Hello! I really like this story.are u ever going to update it?please do i am begging you.Reviewer: Gaelle Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 26 2017 12:19 pm
This story infuriates me but I can't stop reading it, it is good and wrong at the same time!
The ambivalence of the situation suggests that one could forgive an act so repulsive because the child had the curves of a woman, but at age 11,she is what she is: a child. A young child is not sexually mature enough to understand what a man wants of a woman and Raymond should not have raped the child that was Ophelia even with the curves he claimed she had! I understand why Youth Services is harassing him because he is a child molester and should not have custody of his daughter. It is normal to evaluate a pedophile on his own with a child, especially his own flesh and blood!
Raymond, Teddy (Ben) and Ophelia need therapy because this type of relationship (child molester/ rapist/ product of that rape (molestation) and rape victim) will end badly if they don't get the right help!
Don't get me wrong, Ophelia needs to be saved so that her family can get the right to stop being so dysfunctional and start their healing process because right now, their story reminds me of slavery and how the masters would hide their need for child molestation by raping young black slaves because they had all the curves at the right places, tempting them instead of their white, shapeless, wives. We need to stop that imagery and sexualisation of the black child, making it right to rape children.
Please, help me see the light! I am certain that love will win! They are Imperfection personified working toward happinness!Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 29 2014 07:59 pm
great story can't for chapter 17.Reviewer: Martha Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 07 2014 07:37 pm
Come on Rymond, go bust that coffin open so you and Bennie can go get O!
He is well off financially, so why not have that numbers traced to at least get the general location when where the calls came from and then find out what hospital employees have any connections in the area.
Maybe I am watching too much CSI, but still, who announced her death, who was there to verify the death?
Maybe you can make O find a birth certificate which proves she is really older than her age, bc I am still having a hard time with Raymond being a pedophile, even though he thought she was 12 at the time he had her---idk...
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Date: September 07 2014 04:13 am
This just keeps getting better and better wonder what's in her casket this story is just full of surprises can't wait for the next chapterReviewer: KVgurl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 06 2014 08:12 pm
Although I don't care for Raymond and what he did to Ophelia or his sister, but to kidnap a person and hold them against their will like the doctor is doing is just wrong...no matter what the reason behind it.
I still love this story and I hope Ben, gets himself together so he will become a good husband and father.Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 06 2014 07:22 pm
It won't belong before Raymond has Ophelia back. I can't wait for Dr. Rollins to get his ass kicked. Who made him judge and jury? He's cooky himself. Look how he kept Ophelia from her family. And sure doesn't show any respect for his wife. He treats her like a second class citizen.Reviewer: juno Signed [Report This]
Date: September 06 2014 03:25 am
WOW! It has been forever since I saw this story updated I almost thought I was hallucinating or we were getting a notice that it had been taken down. The Ophelia lives twist is definitely unexpected. I certainly am glad she survived. I was certain she died and the idea that she was kidnapped seems a bit farfetched. But then again this is fantasy so dream on!Reviewer: bambi4real Signed [Report This]
Date: September 03 2014 04:37 am
I can't believe I miss this update. This was a something out of this world. Crazy Dr. Bob is more twisted then Raymond and that's saying something. Raymond maybe be slightly off but he is good father to his daughter. And dear Bob... got a mean streak. Look how he treats his wife. She's just as much a prisoner as Ophelia.Reviewer: juno Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30 2014 10:32 pm
so happy you are back more soon very soonReviewer: faye Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 24 2014 12:27 am