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Title: Chapter 24 pt 1

Update soon?  Really miss this story. 

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 01 2015 10:29 pm

Title: Chapter 24 pt 1

I miss this story.

Reviewer: OddBlood Signed [Report This]
Date: June 09 2015 12:56 am

Title: Chapter 24 pt 1

I miss this story.

Reviewer: OddBlood Signed [Report This]
Date: June 09 2015 12:56 am

Title: Chapter 24 pt 1

What the fuck! You have to update this story!!! Valerie is annoyng as fuck but damn this is good!!

Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2015 12:51 pm

Title: Prologue

are we gonna see an update soon or....?

Reviewer: skarsgardian Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26 2015 04:13 am

Title: Chapter 24 pt 1

UGH I JUST REREAD THIS PLZ COME BACK.

I know you're busy, but if I fall anymore in love with this book I might be on Maury talking about *cue Maury angles*  "Unguarded" has two children that are 500% his. 

 

Is it too weird that I made the book a him? Cause that's how much I love it...

Reviewer: monsgors Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 20 2015 02:50 pm

Title: Chapter 24 pt 1

Can we expect an update soon? Pretty please?  I've been missing this story.😊

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 17 2015 01:57 pm

Title: Chapter 24 pt 1

Hey there! Happy Easter! I hope all is well with you. You know why I am posting this...Please update, even if it's really short, lol! 

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 05 2015 02:41 am

Title: Chapter 24 pt 1

DAMN I LOVE THIS FUCKING STORY !!

Reviewer: Cat Signed [Report This]
Date: February 17 2015 04:07 am

Title: Chapter 24 pt 1

Short, but very sweet. Love the raw moments, and adorable cameos from Apples and Peaches (the felines). Henry really is a lot more tortured than he ever lets on. 

 

Impatiently awaiting the next update. 

Reviewer: Giro Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 29 2015 02:03 pm

Title: Chapter 24 pt 1

I wonder if both of them will keep their guard down.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 23 2015 12:02 pm

Title: Chapter 24 pt 1

Wow that was raw He's let down his walls & he's at aan all time low & because she still loves him see feels the pain deep enough to go to him & let down hers. Now is the time to start building anew;restart & become a strong couple.

Reviewer: kvgurl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 20 2015 11:49 pm

Title: Chapter 24 pt 1

Beautifully written chapter.. Can't wait to see what happens next!!

Reviewer: AstralSkies Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 20 2015 02:40 pm

Title: Chapter 24 pt 1

That was great. He's showing emotion and telling her how he feels even though he's so sad right now. It's important that he called her.  We know she loves him, but she's been scared. I think they're making a breakthrough.  Things should get better and better for their relationship. I really want them to be happy, get married and have some kids. Fill up the big house!!!  Great update.

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 20 2015 11:37 am

Title: Chapter 24 pt 1

Wow! What a great moment between the two of them. Love how Henry finally broke down and is releasing what's inside. It was raw and I felt like I was in the moment with them. My fav chapter thus far. 

Reviewer: Tina Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 20 2015 06:51 am

Title: Chapter 24 pt 1

So beautiful. Their pain, their love! Update soon.

Reviewer: katt Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 20 2015 02:57 am

Title: Chapter 24 pt 1

Henry and Val are two very broken people and I am hoping they can help each other.  Awesome sauce!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 20 2015 02:23 am

Title: Chapter 24 pt 1

Nothing to say, but it was simple beautiful.

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed [Report This]
Date: January 19 2015 11:57 pm

Title: Prologue

Henry confessed he loved her...I think Val is stronger than he is, but they need one another and most importantly are meant to be together.

I love each and every update--thank you.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 19 2015 11:41 pm

Title: Chapter 24 pt 1

Aww so sad and sweet. I love this 😌

Reviewer: M3l4n1_C4rt3r Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 19 2015 07:28 pm

Title: Chapter 24 pt 1

My poor, poor Henry. I am so used to seeing him so together. UGH! These last chapters have been so emotional! Update soon, pls! 

Reviewer: UnwrittenConfessions Signed [Report This]
Date: January 19 2015 06:10 pm

Title: Chapter 24 pt 1

I'm glad Val was there for Henry in his time of need.  They actually seem to be comforting each other .  💗. Thanks for the update. 

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 19 2015 04:45 pm

Title: Chapter 24 pt 1

Beautiful. Just absolutely beautiful.. Love this chapter

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 19 2015 04:12 pm

Title: Chapter 24 pt 1

This update was the best one yet. The development of your characters really shows and it's so uplifting to see them swtich roles. Val taking on the suit and armor while Henry is the damsel. We constantly see him chasing Val and attempting to rescue her, but now we are able to see her growth as she rescues him from his own demons. It's the first time she acknowledges her insecurities in a relationship then dismisses them for someone's greater good and I'm proud of Val for that. Hopefully this chapter or the next few marks a turning point for their relationship. Henry is growing up and setting roots, Val is accepting herself, and overall they are becoming better and letting go of their own personal chains and baggage keeping them from happiness. 

Thank you for sharing! 

Reviewer: SleepEasy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 19 2015 04:08 pm

Title: Chapter 24 pt 1

WAHHHHHHHHHH :((((( THAT IS SO DAMN HEARTBREAKING ! Seriously to see him so broken... He's like trying to be strong around her even though he's mourning. His guards finally came shattering down and it really broke them both. I honestly cannot wait for the next chapter. It's painful to think of how much heartache they must be going through. To be so close to each other but to be so far in a sense. I don't want her to jump back to him straight away, but like she said, he needed her. I'm so fucken happy that you updated. Henry is my all time favourite. I love how he kept saying that she was too good for him... When others would say the exact opposite to her. It's so heartbreaking when he says he loves her... Because she wouldn't believe him in a sense AND who could blame her. But this chappie was beautiful as always. 

Poor Henry 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 wahhhhhh :'(

Reviewer: Gordana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 19 2015 01:40 pm



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