Title: 15 Hours (Atlanta, GA)

Dani is warming up to Eric and even gave him her peaches. That was so sweet!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 09 2013 01:48 pm

Title: 22 Hours (Birmingham, MS)

i'm really enjoying this story.  It is a nice, relaxing read and each chapter progressively flows into the next. loving the characters...even the supporting cast.  Their appearance is the dash of element needed to accentuate the journey along America's highway.

Nice job.  Looking forward to the next update. :)

Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 09 2013 02:28 am

Title: 22 Hours (Birmingham, MS)

It seems that Dani and Eric are getting closer,  Me likey!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2013 02:28 am

Title: 22 Hours (Birmingham, MS)

Awww...stranger things have happened. I'm glad the occupants are getting friendly.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07 2013 07:47 pm

Title: 22 Hours (Birmingham, MS)

I'm in love. 

Reviewer: LolaWrites Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07 2013 04:11 am

Title: 15 Hours (Atlanta, GA)

Thanks for a great update.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04 2013 02:38 pm

Title: 15 Hours (Atlanta, GA)

Short but sweet! 

Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 04 2013 07:03 am

Title: 8 Hours (Washington, DC)

I. Am looking forward to Eric telling his sperm donor that he turned out just fine without him. I am hope that the man has never known happiness or love! I am looking forward to reading this story.



Author's Response:

Lol, everything it's what it seems and things might turn out a tad different than that.

Thank you for reading

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2013 02:11 pm

Title: 15 Hours (Atlanta, GA)

More please....great beginning

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2013 09:30 am

Title: 15 Hours (Atlanta, GA)

Keep going! This writing is really vocal and distinct. i love it!

Reviewer: Cam Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 03 2013 06:48 am

Title: 15 Hours (Atlanta, GA)

Hilarious chapter!

 

 

Reviewer: LolaWrites Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2013 06:42 am

Title: 8 Hours (Washington, DC)

It's heeere! Wow, those pictures are so gorgeous. And the writing, too, of course.



Author's Response:

Couldn't have done it without you girl! 

Reviewer: curiouslyamused Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02 2013 01:27 am

Title: 8 Hours (Washington, DC)

I like this, a lot. Eric's mom is kind of all over the place with this thing. It was her idea, but Eric probably needed to do it anyway.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 01 2013 02:34 am

Title: 8 Hours (Washington, DC)

I like the title. It is very interesting that they are both looking for their father. I hope that they don 't have the same father. Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2013 01:59 pm

Title: 8 Hours (Washington, DC)

I like the premise of this and I'm excited for more. Thumbs up for you and CuriouslyA.

Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 30 2013 01:09 pm

Title: 8 Hours (Washington, DC)

Me likey. 

Reviewer: LolaWrites Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2013 12:21 pm

Title: 8 Hours (Washington, DC)

 I'm starting to love these characters already. There's something about growing up and wanting all the pieces to the puzzle to your life in hopes of finding out who you truly are, I think it is really interesting. 

Really great start, can't wait to read more.

 

Reviewer: BreBre Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2013 06:41 am

Title: 8 Hours (Washington, DC)

very nice start...more please

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2013 05:56 am

Title: 8 Hours (Washington, DC)

Good start . Can't wait to read more .

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 30 2013 05:45 am

Title: 8 Hours (Washington, DC)

Nice beginning.

Nyeesha

Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2013 05:42 am

Title: 8 Hours (Washington, DC)

very nice start...more please

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Date: April 30 2013 05:40 am



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