Man girl these chapters are super short and super good!lol
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: April 23 2013 01:37 am
Love the exchange between Noni and Loki the chemistry is obvious
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: April 23 2013 01:20 am
lol Loki is sucha cutie and a horndog!lol
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: April 23 2013 01:10 am
uh oh noni gotta him!lol
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: April 22 2013 10:55 pm
Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!! Congrats on your job!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Reviewer: coolness_602 Signed [Report This]Date: April 22 2013 01:09 am
you did girl it was well worth the wait 10 10 10 i loved it p.s. congrats on your new job11
Author's Response:
Thank you!!! Chap 12 will be up in a couple days once I get a break from work. Stay tuned!
Reviewer: jadadominique Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 21 2013 10:35 am
Whew! That was hot!
Author's Response:
Thanks girl!
Reviewer: kitten84 Anonymous
[Report This]Date: April 21 2013 07:48 am
Loki and Grimm are going to be the best of friends. lol!
Reviewer: kitten84 Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 21 2013 07:39 am
This is so good. Both Lokie and Noni are cool peeps. What is wrong with Danny other than the loss of his son. I wish that Jake was still alive. I can't wait to c what happens next.
Kim
P.S. I want to know what happened the Shanice and how did Noni get that scare anxious to read more!!!!
Author's Response:
I'll address all your wonderments soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing. :)
Reviewer: kimyso Signed [Report This]Date: April 21 2013 04:32 am
And congrats on the new job!!! I meant to say that on the last review and I forgot what with my brain burning from what I just read. Loki though. Loki put it down!
Author's Response:
Lmao, I know the feeling. Thank you so much!
Reviewer: Bajerie Signed [Report This]Date: April 21 2013 02:36 am
...Damn.
Author's Response:
LMFAO!
Reviewer: Bajerie Signed [Report This]Date: April 21 2013 02:31 am
Oooo that was soo good. Wow Loki put down! And for someone who didn't have a lot of experience Loki sure showed us the reason he's a god. Great job on this chapter. Feel bad about Danny. I wanna know what really happened with Jake and Shanice. Poor Noni has been thru some stuff. Keep up the good work. -p2p-
Author's Response:
Lol. Thank you. And yeah, I've found that when your desire for someone is THAT high, you don't need much experience--just your imagination. ;)
Reviewer: partial2passion Signed [Report This]
Date: April 21 2013 02:00 am
Hot sex scene..I enjoyed every bit of it...
Author's Response:
Giiirl, I enjoyed writing it! LOL.
Reviewer: nightseer Signed [Report This]Date: April 20 2013 10:35 pm
Wow amazing story and this had my eyes just poppin she got her some and he finally got his chocolate. I wonder is Grimm ok.
Author's Response:
Lol. My eyes were poppin' when I was writing it! We'll see about Grimm in the next chapter, which will be up in a couple days. I work late now. :)
Reviewer: Keyajackson Signed [Report This]Date: April 20 2013 03:09 pm
Noni got some good loving, and Loki broke it down!!! Congratulations on your new job!!!
Author's Response:
Lmao! Thank you! I'll update soon when I get a day off. Sorry for the delay.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 20 2013 06:37 am
Intense chapter from start to finish. Danny is clearly heartbroken and an emotional wreak since his son died. As for Noni, she is filled with different types of emotions with all that has happened in one day. The tension between Loki andNoni has led to this,a time to just let go and give in to their desires. Of courze Noni also wanted to be comforted in more ways than one. Leave it to Loki to know what they both needed, each other.
I wonder how this will affect them as well as how it will affect Loki and that desire to prove himself. Does this alter his plans or will it only be a bump in the road. Only time will tell.n
Author's Response:
Yeah. I think they needed comfort most of all.
Danny...well, I'll write about him later. :P
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: April 20 2013 06:31 am
That was hot!
Author's Response:
Thank You! I will update soon. Just getting settled into my new schedule. Stay tuned! :)
Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed [Report This]Date: April 20 2013 06:26 am
I love this story....
Reviewer: nightseer Signed [Report This]Date: April 20 2013 04:06 am
Loki is hilarious, but his jealously of that fine Thor is not helping him. Loki you do bad things maybe if you stop your family would embrace you more. I just love Grimm, his a good doggy for yhe most part. Noni's only friend is dead, that's just sad. I can't wait to find out how Shaniece died. Was she murdered or was it a drug overdose? This is some good sugady!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 19 2013 03:24 pm
absolutely adore this paring! loki is fantastically written + i am so drawn into noni's tale as well. please keep this up!! love this journey with these characters!!! you are very talented!!
Reviewer: Aleta Signed [Report This]Date: April 19 2013 12:43 pm
Loki is too funny.
Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed [Report This]Date: April 19 2013 12:20 pm
Haha I love your story! So many funny parts, it's well written & I can't wait to read more 😄 thank you!!
Author's Response:
No, thank YOU! :)
Reviewer: Loop Signed [Report This]Date: April 19 2013 11:09 am
It seems that Noni is not unfaimliar eith losing those close to her and it seems to have built a sort of mental shield around her. In a way she appears to be around whenever someone close to her dies. As for the dog, that was disgusting but there was no other way around it. Loki's sense of humor is well something that will take some getting use to. Immortal or not a man is a man.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: April 19 2013 07:28 am