Nice story... but it ended in the middle.
Reviewer: 1nadali Signed
[Report This]Date: April 18 2013 01:25 am
Love it!!!!! Keep ut coming! !
Reviewer: RedMoon Signed [Report This]Date: April 17 2013 11:28 pm
Did we find out why she left him?!! This was so good, please continue!!
I hope DJ gets a story too;)
Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed [Report This]Date: April 17 2013 10:42 pm
I loved this story. I really like reading about an older couple.
Reviewer: cheer jam Signed [Report This]Date: April 17 2013 09:16 pm
D*mn, please update!!
Reviewer: oHH Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 17 2013 09:13 pm
Love it!!!!! Keep ut coming! !
Reviewer: RedMoon Signed [Report This]Date: April 17 2013 08:29 pm
This is amazing! I love it keep up the great work
Author's Response:
thank you!!! these characters have been in my head for awhile--glad you like it.
Reviewer: chocachocacandyland Signed [Report This]Date: April 17 2013 08:16 pm
This is so sweet. I'm glad to read a story of "mature" lovers. LOL Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: April 17 2013 07:48 pm
Enjoyable. At some point, I hope the characters haunt you so we get more. *smiles, evilly*
Author's Response:
LOL! no hauntings please--I'll add some more--thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 17 2013 04:26 pm
They were so in love. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: April 17 2013 03:21 pm
Oh I wonder what happened that they both are saying if they made different choices that DJ could have been their son. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: April 17 2013 03:19 pm
Good start. I Love David's son. Putting his father out there like that. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: April 17 2013 03:16 pm
I thoroughly enjoyed this story but a big question was not answered. What happened to them back then, it was hinted that Amelia knew more about their split than David did. I guess I just want more and I'm looking for any reason to continue this story. Do they stay together? What happened with her marriage? What happened with his? So many questions....
Author's Response:
thank you for reading and reviewing, the fact that y'all care about the characters makes me smile ;D I hope you like the follow up as much as the initial offering. Peace
Reviewer: Liason4220 Signed [Report This]Date: April 17 2013 02:32 pm
This is a great story. Loved it.
Reviewer: Karmal Signed [Report This]Date: April 17 2013 10:55 am
Remembering your past love crush is something that is very pure that know one can take from you.
I absolutely love this story, great job
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing, it's so good to know that y'all like what I wrote. Young love, first love, crushes--is the high we are always chasing--and if we're lucky we get another hit.
Peace
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: April 17 2013 09:07 am
love is endless...I still remember high school
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: April 17 2013 08:54 am
Very good
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: April 17 2013 08:51 am
Wow
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: April 17 2013 08:50 am
great start.
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: April 17 2013 08:48 am
This was a pretty good read but I wish the ending wasn't sorta cliffhanger-ish. Thanks for the story!
Author's Response:
Thank You Annie--I'm working on some more chapters--I don't want you on a cliff:) I appreciate the review.
Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 17 2013 08:16 am