I am totally enjoying this story. So sorry to hear about your friendship.  Letting go of a lifelong friendship is never easy no matter the cause, so I'll be praying for your peace and continuous encouragement during this time.

Thank you for the update. I like this story.

Constructive criticism- the plot is good, but the characters reactions (Arianna quickly agreeing to move in b/c she said it was her fault too that they got married) was not believable.

Your female's personality that you have created I get it, she's not really impresses with guys she presumes to be arrogant jerks, check - does not take mess from anyone, check, - but has an attitude of her own. It seems as though your character is looking to get mad (snippy with her friend for dragging her to a club [she could have left! that happened to me and I did leave], mad at a guy for buying her a drink at the club, called him a fool for his effort, and was mean to the Derrick character that complimented her beauty [though in a way she was joking, but she still came across hard]). Arianna sounds stuck up. She has to ease up on the caffeine... she's too uptight. The is for chapt. 5.

I guess not all main female characters may be naturally cool chicks and I'm not used to the main character being bitchy, b/c once again getting an attitude when a guy bought her a drink was silly. It made her seem like a bitch, in reality most women would have felt it a compliment and taken the drink; declined to accept it; or just ignored the drink altogether. If you repost those chapters those parts could be edited for a more realistic dialogue. 

Sorry about the critiques. But then they're only my opinion. 

I am truly missing this story. What are the chances of a update

ok...it's been a minute since the last update Miss DQA...what's up with that?

I love this story and I have to admit that I have been stalking this site looking for an update. I am begging for an update especially since Blake Griffin is supposed to be a character. I have been running several scenerios through my head. I love Ari, her toughness, stubborness and vulnerability. I love her ex-roommates and their will to succeed. The guys are funny and Colin is a love.

I think- yes, I think this is my fav chapter thus far from start to finish.  Loved the characters' dialogue, especially Arianna. Again the layers of her persona: her vulnerability, her strength, and the hard-core facade that protects her heart - and sanity - are being exposed with each conversation. I like that. I like envisioning and interpreting character development through their story- their song, as opposed to being told who they are. (Really good job there imo)

Colin's declaration to forego their five-month agreement and form a real relationship, a real life together- endeared him to me as a true prince. And the best part...

"Sorry," Colin replies in an unapologetic tone. "So was that a yes or no to the party?"

...after he had his cake, cake, cake, cake, cake, cake, cake!! roflmao

The sex scene was very nice; it wasn't over-the-top but it definitely made a statement. Threw Arianna for a loop didn't it? HA!

Great job!

So why did after saying something you wrote "a beat" what doesnt mean?

Is it ok that I'm a little confused right now? I was behind so I was reading to catch up but how did we go from a pool party to a date? It might be my fault because I rarely read authors' notes.....

Luv the character selection I also like when my mouse pointer moves on the pictures the name of the characters show up pretty cool!

 I luv this story finally a good girl that does give her cookies away!  great chapter I luv it!!!

She's really young. People take back abusers when the old and should knw better. She musts needs to grow up a little.