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Title: Chapter 2 First Date

thanks for the awesome update!! let the games begin!! if caleb is getting sprung after a taste hes gonna be pitiful after they have sex! more please!!



Author's Response:

Caleb has bitten off more than he can chew....LOL  thanks for the review!

 Reviewer: brownskingurl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 08 2013 05:19 am
Title: Chapter 2 First Date

Alrite Merri Got Her Groove Back LOL......

Author's Response:

Oh yeah!  Thanks for the review!

 Reviewer: alex Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 08 2013 04:23 am
Title: Chapter 1 Merri's Plans

All righty!  I've finished reading and I still say frickin' AWESOME!  I love the age dynamic.  I love Armie Hammer. 

For some reason, a lot of children have extraordinary trouble seeing their parents as sexual beings.  As evidenced by one sadly misguided review below referencing the rape of children (at age 35.  What!?), its seems difficult for them change their view of a parent.

I am sooooooo waiting for Merri to stomp that train of thought into the ground with her children once her confidence comes up to snuff about her life changes.

 Reviewer: Pinklemonade Signed [Report This]
Date: April 08 2013 02:58 am
Title: Chapter 2 First Date

I'm not sure I like her children ver much...lol! I get that the only they will ever truly see their mother with is their father. Perfectly natural. However, they don't have to be so rude about it. They think its ridiculous that she would want to get out, but then her daughter says she needs to get out more.

Actually, they don't seem very interested in her life as long she isn't living it as a woman. I honestly think they would be happy if she became the old cat lady. Her out having fun and dating, in any serious way, probably never crossed their minds. And again, I get it, she's their mom, not a "real" woman, but come on! 



Author's Response:

Children are like that.  However Merri isn't dead and they should recognize that.  She has her own life to live and they are going to find that out.  LOL

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 08 2013 02:33 am
Title: Chapter 2 First Date

Brenda you really have a gift.. Each of your stories are unique but equally brilliant..

Author's Response:

Thanks!  More is coming!

 Reviewer: LadyeT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 08 2013 02:07 am
Title: Chapter 2 First Date

Great start so far...looking forward to continuing.



Author's Response:

Working on the final chapter as we speak....

 

 Reviewer: qualidee3 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 08 2013 01:41 am
Title: Chapter 1 Merri's Plans

Aww... what a good start

 Reviewer: mustang_writer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 08 2013 01:02 am
Title: Chapter 2 First Date

Eww. She's old and is basically raping children. :(



Author's Response:

Did I miss something?  Is she the aggressor?  A 35 year old man is far from a child and if you feel that 50 is old, then its best if you stop reading this story.

 Reviewer: Emy Signed [Report This]
Date: April 08 2013 12:36 am
Title: Chapter 2 First Date

I  loved this chapter! Merri's hesitancy is quite endearing and relatable. I love that Caleb was attentive and didn't judge- he seems willing to go all the way with her even though he's trying to tell himself that this is strictly business.  That's malarky...Caleb wants Merri something wicked and judging  by how much he loved his snack, lol.

 

Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Yes, it's hard to remember its business when you're having so much fun.  LOL

 Reviewer: Anni Grey Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 08 2013 12:12 am
Title: Chapter 2 First Date

I like Caleb. I was wondering why he was an escort. To bad that he lost his wife and got a lot of debt. I wonder if he will be objective and not become attached to Merrie.

I was stunned that Merrie agreed to the oral sex. It was fun to read her reaction.

Thanks for a great read.

Author's Response:

Merri is trying to loosen up.  thanks for the review.

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 08 2013 12:08 am
Title: Chapter 1 Merri's Plans

Oh.  (said in low reverential tones)  I love this.  Thank you for writing this.  I haven't even finished reading yet.

 Reviewer: Pinklemonade Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2013 11:46 pm
Title: Chapter 2 First Date

Great update . I'm loving Merri and her new found freedom . I like that Caleb is taking his time with her too . More please .



Author's Response:

Yes, her children are grown and now she can live her own life.  More is coming soon!

 Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2013 11:25 pm
Title: Chapter 2 First Date

Merri was more than willimn to move to the next level after he feasted on her. You're grown no need to share your private life with your kids, who have already decided you do not need a love life.



Author's Response:

Yes the kids feel that she should be sitting in the corner somewhere knitting...lol

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2013 11:15 pm
Title: Chapter 2 First Date

Awesome update.

Author's Response:

thanks!

 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2013 10:22 pm
Title: Chapter 1 Merri's Plans

Loving it.....Great response to the challenge.Caleb's right age should'nt stop you from being with and loving someone:)

 Reviewer: zoe zoey Signed [Report This]
Date: April 07 2013 10:21 pm
Title: Chapter 1 Merri's Plans

Something different

 Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2013 10:21 am
Title: Chapter 1 Merri's Plans

Loving it, Brenda! 

Kids can be so self-absorbed (I know mine is...she's almost 15 and truly believes the world revolves around her...lol), they often fail to see or acknowledge their parents needs.  Love it that Merri is taking matters into her own hands and making things happen!

Can't wait for the actual event; should be epic!  Loving Caleb...he sounds like just what she needs to get rid of the cobwebs...lol...

 Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2013 08:11 am
Title: Chapter 1 Merri's Plans

love it brenda!!! i cant wait to hear calebs thoughts on merry. more please!!

 Reviewer: brownskingurl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2013 06:04 am
Title: Chapter 1 Merri's Plans

I like this story so far. Very interesting.

 Reviewer: Margo Betts Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2013 05:16 am
Title: Chapter 1 Merri's Plans

 I like this one already...Caleb's right...age ain't nothing but a number...can't wait to read how he woos Merri and rocks her world...go get 'im, Merri...

 Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2013 02:10 am
Title: Chapter 1 Merri's Plans

HMMMMMM....I REALLY love this beginning.  I like the way that Caleb approaches Merri.  And he is right.  Age ain't nothing but a number. 

Can't wait to see much more. 

Nyeesha

 Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2013 01:52 am
Title: Chapter 1 Merri's Plans

Thanks Brenda1257, I am looking forward to reading more.

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 06 2013 11:45 pm
Title: Chapter 1 Merri's Plans

Awesome start! Cant wait to read more

 Reviewer: Eboniwm Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 06 2013 09:30 pm
Title: Chapter 1 Merri's Plans

You've done it again..Brenda. Can't wait for this poor woman to get those cobwebs swept out..

 Reviewer: LadyeT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 06 2013 04:19 pm
Title: Chapter 1 Merri's Plans

Loving the new story. Merry kids are selfish. I'm glad Merry has decided to get life. She and Caleb are going to set that bed on fire.

 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 06 2013 12:36 pm


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