Oh gosh. I can't imagine waking up to discover a stranger in my bedReviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 02 2014 03:18 pm
HAHA! I like it. It was entertaining seeing through his eyes and his thoughts are a riot. Definitely a guys and definitely workable. Im not a writer but Im a hard core reader and lover of all things literary and you my dear very well. Thank you for sharing.Reviewer: amlaamar Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20 2013 02:09 am
i really really really enjoyed this story, it was short and sweet :) i think you did a good job so i'll look forward to upcoming stories - thank you!!
You're most welcome. Now I have new respect for all the writers on the Chamber... y'all make it look easy, whipping out ten chapter story masterpieces. I can only bow down and hope it gets easier with practice.Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18 2013 04:37 pm
This chaper was especially good. What an unusual way to find each other. I liked it a lot.Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 18 2013 02:10 pm
Thanks for the update! This story is great so far!Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 16 2013 05:45 pm
You stopped there!!!!!!!!! OMG, please update and can you make the chapters longer? This story is too good for its chapters to be read in less than 2 minutes.
If you knew how long I agonize over each word, you would take more time with it. Don't wolf it down. Enjoy it. I'm trying to make a gourmet meal for you... LOL
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Date: May 16 2013 04:26 pm
WOW...this story has me fascinated. I'm still a little puzzled at Marianna's latest actions but that I hope will be cleared up with some more back story. As to dude...rofl. I guess that's the last time he will be crawling through a window.
I agree wholeheartedly that most Jamaican woman do have a low tolerance for bullshit. Although the misnomer that Jamaicans are violent/passionate expressives it does hold some weight IMO. Marianna's immediate reaction though peppered with hilarity was so typical Jamaican and appropriate of any woman in that circumstance.
More please!Reviewer: siennagray Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16 2013 02:38 pm
:/ he raped her though. I can't imagine anyone being okay with some random guy being in their bed and actually coming inside them and not feel threatened or call the police.
Thank you for your response. I agree with you. Rape is rape.
I would like to resepctfully point out that this is a fantasy. It's not logical, or PC. That's why I tried to put as many warnings on here as possible. If you feel uncomfortable with the story, then please do not read on. I would hate to have ruined your day.
If you would like me to write something else, then please post a challenge, and I'll see what I can do.Reviewer: LolaWrites Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16 2013 02:22 pm
Dare I say this is entertainingly crazy, yes being a woman the rape thing should bug me but Mariann is taking it in such a steady stride I'll be the crazy one to complain.There's some rationality in their insanity (I hope). So please do your thing, I would like to see some more.Reviewer: Lindy Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16 2013 12:33 pm
At least it was a woman. This could've gone real wrong, real fast. :)
More, please.Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 16 2013 04:43 am
The single fact that she's a Jamaican and he hasn't been beaten bloody tells me this is crack-fic. But seriously, Jason....you want to get the attention of the girl you like, so you thought breaking and entering (and uninvited sex!) was a great idea? Here's another r-word for you, son : RAPIST!
LOL!Reviewer: Leo the Yardie Chick Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15 2013 11:35 pm