love it more hotReviewer: faye Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 25 2013 04:31 am
OMG!!! That was enjoyable and the twist at the end had me breathing out fresh air!!! He was husband; SWEET!!!!! To heighten my pleasure, her husband and hump buddy was Danny "Scotty" Piña!!! There definitely need to be more stories starring this sexy specimen!!!!
Really happy you liked the storyReviewer: Vie Signed [Report This]
Date: April 24 2013 06:35 pm
Thought the story was good until the end. The end did not make sense. How could it have been her husband? If its her husband, why was he worried about her being hurt and her having to explain to her husband? Why would she be worried about how her dishevelled appearance would look to her husband? I think the idea was good but the execution didn't quite work. Too many inconsistencies. Perhaps, when you reread the story, these inconsistencies can be taken out. Keep writing though, yu're very talented.Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 22 2013 01:10 am
Good story! Surprising ending!
Author's Response: Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 21 2013 08:47 pm
Okay, I don't get it. So it was her husband all along? So the man she had been fucking was her husband? I'm a little lost.
Author's Response: Reviewer: Ms.stars Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 21 2013 08:40 pm