I love the concept. There are some grammatical errors. Caps, dialogue, things like that. There isn't a lot of descripition, which isn't necessarily a terrible thing.
Reviewer: Dreamingofalifetime Signed [Report This]Date: April 03 2014 07:35 am
Good start. Thanks
Author's Response:
thank you
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: May 13 2013 12:03 am
Good start. Is this your first?
Author's Response:
yea
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: May 12 2013 10:55 pm
Very good start
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: May 12 2013 10:20 pm
was the mis-spelling on purpose?
Author's Response:
I tried to go back and edit the spelling mistakes as well as i could
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 12 2013 04:48 am
Check your grammar... Please.
Author's Response:
I know im going over it now! Thanks for the advice though.
Reviewer: LolaWrites Signed [Report This]Date: May 12 2013 03:28 am