I like the story and I can already see that she can make the transition to the underworld with no problem. I can't wait to find oout what she was doing during those missing years. It had to have something to do with the special forces because she kept sneaking up on them. 2je2m
Reviewer: VeMo Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 29 2013 06:21 pm
Interesting
Reviewer: ChristinaElizabeth Signed [Report This]Date: June 10 2013 04:24 am
Things are becoming very interesting indeed. Laura seems to just win people over without much effort. Just like Tomaso said, i hope Nicholi knows what he is doing. This woman is full of suprises that never cease to surprise him. She is clearly not going anywhere if he has to do with it.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: June 09 2013 01:15 am
Laura is not who she seems, that os to be expected from an army child with the stealth and the hidden weapon. Tomaso is right when he tells Nicholi that she is a keeper, she is the type of woman he can have in this world that can understand him. Like Nicholi, she has to watch her back 24/7. She is the highest as well as an unexpected attraction. Things are getting good.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08 2013 11:37 pm
Knowing alittle more about Nicholi makes him a bit easier to undderstand and how he is slowly changing. Their really is something changing on him. However, he still lives the life of a crime boss and he can never show weakness. But one thing is clear and that is that Laura will be a center point in his life. As for the meeting in her living room, she is more calm than i would be.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: June 08 2013 08:00 am
Enough said. This chapter speaks for itself.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: June 07 2013 06:49 pm
All those held in emotions came out in a full circle. Nicholi was out of his element but at least he was near. I am still confused to why she thought he was gay. That sentence definetley woke him up and it was a riot. At least she let go off all that pain she held in for so long. well worth waiting for.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: June 07 2013 06:34 pm
They both are troubled, this is one thing they both share and what draws them together. Laura was unwanted by her fathet and her brothers detested her, talk about harsh. Well that is their loss, they do not deserve to know her. Little does she know that someone perfect for her is right in front of her.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: June 07 2013 06:19 pm
Okay someone is in denial, that is fot sure. That little ecounter has stirred them to the core. They both have wild imaginations. The holster would have surprised anyone. Sooner or later, Laura will have to face reality. Nicholi is clearly one with his mind and body that much is sure. He wants her and plans to make it a reality.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: June 07 2013 08:44 am
The work of a crime man is never done. His ambitions are going in a different direction. Nicholi has a new spark of life in him and all thanks to Laura.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: June 07 2013 12:59 am
Wow pure and simple.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: June 07 2013 12:31 am
The info on her is surprising as well as interesting to him and it only makes the conquest a top goal. His life seems to have gained meaning to the mundane. He clearly loves a challenge and will do all he can to acomplish it.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: June 07 2013 12:16 am
A little rough around the edges with an attitude to match. The scar is a nice touch and gives him a dangerous edge. Her headaches will soon begin. She is only human and these feelings are as natural as breathing. Let the drama begin.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: June 07 2013 12:02 am
The first encounter is ususlly the most powerful, or in this case curiosity with a hint of annoyance. The mam has been hooked, pure and simple. Laura has made it clear that she will not be another pretty face that is willing. Destiny is a pain, bur it can also be an adventure.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: June 06 2013 11:46 pm
I feel for Laura, life is not always sushine and flowers. Oppurtunity comes when we least expect it.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: June 06 2013 11:35 pm
Okay a man that wanted a change, understsndable. So far so good the character is understandable.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: June 06 2013 11:24 pm
Like the visual and it helps by bringing life into the characters.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: June 06 2013 11:21 pm
love the update.
Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]Date: June 06 2013 03:43 pm
Nice update...I hoping for information but I love your book.
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: June 06 2013 09:39 am
Powerful chapter I really enjoyed it please update soon
Reviewer: SeriouslyMe Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 06 2013 04:54 am
Well, Well...Nicholi has bowed to his woman. that is what is suppose to do.
They both have a great deal of problems.
Tomaso is gay and he loves fashion. I hope she makes his clothes.
Great update and thank you.
You have been missed.
Reviewer: Mocomath Signed [Report This]Date: June 06 2013 01:34 am
That was a great update. I wonder what Laura will think about her moving. I would really like to know what was on that last page.
Reviewer: luv2read Signed [Report This]Date: June 05 2013 11:03 pm
Awesome! !! Her father won't stand a chance againsf Nicholai.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: June 05 2013 10:04 pm
Woah, it just got very real for Nicholi and Laura. I was on the fence about their relationship but I officially Team Nicla, LOL!!! Great update, I can't wait for more of just the two of them (I hope it's naughty on the next chapter, *WINK*)
Please post soon :-)
Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed [Report This]Date: June 05 2013 08:11 pm
Really enjoyed chapter 14. Vast improvement. There was still some disjointedness such as what happened to Laura's gun.
Explanation of why he felt the need to bow to her.
Misspellings don't really bother me and spellcheck doesn't catch them all.
Can't wait until next installment.
Reviewer: willieriley Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05 2013 07:58 pm