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Title: Chapter 4-Who is he

Great chapter the last chapter was very good as well

 Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: April 03 2013 08:19 am
Title: Chapter 3-First Meeting

I was totally confused in the beginning part who was talking to who I had to read it three times to figure out who tomose and laura was talking to



Author's Response:

I went in and made some changes that should make it easier to see who is speaking. If there is still some confusion please tell me.

Thanks for reading and reviewing :)

 Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: April 03 2013 08:10 am
Title: Cast

I like the character pictures, update soon.

 Reviewer: SeriouslyMe Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 03 2013 06:21 am
Title: Chapter 7-Pieces falling into place

Really enjoyed this chapter it was really good, I know I'm weird but I love his possessive attitude it's so sexy. Good chapter.

 Reviewer: SeriouslyMe Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 03 2013 06:20 am
Title: Chapter 3-First Meeting

Loved this chapter, I get sick of reading stories where the author spends six chapters getting the two main characters to interact. I give this chapter a ten lol

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Date: April 03 2013 05:39 am
Title: Chapter 1

I like it already

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Date: April 03 2013 05:24 am
Title: Chapter 1

Prior to reading I happened to read the reviews, yes an editor could help however, it isn't so bad that you can't read it.

I enjoyed chapter one, great job.

The story is different then the normal way of a couple meeting generally on sites lol, cute :o

Great work!

Thanks

 

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Date: April 03 2013 05:20 am
Title: Cast

beautiful cast!

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Date: April 03 2013 03:45 am
Title: Cast

Shyangel! You are on a roll! And i'm right there with you! Cant wait for the next chapters!

 Reviewer: Serenity Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 03 2013 02:46 am
Title: Chapter 1

i like ur story.....just wish that ur chapters were longer! lol

 keep up the good work.

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Date: April 03 2013 01:59 am
Title: Cast

I love the cast!

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Date: April 03 2013 01:39 am
Title: Chapter 7-Pieces falling into place

Nicholson slow your roll Laura ain't your woman! As long as she thinks you're gay she never will. love it!



Author's Response:

lol, thanks. He wants her, he soon might get her... maybe.

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Date: April 03 2013 01:38 am
Title: Chapter 6-Misunderstanding

Where in hell did she get the idea that Nicholai was gay?  They woman can't read people worth damn! This is going to be hilarious!

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Date: April 03 2013 01:30 am
Title: Cast

nice pics

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Date: April 03 2013 01:26 am
Title: Chapter 5-Who is she

Nicholai is asking no begging for trouble. Her father is special foreces and I hope that he taught her a few things. This should be entertaining!

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Date: April 03 2013 01:25 am
Title: Chapter 7-Pieces falling into place

Shyangel, I absolutely love your story, and the tangle web of your charachters...Great Job



Author's Response:

I love having complicated characters make's them more real...tangled webs are the best. When you finally reach the end the read was awesome and totally worth the time.

Thanks for reading 

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Date: April 03 2013 12:10 am
Title: Chapter 7-Pieces falling into place

:)

 Reviewer: Emy Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02 2013 11:52 pm
Title: Chapter 6-Misunderstanding

Great update! Cant wait for the others!

 Reviewer: Serenity Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02 2013 11:46 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Great start!

 Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02 2013 11:19 pm
Title: Chapter 5-Who is she

I love the update revisions to this chapter.  it flow with your true artistic writing and vision of the story.

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 02 2013 09:36 pm
Title: Chapter 6-Misunderstanding

How does she figure that he's gay? Because those are the only people who invest in fashion houses? I don't follow her logic...



Author's Response:

You know that point in time when you start justifying things. The reasons you’re giving don’t really fit together but to you it makes perfect sense because that how you want it to be. Laura is not used to feeling this way about a man so she’s making up excuse, even illogical ones, to escape her feelings.

 Reviewer: cuppacoffee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 02 2013 06:25 pm
Title: Chapter 6-Misunderstanding

fantastic update...There is innocent but deadly quiet about Laura and she is strong woman.  Alexander is his own man but a hiddent depth that is trying to peek through his tough skin.

I love it...Your story does not remind me of Beast at all, its totally different

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Date: April 02 2013 05:54 pm
Title: Chapter 6-Misunderstanding

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks for  reading and reviewing  :)

 Reviewer: Emy Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02 2013 01:33 pm
Title: Chapter 6-Misunderstanding

She sounds like she's had a hard life. I wonder why her father disowned her? 



Author's Response:

she's been through alot. Not quite sure why her father disowned her yet but the minute i figure it out i will write it

 Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 02 2013 12:23 pm
Title: Chapter 6-Misunderstanding

Am really enjoying this tory so far.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing. hope you keep on enjoying the story :)

 Reviewer: valis202 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02 2013 09:47 am


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