I love this story.
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: May 01 2015 01:36 am
This was good to short thought would have loved to see where their relationship could have gone.
Reviewer: d3stin2l0v3@gmail.com Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 30 2014 01:37 am
What a twist! LOL
Reviewer: LadySade Signed [Report This]Date: May 26 2013 12:55 am
love it part 2 great story
Reviewer: faye Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 25 2013 04:00 pm
Oh no!
I hopethis doesn't end bad.
Reviewer: 1nadali Signed [Report This]Date: May 18 2013 11:10 am
I like the secret crush.
Reviewer: 1nadali Signed [Report This]Date: May 18 2013 11:09 am
Snap, crackle, pop that was funny! Bastian had drawn all the wrong conclusions and made himself look stupid in thee process. Loving this story!
Author's Response:
Happy you liked.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05 2013 01:04 am
This is by fore the best chapter yet. Loved that she has some spunk!!!! The confusion over her age was a nice twist!!!
Author's Response:
I'm happy to end on a high note.
Reviewer: LadyeT Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04 2013 08:39 pm
Loved it. He thought she was younger, but I did not get that impression while I was reading about her. They can be a family, nice update.
Author's Response:
Oh. I have to work harder at my hinting skills. Thank for reading.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: May 04 2013 07:42 pm
This was an interesting update. I really enjoyed the story; can wait to read your next story
Reviewer: Aries-Care Signed [Report This]Date: May 04 2013 07:01 pm
Totally LOVED this chapter!! Great story.
Reviewer: Dallasstar1725 Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 04 2013 06:59 pm
Great update! You answered the questions I had.
Author's Response:
I hoped that this chapter would wrap things up.
Reviewer: AP Signed [Report This]Date: May 04 2013 06:24 pm
So, that was hot... I hope he's sorry because he thinks she's upset and not because he is tryingto be "mature" again.
Reviewer: Fantasque Signed [Report This]Date: May 04 2013 01:52 am
PLEASE COME BACK!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed [Report This]Date: May 03 2013 09:23 pm
Interesting. Please continue.
Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed [Report This]Date: May 03 2013 09:15 pm
MORE PLEASE!!! I like it :-)
Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed [Report This]Date: May 03 2013 04:01 pm
these two had better get it together, they only want to be with each other anyway. Lovely read, thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: Lindy Signed [Report This]Date: May 03 2013 09:57 am
Wow, I hope that "I'm sorry "doesn't completely ruin the moment for her... This was HOT, but I feel like once the high goes away reality is going to hit hard..and not in a good way.
Reviewer: LadyeT Signed [Report This]Date: May 03 2013 06:26 am
Bastain, those of tears of joy. You made her happy your loving was so good!! This was so good!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: May 03 2013 05:04 am
I must have read that too fast, didn't know he put the coat over her face. lol
Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 03 2013 12:08 am
How old is Sage? How did Sage and Sebastian meet? Why don't' they know how each other feels about the other?
Author's Response:
You'll find out soon. I promise just stick it out please.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: May 02 2013 09:19 pm
I like it. Why the nightmares, does she have insomnia? The twins love her that is sweet.
Author's Response:
It wasnt a nightmare. Sebastian put his sport coat over her face not realizing she was asleep in the chair, so she was frightened.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: May 02 2013 04:11 pm
I like it Acromdance. How old is she? And where is the boys' mom? More please :)
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 02 2013 01:10 pm