Please update and finish this story or publish it with a finished book I luv this story almost as much as Beast story
Reviewer: Charming2i Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 15 2014 06:55 am
I'm loving Nico. They are both good for each other. I'm on pins and needles waiting to find out what Laura's brother has to tell her.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 08 2014 12:08 am
Too funny, love his neutral ground...
Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]Date: April 06 2014 07:16 am
Thank you for the update. Is this the 17th or the 18th chapter. I know I did not miss anything it flowed well from the last posting. Cannot wait to read more.
Reviewer: d3stin2l0v3 Signed [Report This]Date: April 01 2014 04:52 am
Step one is done. They say the hardest step is usually the first. the sexual tension only seemed to make it worse. I wonder how Laura will act to seeing her brother aftyer such a long time. Nicholi seems to have an answer for almost everything.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: April 01 2014 02:56 am
I can't wait for another update
Reviewer: luv2read Signed [Report This]Date: March 31 2014 11:35 pm
wonderful update
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: March 31 2014 04:35 pm
I am so happy to see this story back. Love it!
Reviewer: Aiwen Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 31 2014 04:26 pm
I absolutely love your book
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: March 31 2014 04:16 pm
Who was the woman watching them? My spidy sense is tingling!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: March 31 2014 04:12 pm
I have missed this story! Damn I don't remember Laura having a brother so now I must reread the story. Nicholi loves Laura he can't admit it to himself though. Laura is in love as well as she was about fo him in the car! Oh, the hotness of these two! Awesome!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: March 31 2014 12:55 pm
Oh come on!!!! I do hope you come back and complete this.
Reviewer: d3stin2l0v3 Signed [Report This]Date: March 29 2014 04:51 pm
Updates on all your work please!!!!! :-)
Reviewer: CAColeman Signed [Report This]Date: September 27 2013 11:41 pm
I hope all is well. Please update soon.
Reviewer: Aiwen Signed [Report This]Date: September 08 2013 01:28 am
The truth has finally been revealed serimg that Nicholi refuses to keep any secrets from her. He is so smitten with her that it is kind of cute. The way these two stories connect but also are telling their own was something unexpected. Laura has gone through so much in her life and deserves to be happy. Based on what has been written, her father did not love her and lied to her.
I know that Nicholi wants to protect her from everything but he of all people knows what it is like covering his tracks. He will never be able to live a normal life, but he refuses to left Laura leave.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: July 14 2013 03:52 pm
I just love love the effect that laura has on Nico...she allows him to let down his guard and show his sensetive and playful side. He lets her feel secure and wanted by him. It's true they are ying and yang to each other.
But they are too distracted by each other to notice their surrounding in public and that can/could be dangerous for the both of them. I wonder who the woman is watching them. I will be glad when the reconstruction on the house is completed and she moves in with him.
Dad is a piece of work. He had mother and daughter thinking each of them were dead wtf kind of mess is that and what kind of clout pull does daddy dearest have?
Loving this story glad to be spoiled with 2 updates.
Thank you for sharing.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: July 14 2013 01:10 pm
Great update! I love how the two stories kinda tie together.
Reviewer: Aiwen Signed [Report This]Date: July 13 2013 05:14 pm
I love it! I'm glad you are back on this story. I got so excited to see another chapter up. Thanks Nico is honest and really trying. I wonder if that was her mother....
Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]
Date: July 13 2013 01:41 pm
Your story is story is good and has a lot of potential. Your grammatical errors make it hard to follow sometimes. Please get an editor they will help you smooth out all those kinks. Overall good job and keep up the good work.
Reviewer: Anon Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 13 2013 01:26 pm
wow what is really going on her mom is still alive and her brother has been looking for her all this time i can't believe that her dad would do something lke that just because he didn't wan any girls dude you got your boys be grateful.
i can't wait to find out who the woman lurking in the shadow is. great updates and im looking forward to reading more
Reviewer: sandradee Signed [Report This]Date: July 13 2013 08:23 am
missed this story, just love it. great couple.
Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]Date: July 13 2013 06:19 am
Tell Laura what?? I hate cliff hangers!!! What are the things that Laura has seen and done in her life? Nico is trying to put her on pedestal and she ain't having it. Good stuff!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: July 13 2013 05:54 am
Things are changing, pure and simple there is no hiding that. Both of them.are secretive and stubborn that it is kind of cute. Neither of them have it easy and their lives are constantly being watched and that is what makes them perfect. Nicholi is experiencing feelings he has never felt before and does not plane on letting Laura go. Laura has alot to consider and is weary about showing weakness by falling in love.
As for the letter, Nicholi and his curiosity have once again got the better of him and now wonders what Tomaso his right hand man is hiding. Either way the truth will be revealed in due time in a delicate manner. Nicholi is smitten and perhaps that is a gift as well as a curse but either way he sounds fine with it. As for the phone call the news is intense but he has made it known that he will not keep secrets from Laura. Things are getting good.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: July 13 2013 04:30 am
Wonderful update and love how you are pulling the two stories together, however, they have their own story to tell.
Can't wait to hear the new things that will be told in this meeting with Laura's brother.
Reviewer: Mocomath Signed [Report This]Date: July 13 2013 04:13 am
And so it begins! I feel bad for Laura she's about to find out that thngs that she thought happened did not. I can't wait to find out the reason why her father did the things that he did.
Reviewer: Aiwen Signed [Report This]Date: July 13 2013 03:19 am