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Title: Chapter 1

Welcome!

I love that story

If if it for grammar and the story structure i'm horrible at that but I wouldn't mind if you continue on with his :)

And update with no moderation XD

For a couple of questions I had in mind that need to be answered by an new chapter perhaps?

 

 Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 14 2013 05:11 am
Title: Chapter 1

this was so tender, keep up the good work!

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 12 2013 07:41 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I need more of Adrian, Joshua and June please.  Don't make me pull out the knee pads and beg like James Brown!!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 12 2013 05:57 am
Title: Chapter 1

I'm not one for one-shots, but I enjoyed this! Please do continue with it :]

 Reviewer: Asia Ralaia Schiegoh Signed [Report This]
Date: March 11 2013 07:50 pm
Title: Chapter 1

THIS.MUST.BE.CONTINUED!!!! Soooo romantic!

 Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 11 2013 04:20 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Good start!

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 11 2013 09:49 am
Title: Chapter 1

That was one of the BEST one shots I have read in a very long time. I would love for you to give us more chapters. It was just everything and I'm so glad that you debuted this at the Chamber. WELCOME!

 Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 11 2013 08:03 am
Title: Chapter 1

LadySade, I really enjoyed your short story, it was powerful and understanding.  Love is journey that should not be rushed or misunderstood.

thank you for sharing

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 11 2013 07:43 am


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