I know they are steadly drowning, however, when are you going to throw a life jacket for the two of them.
They are pitiful now.
I'm just going where the characters take me... my muse likes the journey as much as the destination.Reviewer: Mocomath Signed [Report This]
Date: August 04 2013 10:17 pm
Fitz is angry with Olivia, will hire forgive her? Will live always put his political success above her own happiness? I love this show andctge fandaim stories that it's spawned!
They are definitely a good couple to write for. So much angst and romance.Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: July 15 2013 12:57 pm
Fitz and Livvi need to get past thier hurts and move on.
He can't run the world without the love of his life. Can he????
Well, *we* all know the answer to that, but for these two, it takes more than a minute to get themselves straight. Two steps forward, one step back, and then there's that little matter of her having issues that make her run straight into guilty feelings and him being married and the leader of the free world that gets in the way every now and then - that's Olitz LOL.
thx for taking the time to leave a review :)Reviewer: Mocomath Signed [Report This]
Date: June 19 2013 09:53 pm
Love the story so far and can't wait to read the rest!!!! Howvever, I have one issue with all the chapters after chapter 12...the font style. The font style used in every chapter after 12 does not allow for the reader/user to increase the font size, which makes it very difficult for those who need the font to be bigger in order to read it. Please fix the font for chapter 13 through 25 to the same font as chapters 1 through 12. Thanks!!!
thanks for letting me know about the font issues; I was copying and pasting, so obviously something went wrong in the formatting. I'll see if I can figure out what...Reviewer: BossLady Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05 2013 06:23 am
What an update.
When are you going to let these two go back to what they thought was normal. (smile)
Love this story.
normal? they don't know what normal is!
To be truthful, the bumpy ride is half the fun, so buckle up - and thx for taking the time to leave a review.Reviewer: Mocomath Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26 2013 02:18 am
I love it, he tore the First Ho's draws and practically drew blood. Fitz sounded so powerful and that was sexy as hell!!
I agree. Powerful intense Fitz is SEXY Fitz. Thanks for taking the time to leave a review [and apologies for taking so long to respond]Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09 2013 02:16 am
Cyrus is a asswipe, but he is right he has no right to keep taps on Olivia especially after he kicked her to the curb. Excellent update!!
Thanks for the review.
I agree about what Cyrus said, but Fitz doesn't care - he's angry, he hurt - but his love for Olivia didn't go anywhere so he can't help himself.Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02 2013 11:42 pm
I don't fell any sympathy for Cyrus he deserves nothing but bad karma!! Now the first Ho makes my eye twitch and needs to befall for Karmic justice and fast!! Death to the First ho!!! If not death at least severe maiming or her throat ripped out.
LOL - if not death let's just rip her throat out?
I like Cyrus sometimes - he is who he is but he's not sorry about it. I like him a whole lot more than I like Mellie. Death is too good for her - I only want her alive so that she can be there to see Olivia and Fitz get their happiness on!
I loved last week's episode where she laid down an ultimatum [and Cyrus tried to talk some sense into FAPOTUS] but it didn't matter what they said or did. He chose Olivia, 'cause that's where his heart is.Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02 2013 11:36 pm
Cyrus is really and truly evil, he doesn't care who he hurts as long as he protect job as the president's right hand man. I love this show and I can't wait for tonights episode!!1
I feel you - I haven't been this hooked on a tv show like I am on this one for a very, VERY long time. And yes, Cyrus is a trip and a half!Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02 2013 11:32 pm
This is really good. Looking forward to the next chapter. I'm excited to see where you'll take this.
Hopefully you all will like it - it's kind of follows the story we've been seeing, but at the same time, it doesn't. It's been fun to write so far. Thanks for the reviewReviewer: SAF Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 02 2013 09:09 am