Title: Snippet

You're back, yeah!!! I missed this story like a good friend! Just love it. Thanks for the snippet, it was fine. Kennyatta is growing on me. Their convo was fun and kind of sweet. Would love more, more, and soon. Can't wait.

Reviewer: RedHobo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 25 2013 01:13 pm

Title: Snippet

Kenyatta finally decided to give AJ a break.  She has finally admitted that AJ is fine and that she wants him.  Please answer his question in that affirmative and break him off a piece.  Thank you for the long awaited updated it was the sugady!! As are you.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2013 01:58 am

Title: Adrian's POV

Willy Cartier!!!!!

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Date: July 24 2013 06:35 pm

Title: Kisses and Shouts

Trash. you say? I beg to differ. What are you smoking that makes you think this isn't a really good chapter? We might need to get you to rehab. Gurl, this was so good that I re-read it. :)

I'm really liking Adrian. He is so bad to mess with Io like that. And AJ and Kenyatta are likeable as well. It'll be interesting to see how she will deal with his past and what he's into now.

I want some more "trash".

Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 23 2013 05:35 am

Title: Kisses and Shouts

It wasn't that  bad. So now we know that Adrian made his move and Io ain't handling it well.  See AJ with Gianni his daughter has softened Kenyatta but what is her issue?  I can't figure out what you didn't like about this chapter, it  I liked it.  Do  you think that you are rushing the story?   I think that your pacing is great.  I would like to see more growth in AJ, he's a father of toddler who needs him.  He can't just disappear as Gianna is old enough to ask where her daddy is now.  Adrian is back in his like and could benefit from spending more time with his brother.  Maybe Kenyatta would be good for him as long as he completely honest with about his life style.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 22 2013 11:52 pm

Title: Kisses and Shouts

Good chapter, not trash at all! Still one of my favorites! If anything maybe it was a little frustrating 'cause it goes a little slow, it feels like nothing much happened. It would be great to have some more development between the two brothers: it looks like they hanvent' really talked to each other, to try and build a relationship of some sort. Also, though the kiss was hot, Adriian and Iolanthe haven't really discussed much, it would be kind of disappointing if the thing between them was just a pure sexual drive, especially if it creates trouble with AJ (please, please, no boring triangle angst!!). And what is it with that girl Kenyatta? Loved her little attitude before, but this chapter she was really annoying. Thanks and keep up the good work.

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Date: July 22 2013 11:07 pm

Title: No More Strange Ceilings

Enjoyig this read, thanks!

Reviewer: IRJunkie Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 10 2013 01:25 am

Title: No More Strange Ceilings

Love the writing, love the story, love the characters! Hope the Babichev brothers could catch a break and some loving from sweet Iolanthe and attitude girl Kenyatta ;) Would love to get more info on those two girls by the way, their own background and POV on the brothers should be interesting. AJ is both a devoted father and quite irresponsible some time: I like that is is still very much a teenager who likes to pary and fuck, and at the same times he manages to provide for his family and is good at school. It makes him complex and real, love it! And Adrian sure has some work to do to go back to the world: his journey should be interesting. Little Gianna is a trip! Can't wait for the next chapters and more developments...Thanks a lot SaraiDanielle

Reviewer: RedHobo Signed [Report This]
Date: July 10 2013 12:57 am

Title: So We Meet Again

I hope that boy is using condoms I would hate for him to get HIV and leave his brother to raise his daughter......

Reviewer: RedMoon Signed [Report This]
Date: July 09 2013 05:59 pm

Title: No More Strange Ceilings

Adrian you can't disappear like that when you are a parent,  you have responsibilities that makes you hiding a bad idea.  Me thinks that he likes him sine Kenyatta but damn she's a bitch!   T-h-e-r-a-p-y is what AJ needs!  Love it!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 09 2013 04:11 pm

Title: Adrian's POV

Haha awe she sooooo cuuuuute!!!! I'm acting like a stranger am I?! Well this is the bomb as always since I love to read not much on reviewing unless I love the story!!! 

For AJ I like number 2 please he so fine!!!! Mmmmmm mmmmm mmm! With them lips and them eyes and that almost goate make me forget the guy who played Thor even tho he sexy as heck!!!! They both are let me dream for a second.......*DIES* It's too much!!!! I'm so stupid ranting right now... Papi can get another baby by me and Adrian with his fine gangsta a** can it from homegirl I know she be goin crazy on his buttocks.

 

im done lawd child I done made a fow outa my dang self lemme pray.... Amen (I actually did pray) ok bi! Buh-I! Bye! (Nsync like so totally rules on that)

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Date: July 05 2013 11:08 am

Title: Adrian's POV

Mowgli is so cute! Can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: kitten84 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 05 2013 06:59 am

Title: Adrian's POV

I can already tell that Mowgli will have Adrain wrapped around her little finger.  I love the first picture of possible AJ's.  I would like to see both AJ and Adrain get therapy to learn to deal with the fall out of how they grew up.  I would love to see AJ settle down with a beautiful sister.  Please!!!  I really want AJ to quit selling his body to survive, Gianna deserves better.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 05 2013 06:00 am

Title: Adrian's POV

That incubator has a lot to answer for. AJ and Adrian both ho'd out for different reasons. Adrian just kills me with his internal dialogue. Io doesn't stand a chance. Gia might be the one to make him feel again. Adrian is involved in some very risky behaviour. I hope he can settle down.

Loving this story, although some of it is hard to read. I must admit that I skipped over the part where that criminal had AJ. I'm squeamish.

Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 05 2013 05:36 am

Title: So We Meet Again

loving your story. I love Giannia. she so damn cute. are you going to put a cast pic of her?

Reviewer: Treale Signed [Report This]
Date: July 05 2013 03:43 am

Title: Welcome Home

How do you pronounce Iolanthe's name?



Author's Response:

It's pronounced ee-oh-lan-thee(like theodore). I hope it makes sense!

Reviewer: chan4321 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 02 2013 07:21 am

Title: 4 Months Later

Wow. I read the first chapter and debated whether I would continue with this story. I was just so horrified by their evil mother. But I really want to see if these young men can overcome the insurmountable odds that they face. This is a very good story just more gritty than I normally read but Im in it for the long haul.



Author's Response:

Do it! Keep reading! i totally love your stories but i'm never logged in when i read them, which is a total sin. Life is not easy for the Babichev siblings. Hopefully love will make it bearable, ;)

Reviewer: Acdromance Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 01 2013 11:20 pm

Title: Welcome Home

nice update

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Date: July 01 2013 12:05 pm

Title: Welcome Home

Adrian is out and is a bit shell-shocked and emotionally shut down. Both of those young men have through a lot and I hope that can overcome all of the craziness   Adrian and Io?  I was really hoping that AJ would wake up to fabulousness that is Io himself. Great job!



Author's Response:

I swear your reviews fuel my muse girl! Thank you!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 01 2013 05:37 am

Title: Welcome Home

now that we know AJ is not interested in Io--and Adrian is, Io can bring this hard- hearted man into the light and her work will be an uphill batle. Story is getting better--thanks for the update!

Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]
Date: July 01 2013 03:28 am

Title: Welcome Home

loooove it

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Date: July 01 2013 03:25 am

Title: Supporting Cast

It' nice yo finally see what Mama E looked like.  Brett and Derek look so tasty but why are we ignoring Derek's fabulous body? He's abs-a-licious! Will you give cast pictures of AJ, Adrian, Io and Gianni? 



Author's Response:

I'll try, but i'll have to look real hard. Because in my mind, they don't have full faces and bodies, just features. So i'd probably have to take body parts from various google pics or facity to get a better image. I swear I'll try though!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: June 28 2013 03:16 pm

Title: 4 Months Later

Wow, if this story was true, it would be a damming good movie! My heart Cry's out for those children. Too bad Mama Estelle had to die! You could clearly see she loved those children! Any how, this story has held my attention from the first chapter to the last.

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 27 2013 06:08 am

Title: 4 Months Later

Wow, if this story was true, it would be a damming good movie! My heart Cry's out for those children. Too bad Mama Estelle had to die! You could clearly see she loved those children! Any how, this story has held my attention from the first chapter to the last.

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 27 2013 06:07 am

Title: Get It Right

Wow ok now I understand him more I dont know how I missed this chapter

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Date: June 26 2013 01:52 pm



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