Please update and finish this story or publish it with a finished book I luv this story almost as much as Beast storyReviewer: Charming2i Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 15 2014 06:55 am
I'm loving Nico. They are both good for each other. I'm on pins and needles waiting to find out what Laura's brother has to tell her.Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 08 2014 12:08 am
Step one is done. They say the hardest step is usually the first. the sexual tension only seemed to make it worse. I wonder how Laura will act to seeing her brother aftyer such a long time. Nicholi seems to have an answer for almost everything.Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01 2014 02:56 am
I am so happy to see this story back. Love it!Reviewer: Aiwen Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 31 2014 04:26 pm
I have missed this story! Damn I don't remember Laura having a brother so now I must reread the story. Nicholi loves Laura he can't admit it to himself though. Laura is in love as well as she was about fo him in the car! Oh, the hotness of these two! Awesome!Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31 2014 12:55 pm
The truth has finally been revealed serimg that Nicholi refuses to keep any secrets from her. He is so smitten with her that it is kind of cute. The way these two stories connect but also are telling their own was something unexpected. Laura has gone through so much in her life and deserves to be happy. Based on what has been written, her father did not love her and lied to her.
I know that Nicholi wants to protect her from everything but he of all people knows what it is like covering his tracks. He will never be able to live a normal life, but he refuses to left Laura leave.Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 14 2013 03:52 pm
I just love love the effect that laura has on Nico...she allows him to let down his guard and show his sensetive and playful side. He lets her feel secure and wanted by him. It's true they are ying and yang to each other.
But they are too distracted by each other to notice their surrounding in public and that can/could be dangerous for the both of them. I wonder who the woman is watching them. I will be glad when the reconstruction on the house is completed and she moves in with him.
Dad is a piece of work. He had mother and daughter thinking each of them were dead wtf kind of mess is that and what kind of clout pull does daddy dearest have?
Loving this story glad to be spoiled with 2 updates.
Thank you for sharing.Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]
Date: July 14 2013 01:10 pm
Your story is story is good and has a lot of potential. Your grammatical errors make it hard to follow sometimes. Please get an editor they will help you smooth out all those kinks. Overall good job and keep up the good work.Reviewer: Anon Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 13 2013 01:26 pm
wow what is really going on her mom is still alive and her brother has been looking for her all this time i can't believe that her dad would do something lke that just because he didn't wan any girls dude you got your boys be grateful.
i can't wait to find out who the woman lurking in the shadow is. great updates and im looking forward to reading moreReviewer: sandradee Signed [Report This]
Date: July 13 2013 08:23 am
Things are changing, pure and simple there is no hiding that. Both of them.are secretive and stubborn that it is kind of cute. Neither of them have it easy and their lives are constantly being watched and that is what makes them perfect. Nicholi is experiencing feelings he has never felt before and does not plane on letting Laura go. Laura has alot to consider and is weary about showing weakness by falling in love.
As for the letter, Nicholi and his curiosity have once again got the better of him and now wonders what Tomaso his right hand man is hiding. Either way the truth will be revealed in due time in a delicate manner. Nicholi is smitten and perhaps that is a gift as well as a curse but either way he sounds fine with it. As for the phone call the news is intense but he has made it known that he will not keep secrets from Laura. Things are getting good.Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 13 2013 04:30 am