So is Lee a willing participant or was he kidnapped as well? The is not as smart as she thinks skills she and the proof is affair with a married and getting involved in this unethical venom experiment!
Author's Response:
Nem is in over her head but she is too naive to know it.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
[Report This]Date: May 08 2013 01:16 am
I like Men already but that douchbag Jason needs to die! As soon as he walked up to her I knew that he was to know good in fact I was begging her not to accept those drinks from Jason. The less inn that Nem should learn is never ignore your gut Now she"s captured and on a ship.
Author's Response:
Yep!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: May 08 2013 01:09 am
Great update!
Author's Response:
:) Thanks!
Reviewer: aprilfool Signed [Report This]Date: April 23 2013 12:25 am
Mmmmm Bane is one sexy man, he needs a smart, fiery girl to whip him into shape can't wait to read the next chapter
Author's Response:
Yes he is!
Reviewer: Siren of the Darknessflame Signed [Report This]Date: April 19 2013 05:52 am
Loving Nem!
Author's Response:
:-) Thanks!
Reviewer: kimyso Signed [Report This]Date: April 17 2013 09:08 pm
So that why she move and now she about to see her ex to help bane wow talking about crazy.Is it me or does big bad bane have a crush on her?
Author's Response:
He just might *giggles*
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: April 16 2013 05:37 am
Oh no I don't think Nem doesn't understand what she is mix in. Bane this man is plain crazy
Author's Response:
She doesn't but she will find out soon enough if she keeps that attitude up.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: April 16 2013 05:13 am
Mouthy isn't the word lol. She playing with fire big time but something tells me bane wouldn't mind to put it out for over and over agian.
Author's Response:
He sure won't! Lol!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: April 16 2013 05:07 am
Good update .
Author's Response:
:-) Thanks!
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 16 2013 04:35 am
:)
Author's Response:
:-)
Reviewer: Emy Signed [Report This]Date: April 16 2013 03:39 am
:)
Author's Response:
:-)
Reviewer: Emy Signed [Report This]Date: April 16 2013 03:39 am
YAY - a Bane story! So far intrigued! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
:-) Thanks!
Reviewer: aprilfool Signed [Report This]Date: April 13 2013 11:06 pm
I thought I was the only who thought bane (tom Hardy) was fineee. :-)
Author's Response:
Lol! :-)
Reviewer: Dream89 Signed [Report This]Date: April 12 2013 11:44 pm
OH, SNAP!! Please post soon ;-)
Author's Response:
:-) My computer is giving me trouble but I should have it back soon.
Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed [Report This]Date: April 12 2013 07:09 am
good story, i'm looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Reviewer: sandradee Signed [Report This]Date: April 12 2013 05:15 am
I'm really enjoying this. I always thought Tom Hardy was hot and him as Bane was hotter lol. For your first story you're doing pretty good. :)
Author's Response:
Yes indeed! I love Tom Hardy!
Reviewer: hazelbazel92 Signed [Report This]Date: April 12 2013 05:07 am
:)
Author's Response:
:-)
Reviewer: Emy Signed [Report This]Date: April 12 2013 04:25 am
Interesting start!!
Author's Response:
:-) Thanks!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: April 12 2013 04:20 am
interesting
Author's Response:
:-)
Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]Date: April 10 2013 09:54 pm
Umm yes and thank you! I love love love comics and a story on the villain angle.. very intrigued. Bane... I love Bane and keep picturing sexy as hell Tom Hardy. Yum! You sure this is your first story? It was clear and you framed the story really well. You have a couple of editing errors but not distracting enough mess the flow of the story. I really really hope you continue because this was a great start.
Author's Response:
Thank You!
Yes it is my first fan fic. Usually I write and then toss whatever I write cause I'm so overly critical of everything but I'm trying to get over that, hence my posting here ;)
Reviewer: partial2passion Signed [Report This]Date: April 10 2013 02:16 am
I love me some Bane! So Bane with a black girl? Hell yea!
Author's Response:
Yaassss!!! I just can't get over Tom Hardy's portrayl ummm ummm ummm!!!
Reviewer: Bajerie Signed [Report This]Date: April 10 2013 02:04 am
:) hope she gives them a run for their money. Stubborn as hell, not stupid just stubborn
Author's Response:
She most certainly will :-)
Reviewer: Emy Signed [Report This]Date: April 09 2013 11:55 pm
I like it so far. I wonder who the "master" is
Author's Response:
Thank You! :-)
Reviewer: SandyBrownEyes Signed [Report This]Date: April 09 2013 11:26 pm
Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Thanks! :-)
Reviewer: mekaky Signed [Report This]Date: April 09 2013 10:02 pm