Very intriguing. Will you be returning to storyline?
Author's Response:
Glad you think so! And perhaps, I had big plans for this story but then my muse disappeared like a little bitch lol. What I really want to do is some heavy editing and possibly repost it so keep an eye out, maybe in a couple months.
Reviewer: ErisJade Signed
[Report This]Date: May 23 2016 08:27 pm
I can't wait to read your next update.
Reviewer: simplydijah Signed [Report This]Date: November 15 2014 04:41 am
Where's an update?! I was looking forward to the progression of the characters in this story :/
Reviewer: Laniej Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 23 2014 11:51 pm
I LOVE IT!!!! Hashtag introvert problems lol. I so get it! She's like me on so many levels. I remember locking eyes with this hot guy and full out panicking mentally before looking away and pretending it didn't happen. Unfortunately nothing came of it, le sigh. But yea, I'm always staring off into space and then ending up locking eyes with someone random, usually a guy, which leads to awkwardness and the like. So I'm so with this chick.
Reviewer: Bajerie Signed [Report This]Date: July 07 2013 07:48 pm
loving this story more soon can u add pic
Reviewer: faye Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 07 2013 02:57 pm
Im liking it thus far. Cant wait to read more!!
Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]Date: July 06 2013 07:27 pm
Oh...I'm SO GLAD you let Acacia lash out at that white chick! It wasn't too harsh but enough to shut her a** up, lol. Love it when shy, introverted chicks who avoid conflicts give people a piece of their mind...people get all shocked. I can't wait to see where this goes...I just read your disclaimer that this is a crime/suspense drama and wow...as I was reading this story I never would have thought it'd go in that direction. But, that makes it all the more interesting as it not going to be the cookie cutter quiet insecure girl meets and ultimately ends up with handsome bad boy and live happily ever. I take it this story will be told from Acacia's point of view...would love to see what the Russian hottie is thinking. He's quite mysterious.
Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed [Report This]Date: July 06 2013 05:24 pm
Glad she told off that girl! Keep it coming. Good stuff!
Reviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 06 2013 11:49 am
I can really relate to the main character in the storie because I've always had a hard time standing up for myself and College can be just as bad as high school for some people so I like how you described the situations when acacia felt like she wasn't good enough because everyone has those moments.
Reviewer: rthom13 Signed [Report This]Date: July 06 2013 11:00 am
We just got a glimpse of Acaia. There she is. And fiery too. Cas will be bowled over once she comes outta hiding.
Didn't she tell that git where to get off. Charlene, if you didn't know, that's what we call a read.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 06 2013 10:12 am
I love, love this story..Your characters come cross as real people and I love that she stood up to that cow.
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: July 06 2013 08:20 am
I'm loving this story so far!! I can see the chemistry between Acacia and Casmir and its simmering, can't wait until it starts to boil!
Thanks for sharing your story!
Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 06 2013 07:50 am
Really like the start.I already love Acacia....Looking forward to the nxt update.
Reviewer: zoe zoey Signed [Report This]Date: July 05 2013 02:24 pm
I am lovin' this story. Keep up the good work.
Reviewer: Miku Signed [Report This]Date: July 04 2013 11:53 pm
looking forward to reading more
Reviewer: sandradee Signed [Report This]Date: July 04 2013 08:57 pm
I really enjoyed these first two chapters. Acacia is already worming her way into my heart. Nobody seems to understand the dynamics of being an introvert but introverts.
Anyway. 2 chapters? In a 24 hour period? Keep it up and we'll be used to you spoiling us! Ahahaha.
Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: bhvana Signed [Report This]Date: July 04 2013 02:21 pm
Fantastic start! Your writing very nicely and it seemed like I could almost see everything unfold. This girl is quite hilarious! Lol I was cracking up when she said I smell a scandal. It was nice to read her internal thoughts since she's so shy. That intense stare was so hot! There's just something about a sexy Russian... This is going to be so good. Please update soon! :)
-p2p-
Reviewer: partial2passion Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 04 2013 01:22 pm
I love your story, the progression of the female lead will grow but I love beginning great job
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: July 04 2013 08:19 am
Please don't let her stalk this Cassanova. Her character is funny, though, and a size 14-16 ain't bad---something for him to hang onto and for her to fall back on when she gets sick.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: July 04 2013 08:13 am
Fantastic start! Can't wait to read more!!
Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 04 2013 06:31 am
wow don't know what to say about this girl
Reviewer: kiavicmcp Signed [Report This]Date: July 04 2013 06:04 am
I like it.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 04 2013 05:34 am
I like it so far.
Reviewer: Acdromance Signed
[Report This]Date: July 04 2013 05:14 am
Good start! Can't wait to read more :)
Reviewer: kitten84 Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 04 2013 04:46 am