Reviews For Chocolate
Title: This...Bitch...

aww danny and jenna is a bitch 



Author's Response:

Lol. As the title suggests!

Reviewer: sandradee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 02 2014 10:41 pm

Title: Rebound

That isn't good Danny. Anna deserves to be loved and not used.



Author's Response:

I think so too. But I don't think that was his intention.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 02 2014 08:19 pm

Title: Not Quite Dead

Pls link this story to thor 2 love it and update more pls

Reviewer: glamour Signed [Report This]
Date: February 02 2014 07:16 pm

Title: This...Bitch...

Danny has to kn8w that he does not stand a chance with Noni. I love Loki is so arrogant for n8 reason. Next to Thor Loki is just plain. I will go back reread some chapters.



Author's Response:

Lol. Oh he has plenty of reason and he's anything but plain. ;)

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 02 2014 07:00 pm

Title: This...Bitch...

Ohhh! I want Loki to have fun with Anna. I need Danny to get over it because Noni belongs with Loki! I feel his pain but maybe him and Anna can try again.



Author's Response:

Hahaha. All things in due time!

Reviewer: Drea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 02 2014 02:56 pm

Title: Rebound

Awww poor Danny wanting someone he hopefully can never have.



Author's Response:

Hopefully? LMAO! Damn, that's cold.

Reviewer: simplydijah Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 28 2014 01:48 am

Title: Rebound

wow, a few comments girl called Justin Beaver?! lol, I thought I was the only one that read Twilight and thought it was okay...not as great as everyone said. Anyway, love the story the characters AND the fact you are updating often. Thanks ;-)

Author's Response:

Lol, that was just some comic relief.

 

And yeah, Twilight sucked.

Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 27 2014 06:12 am

Title: Rebound

Wow, I hope Danny doesn't become a stalker.



Author's Response:

I hope so too!

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 26 2014 10:53 pm

Title: Whiskey

I think everyone has had a Danny moment.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 26 2014 10:41 pm

Title: Voices

Another great chapter.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 26 2014 10:21 pm

Title: The Gun in the Bun

Excellent chapter.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 26 2014 10:07 pm

Title: Rebound

Danny needs to get Noni out of his mind!!!! Hahahahaaa!!! 

Noni should have just told Loki what went down just so there wouldn't be any misunderstandings!!! 

Team Loki!!!!! 

Have you signed the petition "Free Loki" to get a Loki solo movie? 



Author's Response:

Lol! She might tell him. But that might backfire...

I think I did sign it a while ago. That would be so awesome! I watched Thor 2 JUST for the Loki parts!

Reviewer: Ainslee Capoise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 26 2014 06:42 pm

Title: Alone

Two star crossed brawlers.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 26 2014 05:20 pm

Title: Rebound

Oh! I really hope that Danny doesn't get in the way of Loki and Noni. 



Author's Response:

Dundunnnnn. Only time will tell! -mystical fingers- O.o

Reviewer: nessatadoria Signed [Report This]
Date: January 26 2014 05:11 pm

Title: Rebound

that last sentence was just wrong. poor anna.



Author's Response:

Danny's got it hard for Noni... :(

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: January 26 2014 02:59 pm

Title: Snow

I like how they are warming up to each other.

Trust in small steps.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 26 2014 01:57 pm

Title: Chocolate

I'm enjoying this story and I can't wait to see what Noni finds at the library.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 26 2014 01:48 pm

Title: Broadway

Good update.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 26 2014 01:45 pm

Title: Not Quite Dead

Good intro and I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 26 2014 01:44 pm

Title: Not Quite Dead

I love your story can link it to thor 2 pls jst like you have linked it to the ending of thor 1

Reviewer: glamour Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 26 2014 12:35 pm

Title: Not Quite Dead

I love your story can link it to thor 2 pls jst like you have linked it to the ending of thor 1

Reviewer: glamour Signed [Report This]
Date: January 26 2014 12:35 pm

Title: Rebound

Oh wow



Author's Response:

I know, right? Scandalous!

Reviewer: keikei2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 26 2014 12:17 pm

Title: Whiskey

OMGosh!!! I've been waiting for your new chapter for so long!!! Okay it wasn't that long but it felt like it was! I was so happy to get the e-mail about the update!!! 

Thor: The Dark World was an amazing movie. I saw that movie first then saw Thor!! Backward me! 

But I'm soooooooo team Loki!!! What the heck is wrong with Danny!! He knows that Noni doesn't like him and he goes and pull a move like that....maaaannnnnn!!! Let's hope Loki didn't see it!!!!! SO can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Lol, your post made my day. I'm glad you like my story so much! Thank you! ^_^

Reviewer: Ainslee Capoise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 26 2014 06:33 am

Title: Whiskey

OOOOOOOOOOOHHHHH the ending was so good. Please add more quickly, I'm so anxious with this story. Loved it!!



Author's Response:

Lol. I hope you're awake, I've posted a new chapter. :D

Reviewer: nessatadoria Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 26 2014 06:04 am

Title: Whiskey

Well it is great to ser this update and we all know how hect daily lifr can be.  This chapter clearly depicted a man that has suffered a terrible loss.  His emotions are not uncalled and are what's to be expected from a grieving father. I cannot help but feel sorry that it seems his life is always filled with losing battles. 



Author's Response:

Yeah. I really like Danny, personally. Let's see if he really is a good guy or he's just in a bad way right now and his true colors will come out later... ;)

Reviewer: reader101 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 26 2014 05:26 am



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