Loved the update!! More please.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: March 19 2013 05:58 am
Me likey!! Who was the woman at the door? More please.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: March 18 2013 07:56 am
I liked it!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 18 2013 06:29 am
I like it a lot so far.
Reviewer: SandyBrownEyes Signed [Report This]Date: March 17 2013 07:05 am
That man ain't bad to look at, he's tall, built and he's making money. I hope that she remembers that she felt comfortable enough with Colin to go somewhere they could talk to get to know each other better. Great update!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: March 17 2013 06:15 am
liking it
Reviewer: jomoli Signed [Report This]Date: March 17 2013 03:27 am
great start, i'm liking this!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 17 2013 01:56 am
nice beginning, I think the only thing that makes me a little bit uninterested is nikki minaj. but great writing!
Reviewer: ncko Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 17 2013 01:21 am
I like it. I am a huge football fan, and although Colin lost the superbowl this year to one of my favorite teams The Baltimore Ravens, he is a good young quarterback. Can't wait to see what happens.
Update Soon!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm actually pretty ignorant when it comes to football and all the logistics, so if ever I make a mistake with writing something sport related, feel free to correct me. Even google has its limitations. Yes! As bad or strange as it sounds, I actually rooted for the Ravens and had zero sympathy for the other team. Now, I like both teams and feel bad for the 49ers....and Colin. Haha. I'll shut up now. Again, thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Kaye2008 Signed [Report This]Date: March 16 2013 11:38 pm
:)
Author's Response:
:)) Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Emy Signed [Report This]Date: March 16 2013 07:51 pm
It seems strange that Colin would offer her as drink when he just witnessed her throwing one at his friend. And Arianna's 360 response is too sudden given how vehement she's been about not drinking alcohol. Other than that this is a nice start.
Author's Response:
I agree. I might rewrite it. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 16 2013 07:12 pm
I like your story. The beginning is enough to hook me on it. I didn't know the football players, so I had to look them up. LOL. They're cute. I am looking forward to seeing how you develop the characters. And how their relationship goes. If Ariana wakes up married, is it because alcohol just makes her forget OR is it because she had a roofie or something in her drink, without Colin's knowledge?
Please update soon.
Nyeesha
Author's Response:
Thank you! Ya know, after re-reading it, I do agree that her sudden change of opinion regarding alcohol was a little strange. I might rewrite that certain part. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed [Report This]Date: March 16 2013 06:01 pm
I like Colin Caper back but Nicki Monaj makes my teeth itch. Love your additional though !
Author's Response:
Awe. Thank you. I won't lie, I am a Nicki fan, but to each his/her own. She also does irritate me with things she often does...
Thanks for reading and commenting! (:
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: March 16 2013 03:50 pm