Title: Chapter 23

I truly hope Dimitri is strong enough to always choose Sahara.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 03 2014 10:25 am

Title: Chapter 23

So glad to see D show up for her at the end and brought me to tears when she said no one ever chooses me.  Now D finally understands and said the right thing. 

He still has to face papa bear and sister dearest still needs to apologize for spitting in her face---would love Sasha to tell Nayla that it better never happen again.  Nayla sure acts like she has no remorse for her part in S&D relationship demise. 

Please give us an epilogue.  Great update!

 

Reviewer: Penelope52 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 03 2014 08:05 am

Title: Chapter 23

Great chapter. I'm glad she's finally got the family stuff out ther way & although her mom acted like she did I loved how U wrote the grandfather & his explanation I think that gave her a sense of closure. He shows up right on time. She needed a good cry. Now about them getting bk I think yes but not until he clears a few other things stand & make his stance with her & allow nothing or noone to disrespect her again.

Reviewer: kvgurl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 03 2014 06:39 am

Title: Chapter 23

This meeting has brought closure to Sasha's past because she remembered how her mother treated her prior to her being given to the state.  It still hurts to know the one that helped give you life did not value your life so she must value her own.  I think she should forgive Dimitri and they can start dating.  Nothing too serious right now because he has his own demons to face, can we say sperm donator.  He needs to make sure he can be there 100% for her and has his own house in order if they are to build a solid foundation together.  This was her first level and now we need his.  Can't wait for more updates.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 03 2014 06:38 am

Title: Chapter 23

I always liked him, I think and thought that she should forgive him and take some of the blame for the breakup. I'm glad she can finally stop hanging on the wish for her mother. Move on with people that care about you. Sometimes it's friends that love and care more about you then blood family.

Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 03 2014 04:07 am

Title: Cast

love love love this story u rock more soon

Reviewer: faye Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 03 2014 03:36 am

Title: Chapter 23

Annnnd that's how I wanted this to go!! YES!! Its time for them to get back together. This was big. This was the moment she had been waiting for most of her life. And Dmitri came. Not being asked, but because he knew she would need him. I'm also anxious for some loving to get going for these two :)

 

Very Nice!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 03 2014 01:53 am

Title: Chapter 23

I knew that mother of hers would hurt her again.  I'm glad Dmitri went to meet her and I think she can start forgiving him finally. I want Sasha to feel loved so bad so please move on to the part where they are happy and in love.  We need some romance, a wedding and baby and please rub the conceited blonde' s (I forget her name) all in Sasha and Dmitri' s happiness!

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2014 11:56 pm

Title: Chapter 23

Even though Dmitri does seem to be a better person, I still think his 'reunion' with Sasha has been too rushed and they still have a long way to go before they should even consider getting back together. But hey, it's a story and more importantly your story, so write whatever and however you want.

The 'reunion' with Sasha and her mother pretty much went the way I expected it to. Hopefully she can now begin to come to terms with everything and feel at peace with her past so she can move forward.

Reviewer: Guest Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 02 2014 09:20 pm

Title: Chapter 23

Awwww! I had a feeling her mother was going to be a witch/bitch.  I am at least happy that her grandfather said those things to her and was genuine.  I hope that she can at least have a relationship with him before he passes and Janelle ass can go kick rocks in the middle of heavy traffic.  I wonder when she finds out that Sasha has done well for herself will she try to make ammends only so she can get money or whatever out of her.

I am so happy to see that Dmitri showed up to be her rock and so she would not have to suffer this upset alone.  I hope she realizes that she is not alone and he is there for her truly.  I hope she is able to let go now of the past and know she is loved for her here and now.  That she does have people in her life that care about her Teagan, Dina, Carter, her office assistant and many more cause it would seem that Dominic cares about her too and wants to see her happy and we all know of course that Dmitri is in love with her he just had to find himself and get Nadia situated and taken care of.

I hope they are able to make it through (Dmitri and Sasha).

Dmitri's dad I not sure what I want to say about him he just seems so selfish and demeaning to me but someone loves him (his wife) and apparently his kids Nadia and Dominic are concerned about him.  His love though is hard to follow its not conventional its controlling and manipulative but I think he loves his kids in his own way.

Thank you for your update I can't wait to see what comes next.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2014 09:02 pm

Title: Chapter 23

I'm with you I am ready for them to be together again. I also hopes she gets to know her grandfather inspite of her mom.

Reviewer: shellyme Signed [Report This]
Date: June 02 2014 08:57 pm

Title: Chapter 23

Dmitri's good in my book I never stopped liking him.

Reviewer: kiavicmcp Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2014 08:00 pm

Title: Chapter 23

I was so moved by that chapter, I am glad we all know what happend and that at least her grandfather was a decent man. I hope she holds on to that and that she is a great woman who overcame the harsh upbringing.

As for Dmitri, I hope she gives him another chance. It's rare to be able to say sorry and try again, I hope she can forgive him and make him work for her everyday for the rest of his life. LOL!!!!

 

Great job, please post soon :D

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2014 07:39 pm

Title: Cast

I'm ready for them to be together as well!!! He has proven his love and that will continue when Sasha says she wants to be with him!! They have both changed and are at different places than before where they can actually love one another!  I can't wait!! Thanks for the update! Update sooooon! :) 

Reviewer: britt Signed [Report This]
Date: June 02 2014 07:13 pm

Title: Chapter 23

Yes yes yes she should take him back!!! 

Great chapter :)

Reviewer: mrmalone Signed [Report This]
Date: June 02 2014 07:03 pm

Title: Chapter 23

Short but great update. My only criticism, and this is completely love, is that the dialogue between Sasha and Janelle didn't flow. Sasha's explanation of searching and wondering and being shipped from home to home should have come after other heated and explosive denial or uncaring comments from Janelle. 

I hope the grandfather will find a way to get Sasha pictures of herself as a child, pictures of her grandparents and other objects that will help her know that even if her mom didn't want her, her grandparents did. 

Thank you for freely sharing your gift with us. 

Reviewer: Admirer Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 02 2014 06:28 pm

Title: Chapter 23

I have been waiting for this momen for a long time! I had faith in both parties! What happened in the hospital between Sasha and Dmitri needed to happen in order for both of them to love the other the way they deserve. I was holding my breath when she and Carter ended things. I thought  to myself as I read this is how a man should love and treat a woman even if the feelings aren't reciprocated. I never had a problem with the pictures you posted that was set three years later. I don't think you should have explained yourself at all. If you really thought you should have I believe you did that when you explained her toned appearance. With Dmitri being as fine as he is it'll be hard to explain that. Lmao. Once again you were magnificent. May Love and Peace surround you.

PS: Can grandpa come to the wedding???

Reviewer: Nita Roberts Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2014 06:19 pm

Title: Chapter 4

I'm homesick from work and this story is making me feel much better. Faye is a bitch. I hope Sasha drops her as a friend.

Reviewer: azzure1020 Anonymous starstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2014 06:07 pm

Title: Chapter 23

AWWW!! Loved it! Put them both out their misery, they need to give each other a chance.

Reviewer: shadow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2014 06:03 pm

Title: Chapter 23

This was a great chapter but I think maybe she and Dmitri should start off as friends because Dmitri still has to face his father before he can have any type of relationship with Sasha. And Sasha needs time to heal from her disappointment in her reunion with her mother because she is emotionally vulnerable right now. I hope that Carter will still be around I really like him.

Reviewer: AvidReader28 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 02 2014 06:03 pm

Title: Chapter 23

Wonderful update.  Sometimes we need to visit our past before going forward.  Great job

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2014 05:35 pm

Title: Chapter 23

I think Dmitri has proven himself and that Sasha should forgive him and give love a chance agsin. Her momma is a piece of work, but I am glad  her grandfather told about her life and her mother always being a selfish bitch!  I am so proud that she told Janele about herself! That ho is crazy!! Love this story and thank you so much for the update.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2014 03:39 pm

Title: Chapter 23

And this is what you call character development ladies and gents. This chapter was really heart wrenching and I felt for Sasha and her mom's continued rejection, however, I'm glad Sasha realized she had a semi-better life being away from her mom, even despite feeling alone and rejected. If her mom hadn't abandoned her there'd be no telling the kind of person she might be today. In some cases being adopted or a foster kid works out better than remaining with one's biological parents because not everyone should have kids. 

And Dimitri has won me over. I have been giving him major side-eye for a while but now I really feel that he genuinely loves and cares for Sasha, so yes I'm more than ready for them to get things back on track. Loved the update!

Reviewer: Lapis Love Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 02 2014 03:22 pm

Title: Cast

Yessssssss I love the update.  Can't wait to read the next chapter

Reviewer: liltay550 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 02 2014 01:45 pm

Title: Chapter 23

Yes please give him a chance. He has earned it!! 

Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: June 02 2014 01:33 pm



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