Interesting twist in this update! Didn't see that coming! What a sicko!! He kidnapped her and got away with it for a year?!! Hope Elizabeth stays strong and helps Ophelia so that she can be reunited with Justice! That wacko needs to be in the mental house! He's not helping Ophelia, he living out his fantasy!!!! Hope he and his accomplishes get caught and get a reality check!! That is so evil what he has done to Ophelia and her family!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: August 22 2014 07:19 am
Ok, Brenda, I admit that I've mainly glossed over this story, never really digging in for whatever reason. But last night I decided to read, really read a couple of chapters. I couldn't stop! Read the whole thing thus far. I'm so late to the party up to this point its not even funny...lol! I can't add to what I'm sure has already been said, so I'll just say overall.....oh my god!!
The most compelling and complex character, by design, I'm sure....RAYMOND!!! Cause really, WTF?!! I'm a mixture of confusion, revulsion, anger, distrust, and maybe, hope? Completely and utterly ambivalent towards him!! I so understand what Bennie is feeling about him and Ophelia. I'm feeling it!
I don't even know what else to say except I'm so in now!
This is so much good stuff!
Author's Response:
LOL I'm glad you liked it. Raymond and Ophelia are so different from anything I've ever written. Killing her off killed my muse and I had to drop the story. I couldn't write any more. I didn't want to kill her, but the muse was persistent. Then last week outof the blue the muse arose and told me that Ophelia wasn't really dead and that she was being held against her will. I was like, What????
Many people were upset by Raymond's evilness and he is bad, but he has a weakness and her name is Ophelia. LOL Ophelia is a bit touched in the brain, but hey she loves Raymond yet she despises him for what he did at the same time.
So, you'll be hearing more from those two. The muse wants what it wants.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21 2014 09:54 pm
Did not see that happening..... amazing...... Will we be shocked by the person whos helping him..... Please update soon
Reviewer: Guest Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 21 2014 09:48 pm
Awesome!!!!!
Reviewer: SweetCoCo76 Signed [Report This]Date: August 21 2014 08:41 pm
Thank goodness!
Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]Date: August 21 2014 06:28 pm
Ophelia is alive!! I want the doctor and all of his accomplices dead. I may think Ophelia is stupid and nimub in the head and that Raymond doesn't deserve her love but this is just plain wrong. I feel sorry for the Liz. Thank you Brenda!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 21 2014 03:52 pm
Ms. B, you throw me for a loop each time I read your stories that's why I love your writing it keeps me intrigued from beginning to end.
I am so happy that Ophelia is a live but again she has missed bonding with another child due to someone crazy intruding into her life first her mom now this crazy a## doctor. Ophelia is strong though she has gone through so much but keeps hanging in there. I hope Dr. Quack does not break her before help comes and I hope that Raymond understands and believes Elizabeth's call and gets his head out of his behind even tell and let Bennie hear the message. Ophelia needs her HEA.
Thank you for a wonderful update and I am so happy to hear that the muse is on fire. Let's keep it that way. :D
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: August 21 2014 02:09 pm
im really glad ophelia is alive!! thanks for the update!!
Reviewer: brownskingurl Signed [Report This]Date: August 21 2014 12:25 pm
Once again, I have to say dammmmmmn. You just threw me for another curve. This story is unpredictable (in a good way). Keep the chapters coming.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 21 2014 08:09 am
Yessss! Ophelia is alive. Absolutely in love with the twist!
Reviewer: Anomu Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 21 2014 07:54 am
Oh my God this chapter made me cry.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 21 2014 07:29 am
I can't tell you how happy I was to see this update. What a treat. I am so glad Ophelia ia alive. It broke my heart when she "died". The poor woman has been through so much. that Bob is crazier than a gay man at a Beyoncé concert. I hope Raymond has the body exhumed. Loved this chapter.
Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed [Report This]Date: August 21 2014 07:25 am
scandalous! luv it
Reviewer: sunsetdawn Signed [Report This]Date: August 21 2014 05:49 am
Quelle suprise! Interesting plot twist. I hated that Ophelia died just like that. The muse reigns!
Reviewer: readwonderfully Signed [Report This]Date: August 21 2014 05:17 am
Once again Dammmmmn, did not see that coming.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 21 2014 05:05 am
Damn!!!! I did not see that coming.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 21 2014 04:27 am
Miss Brenda, you have shocked me speechless!!! Brilliant development! Brilliant! I bow to the muse.
Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 21 2014 03:56 am
i cant believe you just dropped this bomb as if nothing is hapenning. How could you do this...now i'm going to turn into a junkie for this story again. WHY?
Reviewer: no YOU DIDN'T Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 21 2014 03:09 am
I honestly thought this story has died with Ophelia's death...great twist, a bit macabre and far-fetched, but probable! Carry on.
Reviewer: Agape Realms Signed [Report This]Date: August 21 2014 02:59 am
well that was a suprise, so she is a life. i cant wait to read what happens next.
Reviewer: lucky Signed [Report This]Date: August 21 2014 02:42 am
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!!! I cannot believe it, lol!!! Ophelia is alive, OMGGGGGGGGGG!!!! I love this story, but I REALLY hated when Opehila died supposedly. What Raymond did to Ophelia when is beyond reproach. That being said Ophelia had a choice once she became an adult and being an adult she chose Raymond and I know that controversy will be swept all over the place with people's thoughts, but it remains that she feels the way feels. Whether one believes she needs psycho therapy or not, she is not insane. Now, enough with the moral verbiage. I hope Raymond finds her, this Dr that has her now is luney. What is it with Ophelia and crazy people, lol! Anyway, I am just thrilled that she is alive. Of course, I cannot wait for the next udpate. You are such a freakin awesome writer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 21 2014 02:27 am
Please Muse! Stop the tease and give me more chapters before your Silence enrobes the author once again! I love the twist, the crazinest!
Reviewer: kat Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 21 2014 02:26 am
OMG Girl i bow 2 u never saw it comming
Reviewer: minxie Signed [Report This]Date: August 20 2014 10:22 am
Meant to comment this earlier, first of this story is the best! I hope u finish it b4 publishing it as an ebook. But for the warning, please put character death, I was so hurt when Ophelia passed, but I knew someone was going to die when Raymond refused to feel any remorse for his actions regarding raping and setting up Ophelia and in as sense forcing her to put Teddy/Bennie up for adoption. Great story though and love how u introduced Kevin and Alicia.
Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]Date: August 10 2014 10:31 pm
Loooove it!
Reviewer: Lotsojunk Signed [Report This]Date: June 08 2014 06:30 am