I'm already in love with this story💓 I have it tracked so I don't miss the next updat! Great work!👏
Author's Response:
Thank you! I am glad that you are enjoying the story!😄
Reviewer: lwxie Signed [Report This]Date: November 25 2014 11:41 pm
Sheila stole her father away from her mother and is now suffering from cancer, well talk about karma!! How old was Minnie when all of the went down? Wish that I could empathized with Sheila, but you wrecked a family! Suffer in silence heifer!!
Author's Response:
I know! Karma is truly a B. I am glad that you are enjoying this.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
[Report This]Date: November 25 2014 02:55 pm
Why is Minnie so afraid to get to know Kyle? You just answered my question anout the step-mother, thank you. Does her father even care the his wife isn't treating his baby girl right? Or is he blind to his wife's short comings? So good!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: November 25 2014 02:47 pm
So Kyle is plotting with her best friend to get her attention, I love it!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: November 25 2014 02:29 pm
Awesome sauce!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: November 25 2014 02:27 pm
This is cute so please continue! Is Minnie's father rich? Why did they move from Georgia? Where is her biological mother? Is the grandmother you referred to her paternal or maternal grandparent? Is her father's wife good to Minnie? I look forward to all of my questions being answered, that is if you choose to continue with this story? Happy Thanksgiving! !
Author's Response:
So, I can't anwser all of these, because some will be revealed in the plot, but I'll anwser a few.
- Yes, Minnie's father is rich.
- And she is talking about her maternal grandparent.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: November 25 2014 02:22 pm
I'm confused. Don't Kyle and Minnie already know each other. This seems to play out as if they have never exchanged names. If you work with someone for 2 weeks even if you don't hold conversation everyday I would think names would have been exchanged. Or maybe I missued something and need to read this over again.
Author's Response:
Sorry I did not make this clear, but that was a flash back to Kyle's first time meeting Minnie. Which was two months before he started working with her. and for future reference, all of the interludes are flashbacks.
Reviewer: CrimsonBlaze Signed [Report This]Date: November 06 2014 12:28 pm
Cute! Continue :)
Reviewer: Mel Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 04 2014 09:31 pm
You change tenses a lot and it's very distracting. I like the story so far. Maybe less environment description and more character interactions would help it progress though.
Reviewer: Ashash Signed
[Report This]Date: April 27 2014 10:17 am
I LOVE IT
Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed [Report This]Date: April 27 2014 03:43 am
Great chapter I love both of the character. ...
Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed [Report This]Date: April 27 2014 02:14 am
Omg, I Love it. UPDATE!!!
Author's Response:
Darling I have already update, please do enjoy!
Reviewer: Ayoo_Joi Signed [Report This]Date: July 08 2013 01:10 am
I love it! You have to update please I'm begging you!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the feedback and I plan to update today or tomorrow.
Reviewer: brookedoe Signed [Report This]Date: July 07 2013 06:33 am
Your imagery is so vivid! I love it
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and the feedback!
Reviewer: ChristinaElizabeth Signed [Report This]Date: July 07 2013 04:14 am
I think thats the first time I've ever read a chapter with no dialouge...was that on purpose?
You give great character description it's very spaced and leaving enough out for the reader to make their own implications whether it be height or skin tone, it's nice. Thank you!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for you feed back! And yes I didn't add dialouge for a reason.
Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed [Report This]Date: July 07 2013 04:06 am