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Title: Chapter 3 Week of Bliss

I hate to see this story end it was so good Brenda. Caleb is hooked, that punany was good to him. Loved it.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2013 02:48 am
Title: Chapter 1 Merri's Plans

this was a great story, loved that she set her children straight! They had plenty of nerve 2 try &  run her life when they were living  loose with theirs! I'm glad Merri got her gove back & i hope that she & Caleb make it!

Great job again  Ms Brenda!

 

 Reviewer: skip2641 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 10 2013 01:59 am
Title: Chapter 3 Week of Bliss

This story was so good, but so short. Now, I'm all for following the rules.....BUT, there was nothing in the challenge that stated there couldn't be a (longer) sequel....just sayin.......you know, just throwing it out there. 

Thanks for the great story......until next time (hint, hint)



Author's Response:

LOL  Maybe I'll come back to it after Regret.

 Reviewer: SuperStar2577 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2013 01:43 am
Title: Chapter 1 Merri's Plans

Hmmm...... Sequil?

Author's Response:

LOL Maybe...

 Reviewer: tymes3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2013 01:26 am
Title: Chapter 3 Week of Bliss

Loved this story!

 Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 10 2013 01:22 am
Title: Chapter 3 Week of Bliss

Aaaww I love it. I want mooooreeeee lol!!!!! But since its the end the ride was worth it .I enjoyed every minute of it Thank you thank you thank you Brenda xoxoxoxo I do hope to see a lil bit of Merri and Caleb in the future.



Author's Response:

that is possible.  We'll see

 Reviewer: klarybelle Signed [Report This]
Date: April 10 2013 01:12 am
Title: Chapter 3 Week of Bliss

Great update! Glad Merri put her kids in check especaialy her daughter. I think Merri and Calbe are way to cute togehter. Caleb is hooked on the chocoalte! Will be intresting on what goes down in a few months and when her kids find out what there Momma has been up to.  Great story.

 Reviewer: Eboniwm Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2013 12:23 am
Title: Chapter 1 Merri's Plans

Tam was working my nerves. If I could have reached around an smaller her I would have. Glad Merri out her in her place.

Awesome story as always.

 

 Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 09 2013 11:51 pm
Title: Chapter 3 Week of Bliss

I really didn't want this story to end. There is so much deapth to Merri. I like that she found herself.

On side note, Tam annoyed the heck out of me. She was all up in her mother's business. I wonder what was the deal with her?

 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 09 2013 11:43 pm
Title: Chapter 3 Week of Bliss

Why must you be so obiedent? I'm so happy for the both of them, stay with your man Merri. Caleb was just the sweetest man I've read about in a long time.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 09 2013 10:46 pm
Title: Chapter 3 Week of Bliss

Go Merri!

 Reviewer: Apple Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 09 2013 10:43 pm
Title: Chapter 3 Week of Bliss

See, little miss Tam would have gotten the taste slapped out of her mouth, with that mouthy sh*t if it was my mother. I wish I would talk to and act like that with my mother! Not in THIS lifetime! What the hell is her problem anyway? What she did went beyond just not wanting her mother to "replace" her father. She was taking it personally. This is really none of their business. And I'm glad Tam got told. She also got told her mother thought she was acting like a floozy with all those men and thar wasn't the daughter she raised. Bet she didn't know that!

Also, Merri was right about her sons growing some balls. Tam is their sister, not their mother. And they damn sure didn't need to try and gang up on her like that. These fools here acting like she wasn't the one to wipe their snotty noses and change their diapers. What nerve!

Caleb was some kind of serious! Wow. Glad Merri's dry spell was broken...hehe. Thes sex was hot!

Nice!

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 09 2013 10:41 pm
Title: Chapter 3 Week of Bliss

Oh man, that was too quick, I want more...Rules are meant to be broken, Brenda....hint, hint.

Author's Response:

LOL!!!!  We'll see!

 Reviewer: LadyeT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 09 2013 10:09 pm
Title: Chapter 3 Week of Bliss

I know the series is 3 ch. but please write more don't stop there!!!!!

Author's Response:

LOL  Maybe Merri part 2...I don't know but I have to get back to Reget also.

 Reviewer: alex Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 09 2013 09:41 pm
Title: Chapter 2 First Date

OMG! You couldn't resist and I'm glad that you didn't.

 Reviewer: HumorMe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 09 2013 04:17 am
Title: Chapter 1 Merri's Plans

Brenda, what can I say except you have another great story unfolding!

 Reviewer: Sandra Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 08 2013 09:20 pm
Title: Chapter 2 First Date

Reminds me of my first time 'crossing the border'............

 Reviewer: caribbeanisland Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 08 2013 09:12 pm
Title: Chapter 2 First Date

Caleb, Caleb, Caleb...one taste of brown sugar honey and now you feenin! Ha, I love it!!! Now about the age difference and foolishness. Madam Merri is not OLD. She is experienced in LIFE. Caleb is not a child...that damn MAN is a MATURE ADULT and I'm sure that he wouldn't mind having Madam Merri take a little advantage of him.

 Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 08 2013 06:11 pm
Title: Chapter 2 First Date

Really enjoying this story.

 Reviewer: cheer jam Signed [Report This]
Date: April 08 2013 05:13 pm
Title: Chapter 2 First Date

Caleb got a tasty treat and he's hooked already!  Her children will not be happy about this. They want her unhappy, alone and sexless. This is a great story Brenda!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 08 2013 02:10 pm
Title: Chapter 2 First Date

Omg the last line of chapter two had me rolling...I see you Marri!

Hey I'm 19 and my mom is 43, her and my dad are not married anymore and they both date...It's there life not mine. Still love them.

 Reviewer: bebe2pink Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 08 2013 01:30 pm
Title: Chapter 2 First Date

THIS STORY ALREADY HAS CAPTURED MY ATTENTION. I can not wait to read a whole lot more....atleast 20 or 40 more chapters! It already deserves a 10! Thank you for writing my fantasy. i am your living version of Merri!



Author's Response:

LOL  The challenge says that it can be no more than three chapters.  You'll have to talk to Elizablu about that!  I plan on doing that chapter and then returning to Regret.  Kitty you say you're the living version of Merri?  I'm glad I'm not the only one here on Chamber in the 50 plus club.  LOL

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 08 2013 11:04 am
Title: Chapter 2 First Date

Nice update.  Caleb is WONDERFUL and Merri is in for a treat. 

Nyeesha



Author's Response:

Oh yeah.  Merri has a lot to look forward to. Thanks for the review!

 Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 08 2013 07:31 am
Title: Chapter 1 Merri's Plans

Wow, that was a very good start..I think i like the directiondirection this story is going...please write atleast 30 chapters. I believe you can develope this story in several ways!

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 08 2013 06:34 am
Title: Chapter 2 First Date

I like this. Caleb won't be able to let go.



Author's Response:

Caleb just got into the business and already he's having attachment issues.  *smh*  We'll have to see how he handles it.  Thanks for the review.

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Date: April 08 2013 06:12 am


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