Title: Chapter 22

What a wonderful update..emotion are hard to define

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2014 06:39 am

Title: Chapter 22

Thanks for the new chapter! I really liked that Sasha was honest with Carter and didn't try and play games with him. And I am glad they try and be friends.

Though this PI thing was a bit much, at the end it was worth it as it helped Sasha in her researches. So good job, Dmitri. I still root for you.

I liked younger Sasha's pic but I am ok with her knew one. I understand that she changed and grown. She owned her part in the break up and toughen up a little which isn't all bad. She didn't fall right back with Dmitri, she has valid concerns and reason to be cautious, but she also needs to be honest with herself. Now I wonder about that Mamma business, I hope she'll be to start sorting out her mommy and abandonment issues.

Reviewer: RedHobo Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2014 06:21 am

Title: Chapter 22

Damn, Dimitri is putting it on her with the words and actions.  He is coming out swinging.  I like it.  He is the vulnerable one because it is her choice whether she returns to his arms permanently or leave him in the dust.  I do like Carter character as he provides her with sound wisdom and calm words.  He judges by what he see's and not what he is 100% told.  Now on to Slade and Dominic.  Honestly I don't want Dominic hurt.  I think he has been the most consistent and trustworthy of them all and for Slade to come back and poss win the girl would be a big insult to Dominic if he truly loves her.  How will  you manipulate their story so I don't hate Slade and ole girl. 

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 27 2014 06:10 am

Title: Chapter 21

I think she should wait awhile before jumping right in the relationship.

 

Reviewer: silentwriter Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14 2014 04:44 am

Title: Chapter 4

Whoa! With friends like Faye who needs enemies o_O

Dina and Slade, heh?

Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 13 2014 06:10 am

Title: Chapter 2

That doesn't excuse his rudeness of the first encounter. Up to the next chapter XD

Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 13 2014 03:34 am

Title: Chapter 1

Damn! O_o

It's an Meg Griffin O-O

Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed [Report This]
Date: May 12 2014 07:59 pm

Title: Chapter 21

I prefer the original pictures-portrayal of characters. I hate when authors change it up after they've made us fall in love with the originals...but whatever

Reviewer: got2luvmel Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09 2014 02:24 pm

Title: Chapter 21

I prefer the original pictures-portrayal of characters. I hate when authors change it up after they've made us fall in love with the originals...but whatever

Reviewer: got2luvmel Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09 2014 02:14 pm

Title: Cast

Dammit I tried reviewing but I see it didn't come up - anyhow! First of all thank you for thinking outside the box and deciding on not making Carter the bad guy. i agree that a theme that pops up waaay too much and instead Sasha will end up with the guy she truly loves. Another thing I like about this story is that it doesn't necessary have to end with a hea for Sasha and Dimitri. I get the feeling that they will grow and heal towards the end and I really like that!

Thank you - good luck in Japan and I look forward to upcoming updates!

Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09 2014 10:37 am

Title: Chapter 21

I'm proud of Dmitri. He has grown and will have to be patient with Sasha. Sasha still has a long ways to go. She doesn't realize that locking up her hurt and heart is not helping her. She stated she forgave Dmitri but I don't think she fully has. I thinking them taking small steps is the way to go.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 09 2014 04:08 am

Title: Cast

I also prefer the old pics of Sasha and Dimitri.

Reviewer: Penelope52 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09 2014 02:20 am

Title: Chapter 21

Well, I think the heart wants what the heart wants but I hope Sasha makes Dimitri work a little harder. Sending flowers isn't enough. Carter deserves the truth. I like the old pic of Sasha. She looks so much sweeter and even though her heart was broken, I still think she's the same sweet Sasha. The new pic reminds me of a straight up seductress/diva which doesn't really fit Sasha's personality. Enjoyed this chapter. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2014 04:10 pm

Title: Chapter 21

It's strange cause i really really reeeaaally love your story but i don't like the main male character at all and i want Sasha to get over him and move on.

About the pictures, i prefere the old Sasha and the new Dmitri.

good work !

Reviewer: siobhan Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08 2014 10:08 am

Title: Cast

Sasha needs to let Carter know where her heart really lies and what is going on between her and D (the good and the bad).  If Carter still wants to be her friend. then they hould do friend things and hang out---D has to work his azz off to win her back and I mean for more than a few weeks. 

I can't wait to see what D does when his dad finds out he is chasing Sash, wonder if he will tell Pops to butt out.  Still can't forgive or feel sorry for Nadia until she mans up and apologizes to Sasha. 

If I was Sasha I wouldn't hold my breath where this family is concerned---she should still live her life as if D is not in it, bc i just feel he still does not realize the damage he did to her. 

Reviewer: Penelope52 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2014 08:52 am

Title: Chapter 21

I am loving Sasha's new look! I think you are doing the right thing with the relationship by not letting her fall back into that trap, without him working for it!

Sasha deserves better, and Dmitri deserves to get his Ass kicked! 

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 08 2014 06:41 am

Title: Chapter 21

LOL you threw Carter in there?!?! Stop it that's naughty

Dmitri is the type of guy in which I'll be nice to him because my home girl loves him, but I'll won't myself forgive him for hurting her that much for a long time. 

Also OK Miss I have my Own LOVE LIFE... I don't so imma need these updates to be every night ok. I'm kidding. Do your tang I'll be here whenever you come back

Thanks for the update!! 

Reviewer: thincakes Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08 2014 05:50 am

Title: Cast

In my best Etta James ~ "Aaaaaaaaaaaat laaaaaaaast!"

 

Thanks for that update. I was on edge wondering how the cliff hanger would round out.

Reviewer: HarperSinclaire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2014 05:15 am

Title: Chapter 21

She should choose Carter. Dmitri had his chance and he threw it away.

Reviewer: Chey2four Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 08 2014 04:56 am

Title: Chapter 21

I understand Sasha being hurt by Dmitri and being wary of trying again with him, but I do think he has changed and should be allowed to prove himself to her. 

Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2014 04:26 am

Title: Chapter 21

Lovin it!!! I am torn about Dmitri, but I can't help but hope they get back together. Despite all his flaws he is a good man with bad trust issues. LOL!! I am loving how much hell Sasha is giving him though, he deserves it.

 

Please post soon and Great Job :D

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2014 04:00 am

Title: Cast

do not like the new sasha and dmitri now the story love it more soon happy u are back

Reviewer: faye Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2014 03:00 am

Title: Chapter 21

Sasha did not deserve Dmitiri's nasty hateful spew three years ago. She was wrong to do what she did but his reaction was over the top. He would never have treated her like some $20 hooker that wouldn't leave. He would not have humiliated her in front of everyone like that. That just doesn't sit right with me. She shouldn't hold a grudge but that doesn't mean she forgets. She should keep moving forward. Dmitri is a step backwards; he's her past. 

Reviewer: JFJD Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08 2014 02:56 am

Title: Chapter 21

Hey, welcome back ! So good to read from Sascha and Dmitri again! THANKS!!!!!

So I liked how their conversation went during that dinner. Dmitri sure did some good thinking and was great at expressing his feelings and communicating with her. I am so, so rooting for him. I liked how he owned is faults while aknowledgeing he wasn't ready, but aslo how he pointed out how the relationship was going way too fast for him, at that point in his life, with all his family issues. They both had so many issues, and I am glad that they have the opportunities to give their relationship another try. Sure Dmitri still has some maturing and growth to do, but that's life too ! Even without as heavy past as theirs, any relationship is always hard to build. It takes time and effort and energy. And sometimes it does'nt work. Or it only work for a time and then people fall out of love and move on, and more often than not, on still friendly terms. But at least, they have tried and lived and loved and made memories So I really hope Sascha decides to give it a try too. So I reaa hope that Sasha will walk through her fears and give it a try too !

Reviewer: RedHobo Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2014 02:49 am

Title: Chapter 21

Yeah!!! You're back!!  Wow I love this story and I've been stalking the site for month's for an update.  Dmitri is off to a good start, but he needs to work for Sasha some more.  Also a little competition wouldn't hurt because Dmitri thinks he's the shit...which he is   :) but, Sasha is great too and he needs to prove himself to her.  Maybe Carter will try to fight for her too???  Anyway, I'm glad he's being sweet, attentive and taking things slow.  Sasha is in a pretty good place as far as growing up and feeling more confident.  Dmitri has to understand she's changed and appeciate the woman she'd become and his part in her evolution.  He better come with the big guns and constantly prove he's changed and is in love with her!!!  Love it!!!

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2014 02:32 am



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