Nice pic of the cast.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: April 08 2013 04:49 am
Roflmao, morning sunshine . That's is the most halariously horrible good morning greetings I've heard in a while. Laura is freaking awesome lol good chapter update soon.
Reviewer: SeriouslyMe Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 08 2013 04:48 am
Loved this chapter, especially the ending. I can't wait for Laura' explaination:)
Reviewer: Drea Signed [Report This]Date: April 08 2013 04:30 am
hi·lar·i·ous!!!
I was laughing so hard when he screamed,.. made my day.
Thanks
Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]Date: April 08 2013 04:10 am
awesome - waiting on the next update with baited breath - please update soon
Reviewer: katie Signed [Report This]Date: April 07 2013 03:35 pm
Her family life was hell, she wasn't abused but she was unloved by her father and mistreated by her brothers. Her mom seemed wonderful but why in the hell did she marry Mikhail? That man seems to be incapable of love. Did Mikhail kill hiss wife and blame it on his enemies? He is and was evil to Laura. Nicholi will be causing some pain to her so called family soon. I want to pull for Nicholi but damn he's a criminal and Laura doesn't need that in her life. Thanks for the snap shot of her childhood. This story is crack a lacking!
Author's Response:
Mikhail has his own reasons, there is a bunch of twisted logic behind it though.
Thanks for reviewing, continue reading and enjoy!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 07 2013 01:53 pm
Awesome!
Need more! I'm becoming addicted!
Reviewer: Serenity Signed [Report This]Date: April 07 2013 08:11 am
Her dad and brothers were assholes man but awesome chapter glad you update hope the next one is soon.
Reviewer: SeriouslyMe Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 07 2013 04:48 am
The whole chapter was ver solemn and sad for me but what got me the most was when it said she didn't even cry when her brothers locked her in a flooded basement for 2 days. An ass whipping wouldn't be enough.
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 07 2013 03:38 am
I love this story, it is sweet and sad (this chapter) her memories. Great job. I love it..
Thanks
Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]Date: April 07 2013 01:14 am
This chapter was hard for me to read. The part where she lost her innocence was heartbreaking. To realize that the person who is supposed to teach you what a man is, doesn't want you. That is hard for a little girl, especially, to comprehend. I'm glad she had the love of her mother. I'm glad she's finally breaking down. And Nic, for some reason, had to get to her at that moment. Her Dad might be badass, but something tells me, he pales in comparison to Nicholi.
I'm enjoying this story. Well done, Chica.
Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 07 2013 01:06 am
oh, please give more and a little longer...it was just getting interesting
great, great Job
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: April 07 2013 12:03 am
Just reading and it is good and great.
Many dark secrets in these two lives.
I am assuming since her father has people watching her he knows about Nicholi
Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 06 2013 10:57 pm
loving this story! laura had me cracking up after reading she thinks Nicholi is gay - where did that come from, lol! i'm not liking the men in Laura's so called family - they are probably going to be a pain when things start to get serious for Laura & Nicholi -_-'
nonetheless i look forward to the rest - thanks for the update! wonder what's going to happen now that Nicholi is at her doorstep ;)
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: April 06 2013 10:39 pm
Good chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks!!!!
please keep reading and enjoy :)
Reviewer: SeriouslyMe Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 05 2013 04:58 am
is there a chapter 8?
Author's Response:
Sorry about that because i posted the cast there was a mix up with the chapters.
Thanks for pointing it out.
Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed [Report This]Date: April 05 2013 02:51 am
Loving the update!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: April 04 2013 04:14 am
She is still stuck in the he's gay kick, what is her problem? So loving this story Nichols I is sexy!
Author's Response:
I love Nicholi even though he is just a character. Some times i wish he would materialize in my room but im pretty sure i would poison him after awhile.
Thanks for reading:)
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 04 2013 01:52 am
Very good
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
keeping reading and reviewing!!!!
Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]Date: April 03 2013 11:27 pm
I'm really liking this. And how often you update.
Author's Response:
Thanks!!! School is slow right now so i have some free time, once things start picking up i might not have that much time to post.
Thanks for reading!!
Reviewer: Stories Signed [Report This]Date: April 03 2013 10:35 pm
He's going to be good and bad for you Laura.
Author's Response:
She is going to be good and bad for him. Thats the way relationships work. Wonder if their love will survive?
Thanks for reading!!!1
Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 03 2013 08:05 pm
Awesome...You are really good and the story has me holding my breath. Laura is a very interesting character, pleas give us more
Great! Fantastic! Amazinging, job
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. This is the first story i have ever written and let other people read, so i am its good to know your enjoying it.
Please keep reading and i hope you continue to enjoy the story.
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: April 03 2013 07:57 pm
More! You are getting me addicted!
Author's Response:
More is on its way. Thanks for reading :)
Reviewer: Serenity Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 03 2013 06:58 pm
With the greatest respect Orlando Bloom as shown above, looks way too young to be late 30s. Laura needs a man with a bit more meat on his bones and a more defined facial structure.
Author's Response:
I totally agree with you, in this picture he doesnt have the muscle mass to be Nicholi. he looked so ganster so in my head im imagining him older and closer to my ideal
Reviewer: caribbeanisland Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 03 2013 02:37 pm
Great update!
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Date: April 03 2013 10:23 am