officers upon resigning/termination are required to turn in their badge and their gun. But let's not pretend like that's the only one she's got haha. Thanks for always reading, hun!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: March 01 2013 03:17 pm
Love the cast.
Author's Response:
Thanks doll! I think it may be my favorite cast I've done yet :]
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: March 01 2013 12:52 am
SOA type story love it, please update, i am excited
Author's Response:
Yes, it was one of my main points of inspiration! Thanks for noticing! And will do haha :D
Reviewer: Chocolatepink Signed [Report This]Date: February 28 2013 07:20 pm
love it !please keep up with it =]
Author's Response:
Glad you do! Haha and thanks so much for reading :D
Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]Date: February 28 2013 06:01 pm
I'm excited already. Please continue.
Author's Response:
Of course :] And thanks so much for reading!
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 28 2013 11:28 am
I diggin' this. Can't wait to see how this plays out!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading! You and I both haha :D
Reviewer: Elizablu Signed [Report This]Date: February 28 2013 06:39 am
The cast is butta!
Author's Response:
Hahahahaha taaaaanks :D
Reviewer: Elizablu Signed [Report This]Date: February 28 2013 06:38 am
very good start
Author's Response:
Thankies :] I didn't have too much faith in it until I read it over for the third time and realized it kinda flowed pretty nice. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: February 28 2013 05:23 am