Reviews For Never Let Me Go
Title: Interviews and Meetings {Part}

I feel like this trip is not going to end well for the group. Kay is crazy and wild. She needs to control that. Seriously. Maya is mean for no damn reason. How are you going to allow this man to pay for you to come here and then go off with someone else. That's just rude to me. Even if you don't like him. Derrick is just as wrong for leaving with some random. You are clearly taking her back to your hotel where Maya is going to be as well. Interesting. Aria is petty for doing that. He is a celebrity, if you wanted to be up under him the whole damn night you should have went with him. You want to dance, grab his ass and get to it. Don't piss him off with dumb stuff because you felt ditched. You told him to go! How does that sound? I think that Aria is going to see this anger they were talking about she keep playing around. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13 2015 09:57 pm

Title: Interviews and Meetings {Part 1}

Sorry to hear about you and your friend. I know the feeling all too well. 

 

I'm glad that they were able to get through the interview without any problems. I know those can be difficult to deal with. I don't blame Aria, I hate spiders too. He shouldn't play games like that. I can cause him to get seriously hurt. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12 2015 06:47 pm

Title: Forgiveness

Girl it is a mistake. Any man hitting you is wrong period. Feel bad for his aunt's situation but that doesn't mean get back with his ass. That's a totally different story. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12 2015 06:29 pm

Title: Good Times

That was a good day. I really want to know what is up with this sister in law of his. I truly dont understand why she is acting that way. She has no damn reason to, you married his brother!! I absolutely love how Aria checked that chick at the party. Much respect. Don't cause a negative scene but school a bitch at the same time. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12 2015 06:08 pm

Title: Yes or No

Yes!!! They are getting somewhere. I'm glad that she at least told him that because she was starting to get on my nerves with the way she was acting. And did Colin eat the box!!!! Yesssssss Colin. Do that!!!!!!! Hehe

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12 2015 05:35 pm

Title: Hope

LOl. I just knew they weren't doing that dance for them. Dance is serious. I'm glad that Colin allowed her to handle the situation herself and didn't force her to talk about it. It always makes things easier. You don't have to jump to her defense. Sometimes opening pandora's box is just what you need to move on in life. It may hurt at first but in the end, you will be glad you did. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12 2015 04:51 pm

Title: Confessions and Interruptions

So she was raped? I completely understand her being so cut off and guarded. I would be too. I'm guessing this Jamie character did that to her. Bastard!! He was going to teach her how to swim, how adorable. Damn them all for messing up the moment!! Give them peace. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12 2015 04:23 pm

Title: Car Rides and Motivations

Aww he changed his name in her phone to hubby. Isn't that too cute!! He is being more than perfect. They will definitely end up staying together. She is starting to act more aggressively. Kissing him first. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12 2015 03:22 pm

Title: The Dinner

He is still stuck on this crap. She didn't know who you were. LOl. So what!! Pudgy is going to get his ass handed to him. Trying to touch on her like that. How disgusting of him. Isn't his wife in the other room for goodness sake! I'm glad that they each have their own careers and goals. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12 2015 02:00 pm

Title: Mother? (Continued)

Revert? What is she talking about? What happened in her past. Is that why she doesn't like to talk about it? I'm with Kay, beat her ass now or later. Rude trick!! She knew damn well she saw all those people standing there. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12 2015 01:43 pm

Title: Mother?

That is sad. You didn't want him as a child and now that he is famous you want to be apart of his life? It's too late now. You don't get to just swoop in and enjoy the benefits of his hard work. It doesn't work like that. And why doesn't she want to tell him about his birth father? The least you could do is that. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12 2015 01:33 pm

Title: Discussions

Maya and Kay are a hilarious pair. LOl. Two sides of the spectrum. She is meeting the family!! I wonder how they will feel. I absoutely love Colin. I am down for a Disney and Superhero marathon any day!! 

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Date: April 12 2015 01:11 pm

Title: Compromising Situations

Sooo her best friend who is in love with Coln walks in on them about to screw. LO. And she faints! Haha. This is hilarious. I can't stand nosey neighbors, no matter their age. Stay out of my business!!!!!! No shame on being a virgin by the way. Not many people can say that. It's rare. I'm one too. (Does a lil dance). 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12 2015 01:00 pm

Title: The Plan

Wow she has a full plan for them. LOl. That's funny. I'm glad that Arianna is going along with it though, to help his career. She is very smart in her decisions. Not including when she was drunk of course. Lol. I wonder how this is going to work for the next 5 months. Football season is over so they will be around each other a lot more than if this happened in the middle of the season. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12 2015 12:43 pm

Title: Cast

Kay is beautiful!! 

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Date: April 12 2015 12:25 pm

Title: Room Service

Who is this chick?!! And look at the newlyweds hitting it off like that. Aww!!! I love it!

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Date: April 12 2015 12:24 pm

Title: The Morning After

Oh wow!!! So not  only did you get drunk like you said you wouldn't but you got married to Colin! This is interesting. Who is at the door? Is he going to get the marriage annulled.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12 2015 12:16 pm

Title: Meetings

It's always just one drink. What's the worse that can happen? Everything!! LOl. I love how she carries herself. Most women find that attractive and acceptable behavior nowadays and the fact that she doesn't makes her a rare breed in itself. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 11 2015 07:52 pm

Title: Changes and Firsts {Part 1} {Fixed}

What is with the inserted linguistic "O's?" 



Author's Response:

I have NO idea. It's beyond frustrating though. No matter what I do, they won't seem to go away. So sorry for the inconvenience ! 

Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]
Date: April 07 2015 01:11 am

Title: Meetings

I don't think you should be using a real person's name as a character in your story.  It is fiction, but anyone googling his name, this might come up and it seems like you are infringing on him personally.



Author's Response:

I'm sorry you feel that way, but Colin is a celebrity. He's already in the public eye. So, it's not like I'm taking some little to unknown person and writing a story about them. Plenty of people create stories about their fave actor, actress, singer, athlete, etc. This is nothing new. This is a work of pure fiction. Nothing more. Plus, I highly doubt Colin would ever, ever come across my story. 

Reviewer: Dee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 05 2015 07:21 pm

Title: Stadiums and Photographs

Dun dun DUN!  LOL!

Reviewer: Jaye Sims Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 03 2015 05:03 am

Title: Yes or No

It's okay about the sex scenes.  Even some people who are not virgins are uncomfortable writing them.  I will say, that for someone who has inexperience with them you did an awesome job.  

It's great to see Arianna let her guard down, but she's never gonna get past her issues if she doesn't get treatment.

I'm loving how you're building this story.

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Date: April 03 2015 03:23 am

Title: The Morning After

I don't usually like stories that include celebrities, but this is really good!

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Date: April 02 2015 02:39 pm

Title: Birthdays and Letting Go

i have some ideas :) lol I luv this chapter tho you getting good at this whole "deep and serious chapter" 

Reviewer: Girrrrllllllll Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 19 2015 09:21 pm

Title: Stadiums and Photographs

Is Raymond fet father? Damn I read the last chapter first!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 18 2015 02:02 pm



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