Reviews For Poison and Wine
Title: Chapter 4-Who is he

Thus is going to be good ole Nick has picked the right one as Laura is no shrinking Violet. Laura's life will never be the same now that Nicolai has seen her and wants her. Are of your chapters going to  short like theses first few?  I love how Laura described Melissa in her mind I guess she has never encountered a transgenderd person before. Where did she move from? Was her mom her only family?  You have written a story where the heroine is tall, thank you! I  looking forward to finding out the answer to my questions.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 31 2013 03:15 pm

Title: Chapter 4-Who is he

Great story. Looking forward to see where this goes. Love to see pictures.



Author's Response:

Thanks :) Im new to the site and havent quite gotten the hang of everything but i have the pictures i want to post and the minute i can i will put them up for you. 

Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31 2013 02:43 pm

Title: Chapter 1

You maybe didn't read "Beast" by Omniousity or if you had you forgot.  A few years ago, she wrote a story where her male character has the same name as yours, is from Russia, worked his way up in the mob, and he had the same nickname as yours does.  Oh, the story was set in New York, too.

That's a lot of coincidences - six.  It's still posted on this site.  You can read the original if you want.



Author's Response:

I just started reading "Beast" its awesome. Thanks for pointing it out. Setting a mob story in New York is fairly common because thats where the Russian crime families settled after the fall of the Soviet Union. There's not much i can change because our plots are different. Having him start out as the boss, having already worked his way up the mob, made sense. He was in a position to make whatever move he makes as long as the father allows it.

I might have to get a new nickname? or change where he is from? but thats as much as i am willing to change. Im using my own name and my boyfriends name. When i asked what character he wanted to be in the story he said mob boss. He's a russian, italian american. I just ran with russia. But i might make "nicholi" the character from italy and set him up as one of the heads of the five New York crime families. 

I dont want the story to sit in the shadow of anyone elses because of only six similarities. Thanks for pointing it out. Oh and sorry if im rambling i usually talk to people about my plots. Getting imput helps me figure out where i want to go.

If you have anyother comments, suggestions or query's please let me know.

Reviewer: willieriley Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31 2013 11:04 am

Title: Chapter 4-Who is he

I love this story it is a great start. I can't wait to find out more. I love interracial mafia stories. Please update

Author's Response:

I love them too. I have read so many i figured i might as well try writing my own. Im working on a couple more chapters and i will post them soon.

Thanks for reading :)

Reviewer: primesgirl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 31 2013 07:45 am

Title: Chapter 4-Who is he

Awesome! Please dont leave us hanging now! We too need to know who he is?



Author's Response:

Im still figuring out who he is lol but the minute the next chapter is finished i will post it.

Thanks  :)

Reviewer: Serenity Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31 2013 07:19 am

Title: Chapter 1

I like this very much!!



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

Reviewer: hk91 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31 2013 06:27 am



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