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Title: Chapter 3-You again

I had forgotten this story.  I really would love to see where it goes.  Its been a really long time since an update.

 Reviewer: dreamama Signed [Report This]
Date: November 30 2014 04:04 pm
Title: Cast

I just reaquainted myself with this story and it is ever better the second time I read it. I hope everything is well with you.  You started something amazing with this story. I really hope you continue this story, along with your others.

You have given little Selina a chance to have something she has only dreamed of... a family. I really hope Alexander finds the sick excuse of a mother Olivia and the boyfriend & make her sign those papers then make them disappear for good.  just a suggestion! :D

 Reviewer: Valesh1 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 15 2014 01:19 am
Title: Chapter 3-You again

vcan u please update, i love all of your stories, but this is my favorite.

 Reviewer: dreamama Signed [Report This]
Date: July 12 2013 01:29 pm
Title: Chapter 3-You again

He found her.  In a strange way,they do look like a family people cannot help but to stare.  Selina has gone through hell and this new life is strange to her.  Alexander is curious about this mysterious woman that has caught his heart.  

 Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 08 2013 07:25 pm
Title: Chapter 2

well that is just wrong.  who just leaves their child with a stranger?  Oh wait i know but will leep that in my head.  Nina is getting more tgan she expected, at least she has the means to take care Selina and actually give her a home.

 Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 08 2013 07:04 pm
Title: Cast

Very nice cast.

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Date: July 08 2013 06:47 pm
Title: Chapter 1-The Beginning

Enchanting.

 Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 08 2013 06:45 pm
Title: Cast

I really like the story. Looking forward to an update.

 Reviewer: Vemo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 07 2013 01:43 am
Title: Cast

I love the way you wrote Alexander. So interesting and mysterious. Wonderful story. Great job.

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Date: July 01 2013 02:56 am
Title: Chapter 3-You again

wow i luv this story i hope you keep writing for it

 Reviewer: kiavicmcp Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 29 2013 04:37 am
Title: Chapter 3-You again

Awesome story i really like it so far plez continue

 Reviewer: SeriouslyMe Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 24 2013 07:16 am
Title: Chapter 3-You again

I'm hoping Alexander is just bad enough to take that mother out!!! I'm so loving the story. And yes both chapter 2 & 3 had me crying for Selina. Can't wait until the next chapter

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Date: June 22 2013 10:00 pm
Title: Chapter 3-You again

awesome story!

 Reviewer: M3l4n1_C4rt3r Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 21 2013 08:59 pm
Title: Chapter 3-You again

Sweet update! Loved it!

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Date: June 21 2013 07:35 am
Title: Chapter 3-You again

Awwweee... I love the chapter, Nina is really wonderful with Selina, and Selina is a wonderful little girl. I can wait to see more of their bond. I hope nothing can break it. 

By the way, Mr. Alexander is very smooth. He appears and makes both the ladies happy. I love him already. LOL!

 

Great job, please post more soon :-)

 Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 21 2013 04:39 am
Title: Chapter 3-You again

Falling deeply inlove with this story

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Date: June 21 2013 12:07 am
Title: Chapter 3-You again

glad that selina is happy and i hope that nina does find her cousin and is able to adopt selina. great update

 Reviewer: sandradee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 20 2013 09:30 pm
Title: Chapter 3-You again

Aww please update sooner! The curiosity is killing me!

 Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 20 2013 09:15 pm
Title: Chapter 3-You again

OH MY!!! I"m in tears, poor kid. I hope Alexander is not a devil in desguise.They make a beautiful family, Thanks for sharing.

 Reviewer: Lindy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 20 2013 08:55 pm
Title: Chapter 3-You again

Hope Selina mother get what she deserve.

 Reviewer: Trulyme35 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 20 2013 07:05 pm
Title: Chapter 2

this is pretty good can't wait to read more 

 Reviewer: sandradee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 10 2013 01:47 am
Title: Chapter 2

Omg, that poor baby girl.. What kind of woman does that to her own child?! Wow, she just beat her and dropped her like a used car. SMH, if she was my cousin I would have called the police on her AFTER I beat her ass!! Urgh! Nina is a great woman, I love her and her baby cousin already LOL!! 

Anyways, great story. I was shocked at the major turn but this is so exciting. Very different then all the other stories. I can't wait for more, please post soon :-)

 Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 08 2013 11:24 am
Title: Chapter 2

Great story!!

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 06 2013 05:39 am
Title: Chapter 2

Wow, what a twist! Glad Selina is with Nina. Hope Nina gets custody of her.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 06 2013 02:12 am
Title: Chapter 2

 love this, I hope Nina's cousin forgets about her daughter and let her be happy with Nina. Thanks for sharing, more please...

 Reviewer: Lindy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 06 2013 12:02 am


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