This was a great chapter, but I feel that the story is still incomplete. I don't know; it could be because I love the characters so much that I want more.
Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed
[Report This]Date: June 10 2013 04:13 am
Thank you. Perfect way to end your beatutiful story. Wishing you all the best with your studies!
Author's Response:
Thank you I appreciate your well wishes! I hope to get back to my characters asap--and definitely once the schooling is complete :) Peace.
Reviewer: pearlcat Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 10 2013 04:05 am
didn't expect and update--thank you. now we need one more chapter on why david got married so fast (hope it wasn't to the blond in the bar) and who is moving.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: June 10 2013 03:46 am
Time for that baby. This was so romantic. Lovely.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: June 10 2013 03:42 am
This was good. I really e enjoyed this story.
Reviewer: Acdromance Signed [Report This]Date: June 10 2013 03:19 am
ADD PIC AND MORE OF THIS STORY
Author's Response:
Just for you! I added cast pics--sometimes I think that can limit the readers interpretation--I love Angela & Brad and always envisioned them in a movie together--Justin is just yummy :)--thank you for reading & reviewing--Peace
Reviewer: faye Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 03 2013 01:31 am
OMG I LOVE IT SO MUCH MORE MORE I NEED IT I WANT IT I HAVE TO HAVE IT SOON VERY SOON 10 **********
Reviewer: faye Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 03 2013 01:27 am
if DJ is 19 (from chp 1), how can the marriage have only lasted 10 years?
Author's Response:
David and Amelia broke up in 1993/94 DJ was born in/about 1994--his parents' marriage has been over for years when Amelia & David reconnect--you made me recheck my timeline :0--thanks for reading--Peace
Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]Date: April 21 2013 04:35 pm
Oh, I didn't realize that the story is completed. Thanks for a great read. I really enjoyed the story. Thanks so much.
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: April 20 2013 05:29 am
Thanks for a great update. I was LOL at David's "I don 't think that your pussyy got the memo. "I really enjoy this story. How lucky is David that his son is his biggest cheer leader in his pursuit of his first love, Amelia.
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: April 20 2013 05:26 am
Thanks for a great update. I love this couple. I hope that they can be together.
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: April 20 2013 05:07 am
I love this story, I wish it could have been longer.....well beggers can't be chosey. I'll be ready to read when u add more.......Peace!!!!!!
Kim
Reviewer: kimyso Signed [Report This]Date: April 19 2013 05:38 pm
I just found this little gem, add me to the others that want more of this adorable couple....and a little DJ on the side.
Reviewer: peachmartini Signed [Report This]Date: April 19 2013 03:19 pm
Well alright. I'm happy now.
Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 19 2013 11:05 am
thank you...this story was soooo good. It felt like a cliff hanger....so much was not said and can there be a future... It sure sounds like it can.
Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 19 2013 04:15 am
YAY!! Glad to hear this. Please don't keep us waiting too long!!
Reviewer: CurlyQ Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 19 2013 02:06 am
thank you looking forward to more
Reviewer: D1950 Signed [Report This]Date: April 19 2013 01:20 am
Wait, that's all??? You know you need to stop playing an continue this story... We need to know why they broke up and if they will get married and finally have their HEA with each other. Besides they need a baby together.
Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed [Report This]Date: April 18 2013 03:37 pm
This is a great story, but there's no way you're done. There's still PLENTY to write about with this adorable couple. David is so cute and I love his son DJ. Tell us more about what happened in the past between David and Amelia and show us how they're going to make it as a couple in the present. Make it happen!
Reviewer: CurlyQ Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 18 2013 06:35 am
Ok obviously your just a tease. There is no way you could let out this wonderful story with all its cliffhangers and mysteries and not give me more. Please please extend it just a little more to clarify why they broke up and if how they plan on making this last when it seems she doesnt live in the same place as him. Come on be a sport.
Author's Response:
Me? a tease? never that--I'm working on more--I didn't expect this much attention figured it would get a couple of hits but y'all are seriously stroking my ego--thank you so much for your review---Peace.
Reviewer: Acdromance Signed [Report This]Date: April 18 2013 05:47 am
I love this story, the nostalgia of first love.
Reviewer: Acdromance Signed
[Report This]Date: April 18 2013 05:45 am
Where is the rest of the story?? We need more context like why did they break up? What is she hiding? Will they get back together? (I hope they do because it seems like they are their best selves with each other) More Ms. Mya please...
Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed [Report This]Date: April 18 2013 05:15 am
Surely there must be more to this story. Why did she leave him? Where does she live, now? Will they be able to work things out? Do they have a future together? Will she break his heart again? Come on! This couple is far too interesting to be put out to pasture.
Author's Response:
Wow! that's a lot of questions--I'll write more and hope you like it just as much the beginning. Thank you for your review.
Peace
Reviewer: Noelle Vonham Signed [Report This]Date: April 18 2013 04:23 am
That was smoking, is Amelia free to be sharing her goodies with David? Loving DJ, he's his dad's wing man.
Author's Response:
thank you for reviewing--David was the first goodie sampler so it's all copacetic. DJ is a good son--glad you recognized him :)
Peace
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 18 2013 01:56 am
Hot damn!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 18 2013 01:48 am