Title: Chapter 23

I loved this chapter.  I wish that her grandfather and her would continue to talk and she could connect with him.  I'm glad that Dimitri showed up and yes I'm ready for them to get back together again.

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 02 2014 01:06 pm

Title: Chapter 23

I do not like the new pics but that's ok. I am ready for a reunion so write what you feel. I am happy that this story is continuing.

Update Soon!!

Reviewer: Kaye2008 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2014 01:02 pm

Title: Chapter 23

She should definitely give him another chance and yes please get them back together like today lol

Reviewer: kiki729 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2014 12:11 pm

Title: Chapter 22

I like the current pics of Sasha and Dmitri.

Whether Sasha want to admit it or not but she need closure on her past so she can move on with her future. Throwing up walls and closing herself off is too exhausting.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 01 2014 11:54 pm

Title: Chapter 22

thanks for the update sasha!! more please!!!!!

Reviewer: brownskingurl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 30 2014 05:22 pm

Title: Chapter 22

Great chapter. Great story overall with twists and turns. Update soon!!! 

Reviewer: laurie94 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 28 2014 05:15 pm

Title: Chapter 22

I love the new cast pictures. You are right, the new picture of Sasha embodies the newfound strength and determination  her character has obtained. Dmitri's new picture gives him the newly acquired vulnerability his character lacked for so long. Let's face it he was an (ass),unlikeable person. Great job, bringing their lives forward instead of keeping them living in the past!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 28 2014 01:27 pm

Title: Chapter 22

Dimitri has been forgiven Lololol!  Glad that you're entering a subplot with Slade and Dina. I was wondering when they would resurface. I love your gift of storytelling. Your story is keeping us spellbound and waiting for the next update. Thank you for freely sharing your gift. 

Reviewer: Girl!! Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 28 2014 11:25 am

Title: Chapter 22

Wait she said "LIke I need you" out loud?!??! LOLLL yo feelings are running deep with these two. Intense. They're both so intense that I just need them to get back together so that the world can continue to rotate properly hahaha these two are a hoot.

Also I never had an issue with the change of pics. I got where you were going with it - the change in Sasha was pretty evident for me and yeah she lost some innocence, but that's what happens. Big things like what happened between her and Dmitri will change someone so that I did not fight against. It was good though to hear your thoughts and what you were going for. I did not notice the change of power between the two pictures and now that you point it out, it's very fitting! 

Again great update and keep it coming. These two have got to get their situation in order lawd

Reviewer: thincakes Signed [Report This]
Date: May 28 2014 03:22 am

Title: Chapter 22

That ending was perfecto! Dmitri is definitely proving himself. He is winning ME over lol.

Reviewer: hazelbazel92 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28 2014 12:53 am

Title: Chapter 22

Ok, that last bit with Dmitri was the sexiest damn thing! He's proving that he can be and is Sasha's man in every way she needs him to be. Its slow going, but he's getting the job done. Love it!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2014 11:55 pm

Title: Chapter 22

So happy about this update!  Dmitri did a great thing finding her mother.  I also think the three years was a long time, but that's how long they both needed to grow and change.  I'm glad she's playing hard to get too!  Anyway, please update soon.

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2014 10:52 pm

Title: Chapter 22

She should really give him another chance she has to take some of the blame.. move on it's been 3 years!

Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2014 08:52 pm

Title: Chapter 21

damn...

Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2014 08:36 pm

Title: Chapter 20

I think she did the right thing by eating with him, she has half of the fault for their breakup.

Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2014 08:22 pm

Title: Chapter 22

Keep Dmitri humble. I still dont like himbut he is wearing me down. However I really hope that you even allude to his sisters readiness for recovery. Oddly enough I have been Dmitri and you cant want it more than the person suffering from the illness. Thsts why I felt his excuse was just that because unless she was ready to get help and change all the sacrifice in the world wont change things. And unfortunately relapses are very common so I hope he proves that he is ready for the long haul and not going to bail when his family has a crisis. I hope this new info helps her heal for Sasha. If Dmitri benefits good for him.

Reviewer: Acdromance Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 27 2014 07:39 pm

Title: Chapter 22

Dmitri did hurt Sasha but he was hurting as well.  He was hurting for his little sister and took it out on Sasha. However, I still say  Sasha should have stayed in her own lane.  Growing up as an orphan she doesn't and didn't have firm grasp of family dynamics.  So glad to see an update!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2014 04:51 pm

Title: Chapter 22

Sasha it's tIme to woman up maybe once she confronts her human incubator she will ready to deal with her feelings for Dmitri.  I hope that she has learned to keep her opinioms to herself when she doesn't understand the entire situation. Great update!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2014 04:24 pm

Title: Chapter 22

That was a great update.  I am glad that Dmitri is finally opening up to the people that love him like his brother and best friend and finally opening up to the woman that fell in love with him and he recognizes that he hurt her.

He has matured to and did not use the information about her mother to coax her back into his life.

Sasha has info in her hands about her biological mother.  Like Dmitri said she should not go by herself but with someone that is going to emotional support her.  At this time I have not decided though if it should be Dmitri though.  Even though he wants to be back with her I don't think that they have gotten back to that level that she can use him as a shoulder to lean on.  She should lean on someone that has been there from the beginning or know longer but I am hesitate also for that to be Teagan I am not sure what is going on with her but she is still being wreckless and irresponsible with her life case in point when she came to visit got plastered and Sasha had to save her ass from going with a stranger.

Thank you for the update.  Hope to see more soon.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2014 01:53 pm

Title: Chapter 22

Ohmygoodness this was so shivering hottttt! Pleeeease upload soon, the love I have for these too is too immense for words. And side note, I like Cartwr I definitely agree Sarah should have him as a friend, he seems like a cool guy.

Reviewer: Anomy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2014 01:41 pm

Title: Chapter 22

Very good.  The changes to both characters matched well physically and emotionally.  Thank you.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 27 2014 01:01 pm

Title: Chapter 22

Awesome!! Progress is being made. Love Dmitri being a better person. 

Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27 2014 12:14 pm

Title: Chapter 22

Damn, damn, damn you Dmitri! Just when I think that I can walk away from you. You turn around and do something so selfless like this. Dang now I have to reconsider not liking you. I await your next chapter sha2011, as usual you made the wait worhtwhile.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 27 2014 09:15 am

Title: Chapter 22

Really liked it.am looking forward to the next chapter.Thanks.

Reviewer: shadow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2014 07:58 am

Title: Chapter 22

Woah..... Ok, I am Team Dmitri again. Lol! He has regained my faith in him. That was extremely sweet of him to do that for her. I hope that he keeps on this Non-douchebag attitude. And I love that Slade is back, I hope he follows suite and get his woman back!! LOL!

Great job! Please post soon :D

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2014 06:51 am



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